Great story!

Despite a few grammatical and punctuation errors, I enjoyed the first two chapters of this fic. I also love evil, bad Spike.

Which is why it pains me to say that you sort of lost me with this last chapter. I like that he turned her, but some of your word usage turned me off and the hot gave way to giggles with sentences like...

He settled between Buffy’s parted thighs, as he cock throbbed at her molten entrance.

and

Due to his extreme size, Spike felt the muscles of her hymen at the tip of his cock, before he was half way into her quim. Spike’s eyes slammed shut at the silken lava that surrounded his cock. Pure heaven.

I mean this in the sincerest way possible, but I think you would benefit from having a beta reader. One who is knowledgeable in many areas, not just punctuation and grammar. Or a quick google search on hymens at the very least.

Please take this review in the spirit that it was intended. Not to make you feel bad. It's meant as real constructive criticism.

Author's Response: Sorry that you feet that way. I do respect your opinions. I feel that my misconception that one's hymen is inside the vagina is not uncommon. I did fix it...thank you for your information. In addition, if you would like to beta my story for the grammatical and punctional errors you can do so. If you do, I will give you credit for being the beta of the story

Very interesting start. Like how they met. :)

holy shit!! totally awesome story!! i love evil spike esp when he can get innocent buffy!! great story and nice daddy add in. keep it coming

Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! debating a follow-up story.....mmmmm maybe?

This is really different! I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to write something completely different than my typical stories.....I'm glad you felt that it worked!

nice. interesting. i'm always up to see people's take on evil buffy and spike. i liked it a lot. good job

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! There isn't a lot of evil Buffy and Spike......I enjoyed writing this! I'm glad you liked reading it!

What a way to go! I liked how you paid tribute to the anniversary of Woodstock, even though they never made it there...yet...(given the chance of Spike or Woodstock, I can tell you what I would choose.)
I enjoyed that immensely, consider it a job very well done.


Author's Response: thanks! most of my stories are sweet even though a little of Spike's wild side shows. this time I though "what the hell" and wrote him completely evil!