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Date: 12/15/2009 - 10:29 pm Title: A Slave To A Call That Once Was Nothingness

Enjoyed! Looking forward to more!

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Date: 12/15/2009 - 09:50 pm Title: A Slave To A Call That Once Was Nothingness

Okay...I'm hooked. This is a twist I definitely never heard or read of before. Keep it up!

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Date: 12/15/2009 - 07:08 pm Title: A Slave To A Call That Once Was Nothingness

Mmmm first time Drusilla is mentioned. It's a bit inconvenient to have a fiancee and be bound to another woman. No wonder that Buffy didn't take the news well she must think Spike is lying. Was Drusilla one of the things he had to give up? Sounds like that.
Well Buffy wasn't pleased when she ran off to Riley.
But good to see an update.

Reviewer: angelhallic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2009 - 06:40 pm Title: A Slave To A Call That Once Was Nothingness

I really like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I think that you've done a good job so far in explaining your "Universe."

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2009 - 05:18 pm Title: A Slave To A Call That Once Was Nothingness

Loved the update!

Reviewer: Nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2009 - 12:08 pm Title: A Slave To A Call That Once Was Nothingness

Good to see another chapter of this fic. It's a very interesting premise. I can see that the relationship between them is going to "one step forward, two steps back".
Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2009 - 10:03 am Title: A Slave To A Call That Once Was Nothingness

Gave it up for Buffy.. duty. How sad. But I see a maybe there..

Enjoyed.

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Date: 11/03/2009 - 11:22 pm Title: The Master Of This Town

Not liking this Spike too much! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2009 - 08:23 am Title: The Master Of This Town

Loved this chapter. Their motivations and contrasts are made clear and ooh sparkage, well, more of the despise each other variety, but definite heat. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2009 - 07:29 am Title: There Are Always Choices

oh man this is totally intriguing...loving the au....lookibng forward to more

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 09:41 pm Title: The Master Of This Town

I hadn't thought of how much Spike (William) lost becoming a vampire; he's really bitter to be paired of with Buffy.
Hope it won't get too dark.

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 06:03 pm Title: The Master Of This Town

Great update. Very interesting.

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Date: 11/02/2009 - 09:38 am Title: The Master Of This Town

Both trapped by Duty and hating each other ...

Waiting to see where the story goes..

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 05:52 am Title: The Master Of This Town

Sounds like the arranged pairing has both parties feeling used and betrayed, with a little nudge, maybe they can see beyond their predicament to start "dating". Seems rather cold to say, get groiny and produce a child without the wooing and seduction. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 05:08 am Title: The Master Of This Town

God I hope Buffy tells Giles to go to hell. lol. Again, shudder at her and Riley together, but there's not a girl in the world who's going to repsond to 'go lose your virginity to a creature you hate' very kindly. Especially from their father figure.
I'm gonna guess that none of the Scoobies know why Spike is there. I'm sure that if they knew that Spike was there to knock Buffy up, they might not be so kind to him. Maybe it's just me, but if my friend was in this situtaion, I'd be pulling out the stakes. lol
I'm hoping you don't get to the sex anytime soon. As much as I love Spuffy sex, having it right away in this story, I think, might be rushing it a bit. Just my opinion of course. You as the author does know best!
Can't wait for more!
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 04:24 am Title: The Master Of This Town

"Buffy, it is imperative that you have hot, hate-filled sex with Spike."

Buffy's outraged huff and stamping of feet interrupted her watcher's furious polishing of his glasses. "But Giles, I betray Riley's impassioned non-sexual love for me if I mate with Spike."

"I'm really sorry, Buffy, but TPTB and isabelle command it."

"Fine. But I will deny his sinister attraction until I am blue in the face" (and fade to black)

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I know you're going to make this a dark fic, but that's pretty much where my mind went @ Giles' words. I am not making fun at all; I am seriously digging the Season 2 venomous hatred Spike has for teeny-bopper Buffy. Things did not get interesting until Buffy had a chance to grow from her adolescent pain & from the trauma of being the slayer.

Spike's brutal honesty a la Lover's Walk will make their destined pairing more meaningful when they fall. It's going to be a tough row to hoe to watch the two "mates" fight, snark, and cultivate any love.

So, are all slayer mates pre-destined? Hank included? Additionally, are all slayer children the only potentials?

You've got me clammoring for more!

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 03:58 am Title: There Are Always Choices

This is so different and makes me intrigued. Hank, a vampire? Joyce, a slayer? William a watcher? I haven't been this excited in a fic for a long time.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2009 - 08:46 pm Title: There Are Always Choices

I'm hooked! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2009 - 06:01 am Title: There Are Always Choices

Poor Buffy. That is so horrible. Not that I like her with Riley or anything, but what a terrible situation. I believe saying it's totally not fair would be an under statement. Giles so should have told her before hand.
Sucks on Spike's end of the spectrum too of course, but I feel so much more for Buffy.
Love the story and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Akela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 10:14 pm Title: There Are Always Choices

Please update asap, this is going to be awesome

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Date: 10/29/2009 - 09:21 pm Title: There Are Always Choices

Oh I like the twist (To each generation a slayer's born). It's a totally different way to become a slayer. But not a better one if you'll loose your mother this way; poor Buffy. It sounds indeed as if someone took her away (killed her?).
So the human William will become a vampire to be mated with the Slayer; really a clever twist.
Looking definitely forward to more.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 07:49 pm Title: There Are Always Choices

I'm totally hooked! One chapter and I'm all the way in. Can't wait to see where this story is headed. :-)

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 06:22 pm Title: There Are Always Choices

Looks interesting more please

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 03:53 pm Title: There Are Always Choices

Very interesting concept. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Terri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 02:56 pm Title: There Are Always Choices

This is different from anything I have read before and I'm really interested to see where it goes. Please keep going.

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