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Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2010 - 08:30 pm Title: The Young Victorian Wife

Glad to see an update of this!
Interested to see what happens when preggers Buffy has to return to the present day, assuming it's the same Buffy...

Author's Response: Thank you. She still has a few more months but yes that will be the case.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2010 - 07:13 pm Title: The Young Victorian Wife

Good to see an update. :)
Anne wants to be a grandmother, huh?
Oh yeah, and it seems Elisabeth is already pregnant.
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Thank you and yes. Guess who the multi-colored pastel blanket is for!

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Date: 09/23/2010 - 05:03 am Title: Mischief in Malaga

Lovely. Glad all he needs is her to stand by him. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. It will come into play later in the story as well

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Date: 09/22/2010 - 04:50 am Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Love Anne. Glad she sees straight thru Rose. And I love William's attitude. Lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you. When William lets loose, Spike slips through

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2010 - 04:29 am Title: Barefoot in the Park

"In that moment, she didn’t just crack William’s dam of decorum. She obliterated it. " Thank god. I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you. In my Dramione folks like some of my one-liners.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2010 - 04:09 am Title: Peonies and Parasols

Love the fact they've finally learned each other's identities. Love how they were pining away for each other the other night, too. Fate can be so fun sometimes.

Author's Response: Thank you and welcome new reader. YOu made my morning.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 05:27 pm Title: Mischief in Malaga

That was a long drive (journey) till they arrived their destination.
I liked the honeymoon - and the gifts from William. That was really generous if you count the times they live in. They are good for one another.

Author's Response: Thank you for the positive thoughts. I did a bit of research on the travel since we're so used to getting places quickly nowadays. The money part was also researched. It about 50K now and adding 1000 per month. So cool you saw that.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 08:09 am Title: Mischief in Malaga

It was a nice honeymoon and the presents where good choices from him. But soon she will have to return to her real life.

Author's Response: That is true but she does have a few months left in merry old England. The question will be how does she like her normal day to day. Thank you for the positive review.

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 03:31 am Title: Mischief in Malaga

very sweet, but not too much. of course, i'm waiting for the shoe to drop ... looking forward tomore!

Author's Response: Thank you much. Your positive comments help more than you realize.

Reviewer: The banner is a lie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 02:50 am Title: Mischief in Malaga

Well at least you took it down. But admitting your mistake, rather than continuing to delete my comments would have been better. I wonder if it is only images you plagiarise? Do you steal your words too?

Author's Response: Until now, I thought that unaltered images from movies and whatnot were public domain unless they were used to sell a product for profit. I guess I was wrong. I can admit that so I took the image down. I APOLOGIZE if I have offended. For months, I have tried to get a banner made but to know avail. On HPFF, several folks have made banners for me and I have given credit for each. When possible and with their permission, I have even named minor characters after them in some of the stories as a thank you. Again, I apologize and I have taken it down. What more do you want? Would you like me to delete the story as well? I do NOT steal words. This story is my own. You can google. Since I have admitted my mistake and apologized for it, can you apologize for infering that I stole words? As for taking your comments down, the RL issues that I have are to do with poor liver health. I experience lethargy and depression from it and have been advised to stay in a “positive mindset” while I am treated. Reading hateful comments does NOT help. However, I will leave this up.

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 01:40 am Title: Mischief in Malaga

Beautiful as well as the picture; I can' t wait for the next chapter but I'm also getting worried for when this perfection will end since it was Buffy's vacation.

Author's Response: Thank you. Technically, she has about five more months but only a couple of weeks of honeymoon with yummy William who because of his fights has a Spike'licious body.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 - 06:39 pm Title: The Wedding Night

So thoughtful (considerate) of William to be so careful with Buffy, he made it easier for her.
Good chapter, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you. Next is their honeymoon in Malaga where things get more intense.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 - 01:22 pm Title: The Wedding Night

It was very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 - 05:08 am Title: The Wedding Night

I love how romantic you made the wedding night, it was about their love for each other and how their bodies solidified their union. The tender way that William deflowered Elizabeth showed just how much he cared for her and Elizabeth's innocent actions and emotions were endearing. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you. That's exactly what I wanted to portray. Later, yes, there will be some good old fashioned scromp fests but the wedding night/deflowering had to be romance.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2010 - 04:03 pm Title: A Victorian Wedding

Wow, they are busy to keep things well like small piece of bread, some cloth, a piece of wood, and a single pound to ensure they would always have food, clothes, shelter, and money for their future. That's a lot they have to think of. Mrs. Sweeney was very thoughtful, points for her.
Yes, I enjoyed the wedding, the descriptions a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you. Description was one of those things that I was weak on when I first started writing. Mrs. Sweeney represents the epitomy of a mid-wife. More of her to come (hint).

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2010 - 11:09 am Title: A Victorian Wedding

It's really nice to read about the traditions.

Author's Response: thank and I hope you like Malaga.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2010 - 01:01 am Title: A Victorian Wedding

I really enjoyed the traditions, and I still stick by Justin as it's what I think of him, even though Keegan sounds 'smaller' somehow.
And bring on the honeymoon, and don't spare the NC-17! Loving it!

Author's Response: Thank you. Though I knew of many of the traditions, I never knew the meaning behind them. Who knows it may be AO. I think I'll ask Pari.

Reviewer: KTC10 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2010 - 11:26 pm Title: A Victorian Christmas

I really enjoy this story so far! Can't wait for the wedding night, and then Elisabeth telling Jane about it. =]
I just thought I'd let you know that the Latin quote "Latin is the language of scholars while Gaelic is the language of hooligans." could be better written as "Latin est lingua scholasticorum dum Gaelic est lingua verberonum." Other than that, the chapter was amazing!
And to answer your question: Keegan!


Author's Response: Thank you and welcome new reader. I will change that. I used an online translator. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2010 - 08:33 pm Title: A Victorian Christmas

I liked to read about the traditions and omens. I prefer Justin.

Author's Response: Thank you and be ready for explanations of many wedding myths.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2010 - 09:31 pm Title: A Victorian Christmas

Oh naughty William, using glue. *gg*
Buffy (Elisabeth) with a wedding fever is cute, though.
Lovely Christmas chapter. Regarding the names, I don't mind Justin or Keegan. Justin sounds more English. I wouldn't mind if you kept it.

Author's Response: Thank you. That's how I saw them as just pranking each other. Justin brings out a playful side to William. Keegan vs. Justin - think of a smaller person.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2010 - 09:08 pm Title: A Victorian Christmas

So happy to see another chapter of this, and I can't wait for the wedding ;-), although I'm worried Sid's gonna make an appearance before then.
As for the names, Keegan is more Irish, but I'm personally used to Justin, so the use of it through me a little.
Please don't make us wait too long for an update...!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm alread on the wedding chapter. With all the traditions, its almost writing itself. Keegan vs Justin, think of a much tinier person. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 - 11:29 pm Title: Something Warlock This Way Comes

I usually never review after just the first chapter but this chapter has reeled me in, am looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you and welcome new reader. Please let me know what you think of the next chapters. Reviews are appreciated.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2010 - 10:56 am Title: Yule Tidings

I love the way you've subtly woven the Slayer mythos into William and Elisabeth's world through Ezra. I hope Wellington and Cecily get caught out in their machinations....

Author's Response: Thank you. Ezra was someone I came up with well after I outlined the story and upon a re-viewing of Tombstone.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2010 - 06:11 pm Title: Yule Tidings

Ezra's two friends sure have convince the council. *ggg*
The ball went well, that's good. But the new plans that Cecily and Wellington have are not so good. Hopefully the trust between Elisabeth and William is too strong for the evil plan.

Author's Response: Thank you. That idea came to me when I looked up guns found in the old west. The evil plan will play out in the Whedon universe.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2010 - 05:53 am Title: Yule Tidings

Gah! Strawberry pebbles have the young gents (as Ezra would put it acting so highfalutin' it would have brought tears to a glass eye. Wellington and Cecily are so low they could crawl under a snake's belly. I just hope that William and Elizabeth slap them so hard that when they quit rollin' their clothes will be outta style! Anyhow, Rose's clueless hints on how Elizabeth could do better than William just show that if she had bird brains she'd fly backwards! Look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you. Very Texan indeed. Those are some clever sayings. I love 'em all. Hope you liked how Ezra took care of the Watchers. A friend from TX told me about how some areas have rattle snakes under every rock. Agreed on all matters.

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