Date: 04/13/2010 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
sounds like an interesting story, can't wait to read more :)
Date: 04/13/2010 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1
humn interesting start! definitely want more!! and i agree not being able to know if ur hairs messed up would def suck. and just curious how old in Dawn? sorry if i missed it when reading. thanks
Author's Response: You didn't miss it, I don't mention her age until the next chapter. She's only two here, I can handle that better than a teenage Dawn...lol! Thanks for reading=)
Date: 04/13/2010 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1
This fic is going in my fav's list so i know when you update which i hope will be very soon lol, great start i can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 04/12/2010 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the start of this story, and can't wait to read more.
Date: 04/12/2010 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh new story? I love the twist.
And a pretty banner you have there. :)
Good start.
Date: 04/12/2010 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more
Date: 04/12/2010 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm loving this so far, it's really sweet.
Date: 04/12/2010 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked the chapter, and I hope that you update as soon as you can.