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Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2010 - 12:40 pm Title: Intimidation

oh dear... poor Buffy... now the nasty Angel came along to threat her as if she wasn't scared enough by not knowing what will happen to her..
i wonder what Spike has to say about this..
thanx for the update, wanna read some more... :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'll do my best!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2010 - 04:39 am Title: Intimidation

That bastard. Love how he shows how very different he is from Spike. Even though she got a great chance to reflect on Spike and how he's treated her, Angelus really has thrown out the idea that she is just a liability. Hope Spike can get to her. Hope Spike has a plan on how to deal with all of this. Hope the next update is soon. :)

Author's Response: Hopefully the next will be up soon because its been really fun to write I hope I can get it done...however I am away the rest of this week so the weekend at the earliest I'm afraid!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2010 - 02:52 am Title: Intimidation

Really riveting!! Angsty as hell but I loved it. Buffy handled herself pretty well I must say. I can see Angel is a real prick in this story. I look forward to seeing what Spike has to say when he finds out. I am sure Buffy is going to be scared as hell. I am sure all she can think of is the money date and finding out when that is. Great job. I would say the best chapter yet but Spike was not in this one. LOL...

Author's Response: Lol I did have Spike coming home at the end until the Chapter got too long, so thats where the next Chapter will start...thank you for the review!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 03:46 pm Title: Surprises

This tantrum is almost overdue for Buffy and I'm surprised Spike didn't see it coming. But I guess he hasn't done a lot of kidnapping. And while I see that Spike is trying to do for her as much as he can, being kind to her while she's captive is a bit hard to reconcile, especially on a birthday.

I'm very curious what Spike's plans could be at this point. He does seem like he's made a nice cage for his pretty bird and has no other plans at this point, but I wonder, especially since we are only seeing it from Buffy's POV.

Looking forward to more and who this new character is.

Author's Response: Thank you, thats the reason its in Buffy's point of view, because it lends to Spike's mystery and puts you guys in her place more...so I'm glad you're thinking all those things, means I'm doing something right! And as for the character...it might be someone new...or it might be someone we've met before ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 03:10 pm Title: Surprises

Keeping Buffy prisoner is weighting down both on Spike and on Buffy. Not sure how long that will go well. The try to give Buffy something on her birthday (because of his bad conscience) showed it can't go on this way.
What a mess....

Author's Response: Indeed, in fact in a few Chapters time Buffy will say exactly that, and Spike will start to listen...and thats when their dynamic will start to evolve differently...hope you'll still be reading then! Thanx for the review!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 03:31 am Title: Surprises

This story just keeps getting more and more interesting. I can not wait to see what happens when the next character shows up. The Happy fucking birthday was priceless. OMG. What a pair. Thanks for the update. I was just thinking about this story.

Author's Response: Thankyou for the review! I've not got any email alerts about reviews for this Chapter for some reason and I was so depressed, I thought no one had reviewed it, then I came on and saw all the lovely reviews, I'm a happy bunny!

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 02:28 am Title: Surprises

Hello, Spike, YOU ARE HOLDING HER AGAINST HER WILL!!!!!!!!! What do you expect her to do, jump for joy cause you baked her a birthday cake

Author's Response: Lol glad you can see Buffy's side...Spike's just got a temper on him, and Buffy's standing in his way of an easy life, he thinks she should just deal with the situation and except it...he's being an idiot! I love writing frustrated Buffy!

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 - 02:11 pm Title: Surprises

I liked the chapter. I hope that you try to update as soon as you can, because I want to read more.

Author's Response: Thankyou! Stayed up writing and editing all last night so the next two Chapters are almost done!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 - 03:03 am Title: Surprises

enjoyed, thanks for the update

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: Ellie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 - 01:55 am Title: Surprises

Finally! I've been dying for an update. this story is very well written and you've got me hooked. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thats awesome! Glad I've got you hooked! There will be more soon, I've got the muse right now so I'm writing a fair bit!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2010 - 11:55 pm Title: Surprises

oh my... i think i would have gone crazy too in her position. he kidnaps her and then brings her cake like it's just another normal day for her and not a prison. i mean.. he wants her to be comfortable i guess but... i swear i would have snapped too =) and i won't even mention the part where she has no window or other connection to the outside world but him..and that just 3 times per day... she's good =)
can't wait to see who the 3rd player is gonna be =)

Author's Response: Thankyou! Most people tend to be biased and not like stropy Buffy in stories regardless of why she is throwing a tantrum. I'm pleased everyone is seeng Buffy's side, because she is in the right. Spike is just stuck in a situation he doesn't want to be in, he doesn't know what to do, all he knows is that if Buffy plays along it'll be easier for him and so he expects her to do just that...update soon! Things get worse for Buffy!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2010 - 02:36 pm Title: Acceptance

so now she has her own room in that house... her stay there is planned to be a long one, huh? :)
loved reading it..

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you keep reading it! More soon :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2010 - 02:26 pm Title: Acceptance

So Spike won't let Buffy go. I think she'd rather have that instead of a new bedroom. Still a prisoner.
Looking forward how you'll get her out / their reactions to the change.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Next Chapter will be up soon, and its got a lot more fire in it than this Chapter...

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2010 - 05:03 pm Title: Acceptance

I have been anxiously awaiting your update. Great chapter. I can't wait to see where this is leading. I love a story that is unforgettable and this one is. Thanks so much for sharing. I love it.

Author's Response: Wow I'm overwhelmed by the reviews on this Chapter, I can't wait until it gets more Spuffy to see people's reactions when its more love-centric...I hope everyone will continue to enjoy reading it as much as I love writing it :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2010 - 04:31 pm Title: Acceptance

Excellent chapter.This Buffy is really looking at the man - looking into him and despite her circumstances what she sees may not make her either comfortable or in the know, but it doesn't send her spiralling into panic, either. He is more kind than cruel and yet she still remains locked up ....... now in an attic. Days he spent fixing it up. For Buffy. Plus night-light. He'd left the door open in the basement to yield some light into the darkness that she feared ......

Certainly the right direction. I love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thats a lovely thing to hear, I'm glad this story seems to be so well received thus far :)

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2010 - 01:16 pm Title: Acceptance

Love all the detail - please don't wait to post more...Thanks! Good luck with the job hunt.

Author's Response: Thankyou!, Hopefully it won't be long 'til you get more! :)

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2010 - 12:49 pm Title: Acceptance

I liked the chapter. When will we see Buffy and Spike together together. Please try to update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: It'll be a while because I don't believe in rushing things, if this were reality theres no way anyone would move this fast, but I want to make it a little bit believable... People who don't want to know don't read this, but for you I can tell you because I have a detailed plan of the story, and give me room to alter it, but as it is now, there will be mild Spuffy starting from Chapter 8, and it'll get more serious in Chapter 11 :) Thanx for reading! Hope you can wait that long!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2010 - 05:56 am Title: Acceptance

Very interesting turn of events. I figured Spike was planning something, but was very curious as to what it all was. Obviously finding a better way to keep Buffy is the better idea, but I also wonder what else he could have planned. I'm all with Buffy's curiosity and her need of human contact overwhelming her other emotions. Spike is a good mystery for her to concentrate on and try to solve. Should be interesting.

I look forward to more and good luck with the job search!

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! Glad to see you're thinking the same way as Buffy...usually I like to go into Spike and Buffy's heads equally, but for this story it was a conscious choice to better describe Buffy's thoughts and keep Spike somewhat of a mystery for her and the reader, so I'm glad you like that!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2010 - 04:24 am Title: Acceptance

Enjoyed. Was excited when I noticed you updated. Awaiting the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thankyou, glad you're reading...I'll try and edit the next Chapter soon, though I'm going to take the next week to focus on writing first drafts of future Chapters (I always feel better that way when I only have editing to do)...

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2010 - 03:05 pm Title: Stripped

Loved reading all the chapters so far and i'm very interested in how things are going to work out in the end. :)
can't wait to read more of this one..

Author's Response: Thankyou so much! Hopefully have a new update very very soon, just need to edit the next Chapter! :)

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2010 - 07:17 am Title: Stripped

I love the power plays going on and I love how Buffy is not a damsel. That last scene was very interesting and I'm, again, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I can't remember if it was on here (probably was a comment on fanfiction net) but someone commented on my Buffy being too meek in the first Chapter...thats just how I expected any normal girl to act when faced with a gun for the first time in her life...but I hoped people would read on once I updated and see meek and mild wasn't the Buffy I was going to write later on after she got over the initial shock, so thankyou for the comment about liking that she isn't a damsel in distress, because I hate wimpy Buffy, and only write it when really necessary :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2010 - 01:58 am Title: Stripped

Very glad u updated. Like it very much. Can't wait to see what happens next. This story is so original. I like a take charge Spike.

Author's Response: Me too, I like that side of Spike so I try to show it when I can (when it fits the story I want to tell), thankyou for reading! :)

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2010 - 10:28 pm Title: Stripped

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next, and how Spike is going to deal with keeping Buffy hostage long term. Please update soon! :)

Author's Response: I'll try my best, hopefully an update will happen in the next few days as I have some spare time :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2010 - 09:46 pm Title: Stripped

Sounds if Buffy is confusing Spike a bit / or her remarks just got him thinking what he has to think of if he keeps her prisoner. After all this wasn't planned in advance. No clue what Spike will do now, but looking forward what it will be. Hope it will end well.

Author's Response: I'll do my best to update this week so you can see his next step...she's made him realise how unprepared he was for her so stay tuned to see how her pushing will make him react! :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2010 - 09:04 pm Title: Stripped

glad things are going better with the beau. Really enjoyed this chapter. Liked how Buffy tried to get him to cave and he didn't, wish Joss' Spike held that firm of a stance on something.

Author's Response: Thankyou :) and yes I wish he had too, I like the firmer side of Spike in my writing, he'll cave now and then, but he's stronger willed than Joss's Spike...

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