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Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 29

Please update!

Reviewer: mila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2011 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 29

Hey, long time no update
anyway... i was wondering, is this story in any way related to the French movie Les Amours Imaginaires ?

Reviewer: Angellia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2011 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 29

This story is great! So moving and different.

Reviewer: Caz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2011 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey... whats up with the long wait, I'm totally missing this story. So you know one of those stories were you do a happy dance every time they are updated, this was one of those for me and now it's not updating :(
Hope everything is well with you...

Author's Response: I can't apologize enough for not updating in so long!!! Unfortunately, real life gets in the way..first I got super busy with school, then I had finals and stuff, then I graduated from college, then I was looking for a job, now I have a job but I kind of hate it, so...I'm gonna try and get back into it really soon, once I get some actual free time. Although, I can't make any promises...I will try!! :)

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2011 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 29

Great chapter, I love all the Buffy and Will fluffiness. I'm still curious about how their long distance relationship is going to work. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Glad you like the fluff, it's been making me feel like I ate too much sugar...Anyway, the story will only be a few more chapters and the sequel will show us how the long distance thing works out (hope that wasn't giving anything away). Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lunna798 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 29

**steps out of Lurkerville**
Just wanted to say that in no way is this story boring. I happen to love long stories but more than that i love great story progression. There is nothing more disappointing then when stories start out with a really great premise but do not follow a natural progression of events. Sometimes I feel like authors rush to the Spuffy too soon or resolve issues too quickly to appease their readers and more often than not it results in forced feeling and leaves me feeling very disappointed. You have not done that at all. I look forward to your updates and I do have to say that the Spike/other warning makes me wince cause i have a feeling it is going to mean trouble. But I am curious how you handle it since you have been doing such a great job so far.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking the story!! I feel the sam way about authors rushing Spuffy and that's exactly what I didn't want to do. As for the Spike/other warning, I should probably take that out for this story, cause I will be ending the story soon (it feels likes it should be in two separate parts) and continuing it in a sequel... the warning is for the sequel. They have some less than happy things in their future...that's all I'll say about that ;) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 29

I hope in the sequel it will be Xander having most of the angst. I know with them being across the country from each other that our Spuffy couple will have their difficulties because I really don't want them to have to go through too much (if any) heartbreak.

Author's Response: I wish I could reassure you about the next one...but all will end well, I promise!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 29

Cute, realistic, very good.

Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 29

They really have nailed the happy, lovey-dovey high school couple. And I love Joyce trying to have the talk with Buffy. I'm impressed she's held out this long. Good for her. Looking forward to more. Angst or not. Update soon.

Author's Response: That's exactly what I was going for with the high school coupleyness! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2011 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 28

Thanks for the update. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 28

wow - didn't see the 'my parents have issues' coming. although, not sure why - he's never mentioned them. but atleast he told her he loves her. but will that be enough for them? and how will be handle being apart? looking forward to the answers ...

Author's Response: answers will come! and i'm planning on ending the story soon and continuing in a sequel. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 28

Sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 28

He actually said it! I wasn't expecting him to say anything. :-) So sweet. I do love their relationship with each other, but of course college is coming so I'm biting my nails in anticipation.

Author's Response: They're definitely in the "teenage dream" phase of their relationship! Glad you liked! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 28

Aww...that was sweet. Thanks for another enjoyable chapter. :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ava Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 07:46 am Title: Chapter 28

So sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 07:03 am Title: Chapter 28

One more mystery out in the open. Glad to see that they are both taking it well, and it's still probably good that she got to meet his mother. Now, we just have to survive the summer. Update soon!

Author's Response: More to come soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter, can't wait to see Buffy's reaction.

Author's Response: Glad you liked! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter 28

Another sweet chapter. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter, very happy with Buffy and Will smoochies, but I'm still worried about their relationship when he has to leave for NY.
I'm really enjoying this story, which means it is impossible for this fic or any sequel to be 'too long'.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like! Leaning toward doing the sequel now. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 27

I think you could cut in half, especially if you have other stuff you need to work on. It seems like it's coming to a natural conclusion. I liked this chapter a lot, it was warm and honest, just like the rest of the story.

Author's Response: I'm definitely leaning toward doing the sequel. I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter 27

enjoyed.. your story and your decision

Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Thank god they finally realized that they were driving each other and everyone else crazy trying to stay platonic. This may crash and burn, but they will at least have a lot more fun getting there. As for continuing or starting a sequel, I'm honestly good with either as long as it continues. They still have a few more hurdles this time around, but I'm glad they're happy. Update soon!

Author's Response: This part of the story feels like it's coming to a close, so I'm leaning toward the sequel now. I'm glad you're enjoying the new developments. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter 27

Hmm, as long as you keep writing as well as you do, I would say it can go either way. I could see how this can become two stories, with new plotlines and everything. I can also see you just making this a jumbo story, it's been done before (and it works).
I love how you made the Spike/Buffy relationship, it's very realtisic.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like! I'm leaning toward making it a sequel now, I think it'll make more sense that way. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2011 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter! I didn't think the story was dragging but I'm everyone appreciates a little action :) Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response: I think I probably felt like it was dragging because I've had less time to write recently...But, I'm glad you don't think so! Thanks for the review!

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