Loved the new chapters they were certainly worth waiting for lol.....cant wait to read the next chapter hopefully it will be posted soon and there is nothing to be nervous about you are a very good writer and this is the best story i have ever read.

Author's Response: Oh My Goddess, thank you SOSOSO much! <3 *huggles!*

I am just catching up to this story and it made me so mad! It is such bull shit that people are not themselves when they're drunk. Drunk lowers peoples inhibitions NOT give them different personality traits. Somebody who loves to laugh and giggle, laugh's even harder. Somebody who is depressed will start crying. And somebody who is hiding violent tendencies will lash out. Violence against a woman is NEVER acceptable, ever. If she was my daughter, I would have gone straight to the police and his parents the 1st time, what the hell is wrong with Joyce! Sorry if I'm a little bit too passionate. I was really enjoying this story until this point.

Author's Response: Life lessons are learned through fictional stories and I'm not saying that violence against women is EVER acceptable, but fictional characters don't always behave correctly just as real people sometimes make mistakes in judgement. And sometimes when confronted with an issue PERSONALLY, we might make decisions that aren't considered acceptable to the outside world. I understand your opinion and I value it, but under the circumstances, I don't see a POINT for Joyce to press charges against Riley. The only thing that would do is bring unnecessary (and an awkward amount of )attention to her daughter and start a ripple effect of drama in the town. Besides, Riley isn't like a psychopath, he is simply a teenager who drinks too much and has anger issues. And as a character, he could be dealing with things in his life and he's coping badly. Again, I am not condoning it, and Joyce didn't either. BUFFY was the one who convinced Joyce not to press charges the first time, and Buffy broke up with Riley the instant he laid a hand on her.

this story is amazing..you are a very good writer and OMG when is the next chapter going to come out i hope its very soon cos your killing me with the timing i check everyday to see this story its one of the stories i read on this site...please post the next chapter or chapters soon like today or tomorrow as I'm so excited to see how the story evolves and this is a great story i mean like its just so good i cant stop thinking about it..all day ill think about it....keep up the fantastic work ;)

Author's Response: OMG thank you SOOOOOO much! you have no idea how happy you just made me! And yes i know my posting is slowing down & I can't tell you how sorry i am for that. You see, I don't have regular schooling and right now, the work has been getting super heavy and it's supposed to stay that way for a while :( so posting will be slowing down (esp after chapt. 14 is posted bcuz iv only written that far) but i PROMISE you I WILL finish this fanfic if it's the last thing I do! and I will try to post as quickly as possible!! <3 thank you 4 the lovely review, darling :) (the next chappie will be out tonight or 2mrw!)

The chemistry between them is intense. Looking forward to see where it leads them.

Loved it :-) Buffy needs to tread on the dark side. And can i have my whipped cream covered spike now? Pretty Please :-P Update soon!

Very glad they have a reason to have to deal with each other. Seems like a perfectly reasonable way for a pair of 17 year olds to act. Update soon!

hey..i love this story its simply great i was just wondering when chapter seven will be out???????

Author's Response: Im rlly glad your enjoying it! :) im gonna post 7 super soon... like within the hour lol :) Thanks 4 the review!

"Oh, he was going to have fun with this one. He wanted to drive her up a wall and then hold her there while he tasted every delectable inch of her." -- And I kind of want him to succeed. Gonna be fireworks when they finally get there, and lots of kicking and screaming. Totally love the dynamic you've created. Update soon!

Seems to be off to a rocky start, but when two are so pulled together, may not really matter what they think they should want. :) Update soon!

It is silly to turn down the help of a beta who can really help your first fic and get readers interested. I cannot read this the way it is written. It definitely turns the reader off.

Author's Response: I understand that betas are always helpful but since this is my FIRST fic I'd like to do it on my own. I'm sorry if you can't read it but if that's true, then you don't have to. But don't get me wrong, I do appreciate the advice. :)

The story sounds interesting, I'll definitely check out more. :)
Happy Christmas to you!

And Re: italics and bold print.
I'm no author so I never uploaded a fic to TSR but in the help section is written:
You may use the following html codes with your story - < b > < i > < u > < center > < img > < a > < hr >.

If you want to know how to: Check this tutorial:
http://druffine.livejournal.com/19901.html
That should help. You just have to remember to close the html tag code again.

Author's Response: I know this response is late but I just wanted to say thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! And also thanks 4 the link for help with the bold and italics but I've kinda just gotten over the whole thing, and since I've already written A LOT I'm just going to do the story without the codes. Thank you, though! :) and I hope you had a great christmas!

Great start! I love your description of the town. Sounds a lot like the place where I grew up. I can't wait to see where you take this.

I'd also like to offer my services as a beta. I can go over your Word documents and insert the proper tags so that your formatting will show up here. Please message me through this site if you want me to help.

Again, great start! Enjoying it so far!

Author's Response: hi! i REALLY appreciate your offer to be a beta! but since this is my first fic id like to just kind of do it on my own. Thank you SO SO SO much 4 the offer though! :)))

Good job :)
You are really good if this is your first fanfic :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter!