[Report This]Date: 05/10/2012 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
hi, i just read up to chapter 20 on EF! i love it!!! and read dreams there too! love it!
Date: 04/23/2012 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter 6
Still reading, still enjoying and looking forward to more.
Date: 04/23/2012 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 6
If only she'd listen more to her little sister, perhaps she'd get over her obsession with Liam. Ass hat. Sorry, do I seem a little less than fond of him. :) And William the nurse maid. He certainly could be my nurse maid any day. Lovely. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04/23/2012 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 6
As always, I am a huge fan of this story. I love how William is such an interesting character!! Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2012 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love the story can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 04/18/2012 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Seems as though someone may fancy "more" more than he thought he would. Poor girl, may be the opportunity needed to open some eyes, and hearts. Looking forward to more. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2012 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 5
i so hope we are on the way to mutual appreciATION time. cause every time i read the name liam i want to punch his face!
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2012 - 03:56 am Title: Chapter 4
I love this story! Please please please update soon, I am hanging on your every word.
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2012 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Such a quick update! As usual, I really enjoyed the characterisations. I think the dash of Bangel is actually very suited to the story at this point in time.
Date: 04/14/2012 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter 4
It always starts out as a bad idea to bring about a good end, and their common spark ends up engulfing them. So curious about Williams ill fated love affair. And very aware of how all his little quirk prove him to be more than just a simple cad. Loved the speedy update. Wouldn't mind another. :) Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2012 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh, I love these regular updates! All the other WIPs I'm following are desperately slow. So thanks. Great dynamic and characters. I love William and Buffy.
Author's Response: I have about 12 chapters more of this already written, so updates will continue to be regular :D Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2012 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really enjoyed this chapter,i adore your Buffy and William so much!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2012 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE this story!!!
Date: 04/13/2012 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 3
Poor William doesn't see himself as the type that get's to have "more." Wonder which one is going to crack first. Is he gonna fall for her, or is she gonna go down first. And all of that considered, who's gonna admit to it first! Gluttons for punishment, those two. Looking forward to the dance. Update soon!
Author's Response: You'll just have to keep reading to find out who caves first ;) Thanks for the feedback!!
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2012 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
love it!! please update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2012 - 08:48 am Title: Chapter 2
They are like a thorny match made in heaven. Cannot wait to see what they get up to baiting each other. Loved it.
Author's Response: There are some fun times ahead :D Thanks for the feedback!!
Date: 04/10/2012 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Plotting and subterfuge and inappropriate intentions, even though they may not realize it yet, and I can hardly wait. Those two were both born to break rules and conventions, and I look forward to it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Ha, yes they were! Thank you for the feedback!!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
VERY EXCITING- THE GAME IS AFOOT! GREAT DIALOG, VERY FRESH
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh, I like this one! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Will do :D Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh yes I like that start. Haven't read a period piece in a long time. Looking forward to more - soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful premise! Loving the characters and LOVE a period piece!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 04/08/2012 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love insufferable cad William! And fiery Buffy. Girl doesn't know what she's capable of... or capable of enjoying. William has a very piqued curiosity. Hope he decides to "help" her. Update soon!
Author's Response: I have a feeling you will like the next chapter, then ;) Thanks for the feedback!!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2012 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start, can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you!! The new chapter should be up early this week :D
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2012 - 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start, and I love the establishment of their characters. Just one thing: I think you should do more research into your story, because the way they speak and act doesn't exactly scream historical fiction. It's kind of a mishmash between modern and olden times, you know? And seeing as this is set in the 1800s, you should adhere strictly to olden times. Anyway, great start so far and looking forward to more. How often will you be updating?
Author's Response: I'll be updating very regularly. I have most of the story written. Thanks for the feedback!
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