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Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2012 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

I gotta admit. It was hott the way Sebastian was trying to thrall Buffy into coming to him and Quinn. I wouldn't mind that, as long as William was invlolved! Maybe a foursome is in the plans? O:-)

Author's Response: No, there will be a lot of things but Buffy being in an "any"some is not in the plans. As you saw in this chapter, William wants her all to himself

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2012 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 8

I adore you so much. That was brilliant. I did imagine some of those things, but I could never enter the talented mind of BBE completely. It was filled with lovely surprises. Quinn is definitely in a thrall. Bad girl was banging Sebastian in the middle of the club.

While I was reading, my living room transformed into the club. I was a creep hiding in the corner and watching from a far. I always get sucked into your chapters. Only you can do that for me.

I'm anxious to read what William has planned for Buffy. Elizabeth is loosing site of her true identity. I think she'll like being Buffy a heck of alot more :-) xx

Author's Response: No, Ms. Sallyntmare, I adore you. You've been a constant supporter of mine and I can't put into words how much this means to me. Yes, Quinn is in deep. As for you a "creep hiding in the corner"...LOL!!!!! I don't think of these people as "creeps". Everyone has their own "thing" and I think it's great when they go for it. As for being sucked into my chapter, I'm beyond flattered. I hope you like the remaining chapters as much as you seemed to like this one. Thanks again for you support and being an all around awesome lady!!! Big huggers!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

So glad William saved her from Sebastian. Gotta say that when you're that much under Sebastian's thumb, perhaps that is why you miss out on William. More fun for Buffy. Can't wait to see what he has to show her. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: That might be true, but did you really want Quinn and Buffy fighting over William? More will be coming next Wednesday. Thanks so much, BR, for reading, enjoying and reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wow...really intense chapter, I felt like I was there in that room.

You had me worried at the end tho, I thought Buffy would go to Sebastian.~shiver~ Thank God William was there to rescue her.
And now I think Sebastian will try something more sinister on Buffy maybe? he definitely hates William and he doesn't seem the type that gives up easily..

Can't wait for more, it's getting more and more interesting now.:)



Author's Response: Thanks so much, AMI. I try to put what's in my head onto the screen. I'm so glad it puts you there, not overwhelms or takes away from the story. Like I said before, Sebastian is a McCreeper. More will be coming next Wednesday and yes, now things are really getting interesting!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 8

Looking forward to more!
Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: No, thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing, IT!!! It means a lot!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2012 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter 8

I knew Spike would rescue her. Things really are heating up. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for continuing with this story, Jaime. Yes, things are really heating up now!!! More next Wednesday!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2012 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Feel like Buffy's fallen down the rabbit's hole and it's gonna be a crazy ride. Seems to me William is protecting her w/ a dash of setting up his own plans..... and I gotta wait till next week, huh? Oh well. It'll be worth it.

Author's Response: Super perceptive, crazylife!!! William did protect her, but how much of it was for his own benefit? Yeah, next week...hope to see you Wednesday!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2012 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have alot of preverted thoughts in my head, BBE. She's gonna go to the party and there's gonna be lots of sexual activities going on, dancing that makes 'dirty dancing' look like child's play. People will be making out, men getting blowjobs out in the open. The occacional drug usuage could be going on. What will poor Eilzabeth do when she needs to stay in character?!

Author's Response: Very interesting thoughts, sallyntmare. I know your going to hate me, but you'll just have to wait till Wednesday to read how accurate you are! *insert evil cackle here*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2012 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 7

Such weird happenings. So glad Quinn was all right, but I'm not sure that is a condition she can count on keeping. Wonderfully mysterious. Update soon!

Author's Response: Weird indeed, but I hope not off-putting. Thanks for reading, enjoying, and reviewing, BR!!! More on Wednesday.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2012 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 7

Quinn is always so distant when shes around Sebastian. I'm surious as to why. Could she be in a thrall? I'm anxious to read about the party. I have a few ideas on what sort of things happen there. :-) I'm thrilled that she already fancies William so much!

Can't wait for Wednesday! The last few days was so hard for me. I just now made it onto a camputer to read your chapter!

Author's Response: Hey sweetie!!!!! I'm sorry to read you've had a rough couple of days. Hopefully things are better now! *sending smiles through the screen* It's cool you noticed how distant Quinn is when Sebastian is around. There is a reason for it. I love to know after you read the next chapter if what you have in mind for the party was close to what is written. (if so, they get outta my head! there's barely any room in there as it is!!) LOL!!!! Big hugs

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2012 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter 7

Curiouser and curiouser!

Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Hey, IT! Thanks for stopping by and letting me know your still with me. More will be coming on Wednesday, and I let you in on a little secret...this chapter will blow your mind!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2012 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 7

Okay, I'll admit it, I've been half stalking/debating getting into this one. Just because I've been in an Fluffy mood, lately. But I finally caved and WOW am I glad I did! Definately hooked, and eager for more!

Author's Response: I'm so excited my story swayed you to the path of angst!! LOL! This is totally a different genre for me to write so being able to bring people into my world makes me smile big time! Thanks so much for taking a chance on this story and I hope I don't disappoint! I update weekly on Wednesday! :)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2012 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

OK, good to see that Quinn is OK. But she's definitly in a thrall or something. I find Sebastian very creepy and nasty, and I don't like that he seems to be after Buffy.

OOOh what will she find behind that door? Can't wait to see William again.
Soon I hope. :)

Good chappie as always.

Author's Response: Quinn is under...something. Yeah, Sebastian is a McCreeper and to be honest, I wanna slap the guy and I wrote him! Thanks, AMI for following my story and reviewing. It really gives my muse a kick in the pants that people are still following this story and anticipating what's coming next. So thank you!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2012 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 7

I did miss Spike in this chapter but I'm glad that he is already getting to Buffy. You are right I only have more questions. I'm really intrigued. I wish you would update every day. lol

Author's Response: Yes, even though his physical presence is not there, believe me, he's there. Also, there will be dozens of more questions in the coming chapters, but no fear, I will answer hopefully all of them before my tale is done. Thanks so much for reading, enjoying and reviewing. My muse loves the support! Oh, on a side note, I'd love to post everyday, but you know how RL is!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2012 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm So intrigued and love the dynamic Spuffy have. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks ever so, Jaime! There is much more in store!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2012 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Still excited for more. Seems a bit like a kinky room of requirement. It can be whatever you desire. Though I must say I'm a tiny bit concerned about Quinn. May be some evil afoot. Update soon!

Author's Response: Welcome back, BR! Mmm...you're getting a little warm about the room. As for Quinn, the next chapter will deal with her MIAing! Will update on Wednesday! Love to read whatcha think! ;)

Reviewer: Jordy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2012 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm intrigued. This is a slowly unfolding mystery and I'm loving it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Welcome and many thanks, Jordy! I'm so glad you are intrigued and loving it! Next chapter is up Wednesday. Hopefully I will hear from you then!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2012 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oooh I loved the description of that room. Very sexy. And I adore your William, so sexy and mysterious. Can't wait to find out more about him. And for Buffy to lose her all important control.

Concentrica sounds very intriguing, can't wait to find out what's going on. And btw where is Quinn? hmmm....

Can't wait for the next chappie. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Concentrico is very intriguing, and there is MUCH more coming!! Also, where Quinn is will be explained! Thanks so much for continuing to follow my story AMI!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2012 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 1

***Edit*** I meant that I can't get to EF on my phone. I have no clue why I said links-You were probably like, "What links?" I'm sure you got me but whats another review. Ha. Lucky number seven! :-)

Author's Response: No prob! I knew exactly what you were thinking! S, I want to thank you so much for all your kind words and major support. You really help my muse stay active. Big huggers!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2012 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Very cool banner. It's angelic and demonic looking. I hope you were going for that, or somewhere along those lines, so I don't offend.

Author's Response: Not offended at all, exactly what I was hoping for!

Reviewer: Sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

An all spuffy chapter! Spike is so well mannered. I love that. Thank goodness Buffy drank some alcohol to loosen up- not enough though. I would like to know more of the elusive William, as well. Great update and so worth the wait. Sorry I can be a pain.

I can't click on the banner links on my phone for some reason so once I'm on my computer ill look at them and review. Talk soon.

Author's Response: She can't give up all the control. For one, totally out of her comfort zone and two, she actually is here to do a job, not a handsome stranger! Let me know whatcha think of the banner!

Reviewer: Sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay!!! Going to read now. Be back soon with a review.

Author's Response: Cool! Love to know whatcha think

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Knock-Knock. Hello, this is your faithful reader/reviewer/...and stalker...obviously. LOL. Hope everything is okay today. I miss your update... I sound pathetic. I do have a life-I've actually done alot today. Was just hoping to get my fix. xx

Author's Response: Not a stalker nor pathetic! Just an anxious reader!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Its wednesday! looking forward to when you update. xx

Author's Response: Coming up soon! I love that you are patiently waiting

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

My chills have started. I'm starting to sweat and I can't seem to get comfortable. I hate that my dealer only works on wednesdays!! ;-)

Author's Response: *insert evil laugh here*

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