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Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2012 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 11

Steaming chapter indeed! :) Love the way you describe everything in beautiful details...

Author's Response: Thanks, C! In my personal opinion anticipation can be just as steamy as the deed itself!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2012 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 13

I'm speechless. Your writing has blown me away, as always. Where will Buffy lead him to? Can not wait!

Author's Response: *blushing* I'm glad you enjoyed, sallyntmare! More this week

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2012 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter 10

the dance sceene was beautifuly written! Something is going on allright! Or she can blame it on the alcohol ;)


Author's Response: *blushing* Yes, something indeed!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2012 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter 9

LOL! I was expecting Buffy to go all ''glaaaarjjjjgh'' on the taste of strong alcohol! :D
She's holding her own for now.... I can't wait to see all the secrets revealed...

Author's Response: No, no Buffyism with strong spirits in this one. As for the secrets being revealed, it will be a slow stream, but eventually it will all come gushing out.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2012 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 8

Ahh.... Venice... Not too far from where I live! =) I loved this chapter! I loved the scene with William as he steals her away from Sebastian. Poor Quinn.. I hope she isn't in love with the guy!

Author's Response: I'm so excited you liked this chapter. I was slightly wary since it was Quinn and Sebastian getting groiny, but it was really important catalist for everything that came and will come after

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 7

Is quinn being summoned somewhere? hm?... we'll see... :)
Loved this chapter too!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're loving all my chapters!! Big huggers

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 13

Another hot, sexy, good chapter. I love all the different rooms that make up Concentrico, and that Buffy is really loosening up little by little. Of course sexy William definitely helps with that. Loved her last words. :)

Looking forward to more when you get back and I hope you and your family had a great Thanksgiving. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! I appreciate you following my story and letting me know what you think of each and every one. I hope you and yours had a wonderful Turkey Day as well.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 6

Nephilim! You have Nephilim in here! :D Are they going to be for real? Huh? =)
I loved this last room! It really was a feast for the senses.
*is clicking happily toward the next chapter with gleeful smile on her face*

Author's Response: You know, you were the only one that brought up the Nephilim. Very keen eye, C! Hopefully I can keep your smile firmly in place with the rest of the chapters.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 5

...and here he is! William to the rescue! I loved it!
Will she see him again at Concentrico... best I set to find out :D Good thing there are so many chapters ahead :D yay!

Author's Response: That is the one thing with reading a new story that already has numerous chapters, no waiting! :)

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter 4

“May you be in heaven a full half hour before the devil knows you’re dead. Cheers.”
brilliant. just brilliant. I'm too intrigued to know what happens next, so i'll cut this review short *wink*
aaaaand off to the next chapter!

Author's Response: *bowing* why thank you, C. ;)

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 3

can't wait to find out what's going to happen next... :D

Author's Response: It's all just a click away! ;)

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2012 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter 2

I was grieving along with Elizabeth... this was heartbreaking and beautifully written, D!
I'm off to the next chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks ever so, C.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2012 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

so... Yours is the first Spuffy fanfic in a long time that I started to read these days... Thank you for the heads up! I would have missed it otherwise!
I have no idea where you'll be leading us in this one, D! Its a compelling start! Can't wait to see where does Spike fit in all of this...

Author's Response: *squee* I'm so excited to see you back in the Spuffy fields, C! And I'm excited you have dived head first into another BBE specials! LOL!

Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2012 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

So ready for the dirty :p as always this was great & I look forward to reading more. (:

Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint, but there will be a little more teasing before the big event, hopefully that will suffice.

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2012 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 13

Well, stalking works! Turned on my computer this am searching for the update. Amazing. I can't wait to see how the 'magical' world plays into the 'real' world. It's a fantastic ride dow the rabbit hole, but I'm wondering about the adventure they'll have after they land at the bottom! Sigh, till next Wednesday......

Author's Response: Hey, stalking worked for Spike! I'm so glad you're enjoying this adventure. Yeah, when the magical and real world collide, it will be a hell of a crash!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2012 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1

I would never throw tomatoes at you. Only bouqet of flowers. And there is my cheeseness for the day.

Author's Response: *catching flowers* you're so sweet, not cheesy, sallyntmare!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2012 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey hon,

I was reffering just to William. I have noticed all of the supernatural going on. Just wanted to make that clear.

Author's Response: I thought so, I just wanted to clarify. Who William will be revealed, in time. *dodging tomatoes*

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2012 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I went on the sunnyd awards and thank goodness because voting has been going on for a few weeks. Can you guess who I voted for? I noticed a boo-boo I made though. I nominated for characterization and I said 'Spike'. :-( See? I want to call him Spike. I hope I didn't ruin that for you! I feel awful!



Author's Response: *blushing* I appreciate so much your devotion to my story, sallyntmare. I'm literally gobsmacked (and if you met me in person you would know that's a HUGE feat) at how much I've moved you with my little tale. Thanks from the bottom of my heart. As for "Spike" v "William" seriously don't fret! Even though I call him William in the story, I feel the readers see him as Spike, and if they don't...Don't sweat it! Just to be nominated is amazing! <3

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2012 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Correction: I love this story so much---no loved. My love has definitely not stopped for this story!

Author's Response: I knew what you meant sweetie. ;)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2012 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yup. It's the I-phone! Had no problem reviewing on my laptop.

It's good to know you haven't forgotten about Quinn and Sebastian. I can't wait to read what those crazy kids are up to. And I'm so anxious to find out the supernatural part to this story. Is William a vampire or something else?!

Author's Response: No, I didn't forget about them, but just a little FYI, it will be a bit before you read of them again. Right now it's all about William and Buffy. Unless I'm not writing it correctly, there has been lots of supernatural in the story all ready. I hope you are just referring to who William is. *hoping*

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2012 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

I loved this story so much. I dread the day when you stop writing. This chapter was so sexy and hot. The sexual buildup is just crazy. They haven't even shagged yet! That is going to be incredible, I'm sure of it.

Congratulations to your daughter! Have fun in Florida. Will you be taken next week of from posting because of Thanksgiving?

Author's Response: You miss, are the biggest sweetheart! I absolutely love writing so I won't be stopping anytime soon. I'm excited you liked the chapter, even without the shagging. Thanks for the congrats, and yes, I will be posting the week of Turkey Day. Love to read what you think of this chapter as well! Big huggers

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2012 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 12

Whoo mama...so good, you're just teasing us with all this hotness and still no sex for W/B. :)

Creepy with the worms and the woman's gaping maw...Buffy can't believe it's real. Can't wait to see as things are revealed.

Good luck to your daughter's squad in Orlando. Yay!!

I'm from Fl. and I love going to Orlando...y'all are gonna have so much fun!

Can't wait for more next Wed. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm just a big ol' tease! But, no fear, it's leading up to something big, I assure you. I'm glad you liked the worms and the lady, creepy was exactly what I was going for. Thanks for your congrats! Yeah, we are so excited to go!

Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2012 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter 12

EEEPPP!!! I cant wait for more... (: im sssooo excited!!! Loveee it!

Author's Response: Thanks, spikesgurl1! I'm so glad you are enjoying my story! Hopefully I can keep you eeeppping!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2012 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 12

So many mysteries out there and William to boot. Seems to be some strange rules in this universe, and neither Buffy or I are ready for them. Hope we are soon. Good luck with the cheerleading and enjoy Florida. :)

Author's Response: Strange rules indeed, BR. Well, I can't say much about Buffy being ready, but I hope you are!!! Thanks for the good luck for my daughter and believe me, we will have a blast in Florida!!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2012 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wednesday is my Favorite day!! Love the tidbits...waiting (sort of) patiently for the main course. :-) Good luck to your daugther's squad. Take a lot of hard work to make it that far!

Author's Response: *squee* Strangely, I love Wednesday too. Not only posting but getting to watch a new episode of American Horror! If you live in the US and haven't see it, it is totally a MUST SEE! The show is in it's second season, but the show is written as an anthology, so each season stands alone. I absolutely love this show! Brilliant! Ahem...Okay, enough about AH, and more about my story...I don't know if your references to "tidbits" are in sexual nature or about the story as a whole, but either way both will be fully explored. Don't you worry. Hopefully I won't keep you waiting too long. Big thanks on congrats to my daughter. Yeah the girls have been working their little butts off since August! Hope to hear from you again next Wednesday, crazylife!! Thanks for stopping by!

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