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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2012 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

This was good. A decadent feast and then she saw the worms as a sign of the corruption. Where they and the woman what was really there or just a warning, interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks, magnus. Interesting perspective. Not to give anything away, can't say if it's correct or not, but I can say very interesting perspective. As for the woman and the worms, again can't give much away. Sorry. Don't worry in due time all will be revealed. Thanks for continuing to follow my story.

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2012 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

Buffy is getting in deeper. There is still a lot of mystery and like that hate it at the same time. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yes, far deeper! There will be much more mystery to come, but I assure you, all will be revealed in due time. Hopefully your like will far outweigh the hate and you'll continue to read. ;)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2012 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

...And no, I wasn't on a three day drinking binge, I got busy. No teasing
:-P xx

I love Spuffy but I also love the development of Quinn and Sebastian. I hope to read about them soon. I think Quinn is totally lost to Elizabeth right now...She's still hanging on to reality but she's quickly forgetting. Can't wait for wednesday!

Author's Response: No worries! I didn't think you were drinking for three days...only two! (LOL!!) I'm glad you like Quinn and Sebastian. They're not forgotten.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2012 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

That was just so hot and he didn't even touch her. She will not be solving a case tonight, she will be meeting William and instantly forget her mission. Can't wait!

Author's Response: *blushing* In my mind, erotic comes in so many different ways, some far beyond sex and are everyday occurances like washing or brushing someone's hair etc. Will be posting tomorrow. Love to read whatcha think.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2012 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG this was so good, so erotic and hot. I love this Spuffy world. And I can just picture William's face when he told her to "Come" :)

Love it, MORE, MORE ,MORE !

Author's Response: *big smiles* Thanks ever so, AMI. I'm glad you're loving this world. I tried to be original, which is very difficult with so many stories out there. I'm glad this is working for you. Yeah, I was picturing his face too when I was writing it. Stern but naughty! More will be coming next Wednesday. Love to read whatcha think!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2012 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter 11

The feeling of this story is great, a dreamy feeling of a different land and magic. Also a very erotic chapter.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you decided to follow my story here, magnus! I'm glad you're enjoying the feeling of this story. FYI--there will be many erotic chapters to come! Thanks so much for reading, enjoying, and reviewing my story!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2012 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 11

What?!!! YOU are the devil. Another week?! Actually that "massage" might have chilled me out for that whole length of time. "Please, Sir, I want some more." ;-) Hey, I said "might." Cheers.

Author's Response: Welcome, B to my little corner of the fanfiction world. Yeah, the massage was very relaxing, all those inhibitions just melted away! More will be up next Wednesday!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2012 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 11

The devil you know indeed. A very interesting universe, and though she may be becoming a part of it, who really has any idea what it is. Very intrigued. Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you are intrigued, BR. I'm hoping you will continue to find out what is really going on. I promise, eventually, all will be revealed!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2012 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 11

Holy Crap. I love you BBE. You are so brilliant. Sorry this isn't detailed..I've been drinking :-P I'll come back tomorrow to give you a more detailed review; let you know my favorite parts. :-)

Author's Response: Love you too, sally! Hope you had a drink for me!!!

Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2012 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 11

holy hot damn, its getting so good! Cant wait to see how he continues to dominate her body! (:
Ready for more!

Author's Response: *big smile* Thanks ever so, spikesgurl1!!! I'm glad you enjoyed my smuttyness! More will be coming next week. (in more ways than one!)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2012 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm going to sleep now and will hopefully wake up to an update! :-) xx

Author's Response: Your wish is my command!!!

Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2012 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 10

(exhales breath I wasnt aware I was holding) Your such a great writer!
Im liking this story alot so far! Please update soon!!! (:

Author's Response: Thanks ever so, spikegurl1. I'm so pleased you are enjoying this story. More will be up tomorrow!!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2012 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm back! I loved the bonding of them. Buffy is loosening up and starting to forget her identity....she can continue along that path ;-) So glad the night is hardly finished. So excited to read what William has planned. And when will his nickname come out if ever? Every time I review I type Spike then go back to fix LOL.

Author's Response: Wow, that's a reallllly long class!! LOL!! I'm glad you're enjoying how Buffy is slowly dropping her guard and letting William in. Sorry, William is remaining William throughout the story. Hopefully you won't mind to keep fixing it!!! :)

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2012 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter 10

Every chapter you leave me wanting more and even more intrigued. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: That's so good to read!!! I want my readers to want more. In my mind that means I'm doing it right! More will be posted on Wednesday. Love to read your thoughts.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2012 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update. I hope you and yours are safe from the storm!

Author's Response: Thank you for your well wishes, IT. Fortunately, the most we had was rain and high winds. My heart goes out to those in New York and New Jersey. I hope you and yours were safe if you live in this area. Thanks also for following my story. :)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2012 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 10

Mmm very sexy appetizer, your William is just so guh!

Very interesting place and looks like Buffy is seeing just what the real stuff is here. Of course she won't believe it yet.

Can't wait for more sexiness. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, AMI. I'm enjoying William as well. (wink, wink) More sexiness next Wednesday. Love to read what you think! Thanks again for continually following my story!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2012 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey honey,

This'll be short cause I'm testing if it will post. I loved loved the last chapter. If this post I will come back for a more detailed review as soon as school is done.

Author's Response: It worked! Love to hear what you thought! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2012 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 10

Very interesting place they've got there. Looking forward to what comes next, and what she was actually seeing. Update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, very interesting place indeed! More will up next Wednesday! Thanks so much for reading, enjoying and reviewing, BR!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2012 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 10

Very excited to see an early review and loved the appetizer...now I'm looking forward to the main course..or are we looking at severa courses, served up independently? Either way, glad to be along for the ride. :-)

Author's Response: Not trying to give anything away, but yes, numerous, tantalizing courses! I'm so glad you're along for the ride as well, crazylife. Thanks again for taking a chance on my fic! Big huggers!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2012 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

Loved it. William and Buffy's conversations are getting more flirty. I hope she doesn't walk away from him this time. Her dream was nice. Now on to the real thing? ;-)

Author's Response: thanks so much, sallyntmare! Not to give too much away, but assure you, no more walking away Buffy. (wink, wink, say no more)

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2012 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 9

Good chapter. I hate you ended it when it was just starting to get good. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Now, don't be like that, Jaime! *stifling evil laugh* I promise the next chapters will more than make up for my abrupt ending here. I promise. Hope you'll forgive me and be back next Wednesday. *begging*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2012 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter 9

Very interesting indeed. I would love to see a map of that place. And Buffy's closet. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: Well, a map won't help. Remember a few chapters back: "Concentrico in itself is a mystery. There are dozens of rooms, each unique and as ever-changing as those who frequent them…”. So a map won't help. As for the closet, it took her a while to choose an outfit due to indecisive not size, sad to say. I've fixed that in the story to make it more clear. Thanks for reading, enjoying, and reviewing, BR! More on Wednesday!

Author's Response: indecisiveness--not just indecisive

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2012 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for updating! :)

Author's Response: No, thank you for continuing to read, enjoy, and review! It means a lot to me. So thanks, IT!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2012 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 9

ohhh, can't wait! It's getting curiouser & curiouser. I'm thinking this particular part of the rabbit hole might be fun. Next week, huh....oh well good things are worth the wait. :-)

Author's Response: Yes, this part of the rabbit hole will be a real trip. Thanks crazylife for taking a chance on this story and offering your thoughts. I'm glad you feel this story is worth the wait. I hope next week won't disappoint. Big huggers!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2012 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

A possesive William that wants Buffy all to himself? I can most definitely enjoy that!

Author's Response: Well then, this story is for you!!!!

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