[Report This]Date: 04/14/2013 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like it when Spike is brutal with the truth. It makes it very difficult for Buffy to stay happily floating in that river in Egypt.
Author's Response: In Spike's defense he wasn't trying to hurt her. He was just running his mouth. Too bad it was the truth. Buffy lives in that river and someone has to yank her out before she drowns!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2013 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to see people are still reading and enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2013 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 5
Them wanting a vengeance demon is not good! BOTH fell to ground screaming in pain?-that's interesting. Keep it up!
Author's Response: It gives me the willies to think about what the military (any military) could do with a vengeance demon.
Oh yeah major pain for both of them. A stake to the heart, plastic or not has got to hurt. Plus the wish really keys into intent and Riley wanted to cause Spike pain. Lots and lots of pain.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2013 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Haha. Loved xander being turned into a bunny. Anya will never look at him the same again! Good update.com
Author's Response: I had to do it. Poor Anya, it will take a while for her to get over it.
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2013 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
XanderBunny! Hilarious!
Author's Response: I had to do it. I just couldn't resist.
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2013 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great Update! Really love where its going.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I hope I came up with an interesting plot. Thanks for being a faithful reader!
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2013 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 2
I like the premise of the story, and I think you capture the character voices well, but I'm curious about your use of present tense. Is there a reason you chose to write in present tense rather than past?
Author's Response: Thanks and yup. Simply because I suck at tenses. I swapped homework assignments in high school. My friend did my English homework and I did her math. :) I had two beta's for this story. But the one who was keeping an eye on that kind of stuff had a family emergency and had to stop. So sorry it might happen again.
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2013 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Unusual to have a video store named Jacob. ;-)
Good that Spike followed Riley and discovered that he's up to No Good.
Author's Response: Sorry about that. The word clerk got lost somewhere! Well I never liked Riley anyway. At least I didn't kill him this time! :)
Date: 01/05/2013 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
You've almost finished writing? Wow. Looking forward to it then.
Author's Response: Yup. Working on some juicy bits right now.
Date: 01/05/2013 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Will there be an update soon? :-)
Author's Response: I'm almost finished writing it. So I will post a new chapter every 3 weeks or so. I'm working on chapter 21 right now and there will probably be 25 when I'm done.
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2012 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Anya has the right solution, just stop beating up on Spike and you won't get headaches. Of course Willow just had to try doing a spell.
Author's Response: Seemed simple to me too. But you know those Scooby's they can be kind of dense some times.
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2012 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!! Such an original premises . So funny when Buffy and Xander felt the pain. I wonder what's up with Riley. Like that Buffy was told her and Spike need to protect her. And spike is immune to her? Very interested.
Author's Response: Thanks! I got a chuckle out of it too. (is that bad of me?)
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2012 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
So glad that both Riley and Xander got bad headaches :-)
So we have a different Hellgod (or 'old one'). And poor old Drogyn dead by RTA. Fascinating.
Loving the original plot, but It might be a good idea to find a beta who can sort out your tenses. You seem to drift from present narrative tense to past narrative tense and back again at random, sometimes within a single sentence. Also your dialogue punctuation is slightly... eccentric.
Author's Response: I do have a beta we must have missed that. I'll go over it when I have some time and fix the errors.
[Report This]Date: 11/17/2012 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fascinating premise. Can't wait to see where you take it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really hope everyone likes it!
Date: 11/17/2012 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the banner!! And I'm not one to talk- I have a few wips. Once school is done I fully plan to finish all of them. Looking forward to the update!
Author's Response: I'm usually so worried that I'll mess up and the story won't be finished that I wait for it to be done before I post. This time though, I thought I could risk it. I am going to finish it and my beta is awesome! So no worries there.
Date: 11/17/2012 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is this one written like your others or you writing as you go?
Author's Response: This is my first actual WIP. Don't panic though I have 14 chapters complete and I am working on chapter 16 as we speak! I promise that I will finish this story. I just couldn't wait 3hours made such a wonderful banner I just had to post!
[Report This]Date: 11/17/2012 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very Good. I can't wait to read how people react to his wish.
Author's Response: I hope you like it! I think I captured the reactions correctly.
[Report This]Date: 11/17/2012 - 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I like how this could go.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest.
[Report This]Date: 11/17/2012 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I definitely like this idea. More please
Author's Response: Thank you! I will post a new chapter every two weeks or so!
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