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Date: 05/04/2013 - 08:16 pm Title: Everybody's Changing

Darn I forgot... Congrats on your noms over at SunnyD awards. You so deserve it, this story rocks.:) *kisses*

Author's Response: Thanks, sweets!!! I was soo 'squeeeed' about it! I'm just a big geek like that. haha! Thanks again!! {{hugs}}

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2013 - 08:13 pm Title: Everybody's Changing

OK One question answered. Damn I hate that pig Caleb...hope his end is gruesome, I wonder if Angel will show up with the Liz Taylor amulet and burn up. LOL

Thank goodness spike and Buffy made up before she left. I loved Spike chasing down the bus, so romantic and Spikelike. :)

This is really bad, Buffy needs help and no one's around. :( *on the edge of my seat biting my nails*

Loved it sweetie. *HUGGLES* hope RL gives you a break soon.

Author's Response: Hey AMI!! haha! Well, Spike can't wear the Liz amulet this time, can he? hmmmmm ...

Glad you liked Spike running the bus down! I loved that scene! and yeah, totally like Spike - a last minute 'come to my senses' grand gesture.

Yay for on the edge of your seat ... don't fall off!! Will have more soon! RL can get crazy ... it's calmed down a bit today, thank goodness, DK what tomorrow will bring tho.Thanks for the good wishes, they totally help!

Thanks so much, AMI! {{smooches}}

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2013 - 07:48 pm Title: We Just Disagree

Oh NO!!! This was perfectly horrible and angsty. OMG! Poor Buffy...she feels she has to go cause it's the only way and Poor Spike...he's so hurt and scared that he just lashes out in the worst way. I understand where they're both coming from. I'm sure Spike didn't mean it, he just has to calm down a bit. I just wish they'd both go..I hate when they're apart. :(

UGH Caleb is so disgusting. I just hope for a bloody end for him. And why does he want Buffy to come back? Things have changed a lot from canon, cause the reason for the First was Buffy's resurrection. What's the reason now I wonder?

I'm crying now missy. Your muse is truly evil.

Onto the next...*hugs*

Author's Response: Hey AMI ... oh, such lovely compliments! 'perfectly horrible and angsty' ... my muse is dancing! Yes, you're right, of course, Spike didn't mean it, but we know how he lashes out when he's hurt or scared. I hate it when they're apart too ... but what are they gonna do? We'll see.

Ok, putting out a theory here on The First showing up. Here is what the exact words were in canon from Giles: "The Beljoxa's Eye was quite clear about that in its enigmatic way. It's because she lives." Ok, well ... she still lives here too - not because they brought her back, but because Dawn sacrificed instead. So, perhaps, the whole muck-up started back when Buffy died the first time and a new Slayer was called, so there are two and THAT's the actual 'disruption' that the First was taking advantage of. Anyway, that's my theory and I'm sticking to it. haha!

Oh tears?!?! Crying!!?!?! Dancing muse just twirled around on his toes. ;-)

Thanks so much, AMI ... {hugs you}

Reviewer: DeeDee5x5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2013 - 04:27 am Title: We Just Disagree

Oh NO !!! Noooooo Spike don't leave ,Buffy needs you ,the bits needs you , there wont be any Buffy or bits if the first wins , hope Spike can realise this before it's too late. Great story !!

Author's Response: Hi DeeDee! Nooo! Spike! Calm down! Come back! shoot! Glad you're enjoying the story! Hope you continue to! Let me know! Thanks much!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2013 - 09:06 pm Title: We Just Disagree

Wow powerful chapter..Come on spike don't you walk out on buffy win she needs you the most

Author's Response: Hey dev! He's just totally frustrated and doesn't know what to do. He'll come around ... he usually does once he settles down a bit and gets his brain working again. Thnx for stopping in!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2013 - 11:10 am Title: We Just Disagree

Oh heck. Knew it was too good to last. Surely Spike isn't going to be able to allow Buffy to go back on her own? They are stronger together. Your muse does come up with some dramatic situations!

Author's Response: Hey, All4Spike ... Buffy's putting Spike in a horrible situation. He wouldn't let her go back on her own, but how can he leave the babies? That's a pretty hard rock and a pretty solid hard place he's stuck between. Guess we'll see how it plays out ... Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in ! xoxo

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2013 - 01:23 am Title: We Just Disagree

I know I skipped Saturday's chapter until now. I knew it was going to be anxy and that there might even be a cliffhanger so I waited. Wasn't easy. So The First it makes sense. When you pick a villain for angst time you pick them well. Now to figure out what Spike will do when Buffy leaves because I can't see him staying and watching her go and I know Buffy will go as she puts it she has to. What will they do with the bits. Angel maybe? Nah. Can't see them bringing them in long too dangerous but is there anyplace that they would feel they were safe. This is hard. I have no idea where you will go with this. Good luck in writing them out of this corner.

Author's Response: Hey Blue Eyes! You have great patience! haha! Well, when picking a villain, might as well go for the big guns ... plus the timing is about right for the First to show up. Hopefully my muse can get this out of this pickle! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you, always!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2013 - 12:47 am Title: We Just Disagree

And the angst is back...must be that time of the month...kind of like PMS...need ice cream, cookies, and everyone to keep within 100yrds at all times.
Hopefully they can fix this before the First grabs a hold of them. Spike is her strength and she's going to need him in this fight. She can't fight with no support group...it's a death sentence before it starts.
Onalee, I leave for going out to sea Sunday but I'll try to read your updates on my iphone since we get signal.

Shannon

Author's Response: Haha Shannon! The angst is back, it must be Tuesday! :P They will definitely need each other, that's for certain ... hopefully they can hang on tightly.

If you need me to email you anything - if that would be easier for you while you're on the ship, let me know, Shannon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Know I love hearing from you.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2013 - 01:41 pm Title: Heart and Soul

RL has prevented me from keeping up but I will be implementing my usual plan of one chapter a day until I’m once again caught up with this wonderful story. I loved how the Big Bad panicked and then worried about holding the baby, no surprise that he ended up an effulgent puddle of goo over the two of them. Aunt Joan was her usual wonderful, efficient, literal self wasn’t she? Thanks for such a wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Hey, Melly! Yeah, RL has been kinda bouncing me around too, no worries! Glad you enjoyed it! I so love Spike the panicked father! One of my fav sides of him. Glad you liked Aunt Joan and all her helpful hints for Buffy! haha! Thanks much, Melly! Hope things settle down for both of us!

Reviewer: Asuras Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2013 - 02:56 am Title: I'll Stand By You

Oh dear, head on with the FE I see. That's a full-sized shoe ineed.
Glad to see them being open with eachother instead of letting the evil suggestions fester. Seems right for where their relationship's at.
I'ma install me some seatbelts for the rest of this I think :)

Author's Response: Hi Asuras ... Yeah, I think if this had happened at a different period in their life, the suggestions and ideas would've festered rather than being shared, but they've been through enough now to trust each other. Yes, you may want some seatbelts - maybe a safety harness and goggles too. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you.

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2013 - 05:56 pm Title: I'll Stand By You

And so it begins

Author's Response: Muhahahahaha :)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2013 - 07:35 pm Title: I'll Stand By You

Wow, Shit ,and Crap! I was not expecting The First. *eek* How the hell will they be able to defeat it? OMG it's really seriously bad now. :(

The beginning was cute..I was hoping for the start of Jodia, but I guess it's not to be. Oh well :(

The Firsts! were horrid, but First!Joyce was way scarier and creepier...telling Buffy to kill the bits. :(
At least they are telling each other everything. they can't give the First any more power than it already has. Wonder how they will figure things out now...maybe Giles? I dunno just taking a guess. Will Joan be affected too? I would think not, cause she's a bot but your muse is evil so anything is possible.

*Biting my nails now cause this is REALLY BAD!*

*kisses*

Author's Response: Hey AMI ... I kinda left the Jodia open .. I mean, Joan obviously wants to, so if Spike and Buffy give her permission later??? never know what might happen. I never considered having the First appear to Joan for some reason - I guess cos of the emotional turbulence it got out of Spike and Buffy was enough to satisfy my muse. It might be interesting to see it appear to Joan ... could even be kinda funny.

Thanks again for reading and stopping in ... {hugs you}}

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2013 - 06:54 pm Title: The Things We've Handed Down

Aww what a sweet chappie. I love Daddy!Spike and you write him perfectly. I like that you had time pass and we got to see little bits of their life. Oh Aunt Joan...physics, huh? Poor twins,lol

I feel bad for Buffy but she's gonna have to get used to the fact that Joan and Spike will not change and she will. That's gonna get depressing I would think. Sucks but there it is.

Loved Spike's speech...my fave. But I guess data wins out over romance for buffy in this case.

Oooh Joan likes India:) You don't go to all the trouble of lying if you just wanna be friends. :) Wish you'd go there but it's probably just wishful thinking on my part. :(

My fave was Spike with Joyce-Anne and he was remembering all the bad he'd done in the past to other children.:( I wonder if that will be something to angst over later.

Great chappie, now I'm waiting to see what BB has planned...someone will be coming for them I assume? Probably Angel just cause I think he's such a giant wanker. :) *hugs*

Author's Response: Hey AMI! Glad you enjoyed the chapter with the little glimpses into the babies development. Yeah, I don't know if that will always be an issue for her ... I guess we'll find out when my muse gets there, huh?

I strongly considered 'going there' with India and Joan, but have kinda just left it open for later, only because I didn't think I could deal with that much of a subplot just now.

Hmmm ... when the kids are older will they discover what he's done? And how will they react? Never know...

Angel may be involved at some point.... ;-) Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, AMI. You know I love hearing from you! {{hugs}} xo

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2013 - 03:16 pm Title: I'll Stand By You

Oh dear. Now things are going to get complicated. I wonder if the FE can appear to Joan? Might be time to contact Giles...

Author's Response: Hey All4Spike ... You know several people asked that and I'd say it could, but she'd probably be able to tell with some sensor or something that it wasn't real. I honestly didn't think about having it appear to her, although that might've been interesting... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in. Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Merryreader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2013 - 02:49 pm Title: I'll Stand By You

So enjoying the story and lok forward to updates on this well written story....

Author's Response: Thank you Merryreader and welcome! I'm very glad you've enjoyed it so far. I try to update a couple of times a week - barring anything unforeseen. Thanks so much for stopping in.

Reviewer: CJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2013 - 02:09 pm Title: I'll Stand By You

you never disappoint PFS this story is so interesting, so good looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, CJ! Thank you so much for reading and stopping in to let me know! I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2013 - 10:59 pm Title: The Things We've Handed Down

The chapter was nice I like the passing of time bits. The chapter left me a bit perplex on one thing. India is your plan to make her just a friend for Joan or are you planning on making it a bit more serious. I hope for friendship only.

Author's Response: Hey Blue Eyes. My original plan for India was for her to be a friend only - to the family and to Joan in particular - but my muse has written it so that he has the option to go either way with it, to be honest. I'm actually leaning toward 'just friends', but truthfully, I'll just have to see how the plot plays out as I go forward here. My characters sometimes have a way of doing what they want without consulting me. :P I do think making it more than friends could be a plot complication that I don't want to deal with, to be honest, but, that has rarely stopped my muse from diving into the impossible. :) Thanks for the note! I'll keep it in mind, for sure. {hugs}

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2013 - 05:53 pm Title: The Things We've Handed Down

Aw joan has a friend love it

Author's Response: Hey dev!! The Bot's doing things on her own! And even making friends! haha! She's turning into a real girl. :)

Reviewer: Asuras Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2013 - 04:09 pm Title: The Things We've Handed Down

Hmm at the risk of turning into Blue Eyes.. :D
Should've mentioned I'm liking auntie Joan and it's good to see she's making a friend of her own. As said before your turning the bot into a full character works out great :)

Author's Response: Haha! Glad you're liking Joan/Bot and yeah... a friend of her very own! She's really worked out much better than I would've ever guessed when I started this!! And her ability to lighten the angst has been superlative. Thanks!!

Reviewer: Asuras Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2013 - 04:06 pm Title: The Things We've Handed Down

One tiny point that made me blink this time : ) It was a good point to insert Spike's speach, however his lighten-the-mood-answer: “Yeah, well, I don’t want t’ be this good-looking and (...)" wasn't really a good fit?
Not with Buffy being understandably insecure about loving and living with 2 beings that will never sag or grow old, one of which is a copy of her young tight self :S

Beyond that, many smiles this chapter. Liked the "I'm velcro?"-comment, loved the “As soon as he stops trying to eat the paper, we’ll have him tested.”
*Big grin*
Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hi, Yes, I changed his speech to match the circumstances a bit better. It was 'good looking and athletic' in the original. I also left some other bits out that didn't really fit. I just love that speech too much to not use it in some form.

Glad you got some grins in the chapter. You might want to mark that down, cos ... not so many of those in the next few chapters. The angst will return.

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you, Asuras.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2013 - 11:17 am Title: The Things We've Handed Down

Love Buffy's velcro analogy. Joan is going to be a very... unusual auntie, isn't she?
Waiting for the other shoe to drop....

Author's Response: Haha, All4Spike ... ummm, yes, I do think that Joan will be a rather eccentric Auntie. Glad you liked the velcro!! :) Shoe dropping soon ... waiting nearly over. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! xo

Reviewer: Asuras Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2013 - 05:57 am Title: Heart and Soul

Adorable chapter : ) Curious to see what homelife for the threesome will be like now that they're bringing the bits home. Hope they get a little bit of peace to settle, before the bubble gets stabbed at ; )

Author's Response: Hi Asuras! Well, your wish will be granted! They will get a bit of a breather before ::POP:: the bubble bursts! Glad you liked the chapter - thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2013 - 06:40 am Title: Heart and Soul

I loved the fact that Spike would want to keep some things old fashion like not being in the delivery room. And being a mother I still remember when my privates transformed to birth canal and therefore open to all to look upon. So forget modesty. The best part of this chapter was the way you kept the humor with the realism and got each key point without dragging it out. Very well done.

Author's Response: Hey, Blue Eyes! Yeah, I'm thinking Spike would really just rather wait in the hall! LOL! Poor Spikey. And yeah - birth canals have no modicum of privacy ... what fun times. Glad you liked it, BE. I feel like I'm repeating stuff I've done in Unexpected, and that bugs me, but that also keeps it short cos I don't want to be repeat stuff, but I can't leave it out, either. Anyway, glad it worked for you! {hugs}

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2013 - 07:45 pm Title: Heart and Soul

Aww how sweet! I loved scared, wimpy, amazed Spike. He is going to be a great Daddy, I know it.

Wonderful, descriptive chappie. Poor Spike he really had to put up with a lot with in labor Buffy... I lol'ed when she finally begged for the drugs. :) And Spike panicking at holding the baby.hehe Not properly trained...or licensed. Oh Spike how I love you. :)

The babies sound gorgeous, I can just picture two Spike/Buffy lookalikes. Man, that was a long name for Dawnie. I hope they call her Dawn, I'm not too fond of Spuffy babies named Joyce.

I am now officially scared shitless. Everything is too perfect, so I know the badness is coming soon. I'm guessing it'll be that they're found. :( Oh for the love of Spike I hope nothing happens to the bits. *whimpers*

What could go wrong when the babies come home? Only your evil, but handsome muse knows for sure.

Loved every word of this...*hugs*

Author's Response: "What could go wrong when the babies come home? Only your evil, but handsome muse knows for sure."

Haha!! soooo true!! Guessing would be futile.

I ADORE scared, wimpy and amazed Spike. I feel like I'm repeating his behavior from Unexpected, but ... I just love it and it's just how I see him reacting. I can't help it - so, sorry to anyone that felt a sense of deja vu on that bit.

Poor unlicensed Spike. Heehee! He'll get the hang of it quickly, me thinks! :) The girl did have a long name, but it will be shortened ... it won't be Joyce, unless she's in BIG TROUBLE. :P

Oh, my muse is dancing at reading that you're scared shitless! hahaha - he's so very evil! As PaganBaby was betaing each chapter she kept going ... "oh, this is gonna be bad, this is gonna be really bad - no way 'BB' (Blue Boy, my handsome, evil muse) will not make us pay for all this happy." That make him giggle like a school-girl. heehee!

Thanks so much, AMI!! So glad you liked it!! More soon! {{hugs}} xoxoxo

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Date: 04/20/2013 - 07:24 pm Title: Take My Breath Away

Oh wow what a great chappie. I love Mr and Mrs, DIY. LOL The house is coming along great and it sounds really gorgeous. Loved the idea of Spike in a toolbelt and all the yummy goodness of the description of Spike's body and the drop of water. YUM YUM!!

I',m with Spike ...sage is a great color. beige is boring. "Vamp hearing must be color blind," LOL great line.

It's nice that they're so happy now and even making friends. BTW what do they do fro money? Or is it all the money that Spike won in Vegas? Wow he must have won a lot.
Loved the sexy times and how much Spike is willing to do for her. Thank God this buffy appreciates him.

Not to be nosy but what does DTAS stand for...never heard it and I'm curious.

Loved it and onto the next chapter. :) *kisses*

Author's Response: Hey AMI!! I agree that beige is boring ... much prefer sage, even without the china! Glad you liked the color-blind hearing. That was one of Buffy's better lines. :-) I'll touch on what they're doing for money later - basically, Spike has been/will be taking trips every so often to gamble and win more (To Louisiana rather than Vegas), Joan will be making some money too, with her furniture-restoration skills (and some other stuff), and Buffy will have a part time job as a waitress.

Thank goodness for appreciative Buffy!! Miracles can happen! LOL!

DTAS is a group on facebook: The Duct Tape Appreciation Society. It's a long story as far as how the name came about, but it was formed during the lead up to the GOTR online Stageit concert a few weeks ago (WHICH ROCKED, by the way). We are mostly all Spuffy fans, and all James Marsters/Ghost of the Robot fans. There are a couple of fanfic writers in there and lots of fanfic readers. It is a closed group, so anyone wanting to join, while welcome, would need an invite. If anyone is interested, you can contact me directly with an email message here and I'll hook you up. We have fun discussing/sharing all things Buffy/JM/musical/ whatever ... it's a fun group.

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here, AMI!! You know I love hearing from you!! {{hugs}} xo

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