Would love a sequel. Want to know how the case ends on top of wanting to know how that drink goes. Does this hardened Buffy have the ability to hold her liquor unlike Buffy of cannon? Could get interesting real fast. All kinds of directions they could go... Though I hope none of them are too smooth. These two don't seem like they do things the easy way. Lots of pussy-footing around the issues... and attractions. Hope your muse inspires you to continue. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry it's taken so long to respond - RL has been insane. I think this Buffy seldom drinks and will therefore get trashed fairly quickly...

I completely disagree that this is sloppy writing. It is articulate, interesting and proofread carefully. The style is unconventional, but moves the story along in a clear, easy-to-understand manner. I enjoyed it thoroughly, and would love to see more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your response to the anonymous review. Sorry it's taken so long to respond - and will probably take even longer to post a new story, alas.

i was interested to read this until i saw the way it was written. trust me, people will just take one look and not even bother, it's completely sloppy. i would suggest getting a beta reader before you post something in here, it always helps to have another opinion.