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Reviewer: IA08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2014 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

Please update, I don't read many stories anymore and this is one of the few that I enjoy.

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2014 - 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

Please don't forget about this story it's a great read 

Reviewer: Spuffygirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2014 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter 4

I've been trying to review this story for days. It isn't showing up. I hope this does. I love it and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Abbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2014 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay an update and Great chapter!

Reviewer: Isha_Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2014 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter 4

Love love love, SO MUCH love for this chapter. Your back-stories are so well considered and well-crafted that it's easy to read your story from both POVs. It's also really refreshing to be able to understand the reactions and choices of both characters, even if they can't understand each other (lol!) I am enjoying this massively and can't wait for another update!



Author's Response: You are SO kind! Thank you very much. This review blessed me in a way I can't explain. Chapter 4 was such a difficult chapter for me to write because it was in Buffy's POV. I was having the HARDEST time finding her voice. Now that I've found it I'm hoping that it smoother sailing from here on out. Next chapter is almost finished. :)

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2014 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed this chapter and getting more into Buffy's head to figure out her feelings toward Spike. I loved how she was jealous when Spike was talking to Faith. I can understand why he wanted to see if she would care after she ran out the way she did after the sex though.

It also was good to get more info about Buffy and her dad. I'm scared of what might happen with Parker if Buffy is alone with him and he doesn't take no for an answer.

I can't wait to see the next convo with Spuffy.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I had such a difficult time finding my "Buffy" voice. I wrote/sat on/rewrote that chapter so many times! It was by far the hardest chapter for me to write so far. I'm having such a good time as it all unfolds. Chapter 5 is just about finished, more Spuffy dialogue yay!

Reviewer: serena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2014 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Glad you updated, hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: Abbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2014 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 3

I need an update. I love this fic.

Author's Response: :) Thanks Abbie! I've been sitting on chapter four for awhile because I wasn't quite happy with it but your review spurred me into gear!! Chapter four has been sent to my beta and as soon as I get it back I will update.

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2014 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this so far. The way you have changed Anne I like and the fact is that it's possible in this time that she could have got addicted to drugs. Life can change you in lots of ways. I like the background of how Spuffy got involved. From the first 2 chapters I would have expected Spike to be the one to start things between them interacting. I like how Buffy cared seeing him upset and tried to comfort him. I didn't expect Spike to kiss her in that moment. I can't wait for more.

 



Author's Response: Thank you. :) More coming soon.

Reviewer: miracle_child Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2014 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Interesting backstory, although I'm not clear why driving away would save him from being suspended or expelled. I mean Parker knows who he is, doesn't he? And the teacher must have seen something, probably enough to put two and two together.

Well, I just have to wait for the next chapter. Hope the next part is from Buffy's perspective ;-)

Have fun!



Author's Response: As always, thank you for the awesome review. Nice catch! I went in and changed the line to: “A girl you’re going to get expelled over all because another boy was touching her arm!” Declan was quick to point out. :) You were absolutely right I just hadn't gotten that far yet. The next chapter is complete and has been beta'd I just need to go back over it. It's in Buffy's POV. I had a real hard time finding her voice but once I got started the words wouldn't stop coming. Chapter three is twice as long as chapter two.

Reviewer: ashley Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2014 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok, i'm completely hooked and want more. Can't wait to hear their backstory! Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response: Aw thanks for taking the time to comment Ashley! I can't seem to get this story out of my head. I already have the first three chapters completed and beta'd and am working on #4. I'm excited to get it all out!

Reviewer: miracle_child Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2014 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

First impression: reminds of The OC but with Spuffy.

Wonder about the Pratts' past. British accent and living in a trailer park...

Don't like your Anne so far and as a drug addict I just can't picture her looking younger than she actually is or really hot - sorry, hon.



Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. :) I've never seen the OC, having lived near Orange County for most of my life it was a show I stayed away from, and now we don't own a television. It'll be interesting to see if you still get that vibe with the next chapter. The next couple chapters are all about back story so that'll be up soon! I don't like my Anne much either. I didn't want her to be a super likeable character. I totally see where you're coming from, honestly the believability of her being a hot drug addict never even entered the equation while I was writing. That was just how I pictured her in my mind so I went with it. :)

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