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Reviewer: demona424 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 05:26 pm Title: Epilogue

I absolutely love this story. From sexy to sad to romantic to sweet in the span of 18 chapters. It's one of my favorites of yours, but it's a really close tie. I'd be more sad that it was over if you didn't have so many other great stories in progress right now! :-)

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 04:52 pm Title: Epilogue

What a nice ending :) I'm glad I stuck it through (as you asked in your A/N's so often!). As hard as it was to read Spike as such a jerk and Buffy as weak, I'm sure it was harder to write them that way. And the best stories are the ones that get the readers talking and reacting so strongly. Good going!

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 04:43 pm Title: Closure

Yay Lindsey! I'm glad you chose to include him instead of Riley--it's nice to have fresh faces :)

Reviewer: **AUTHOR'S NOTE** Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 04:30 pm Title: Almost Perfect

Well, for some reason I can't respond to the reviews. So, in response to Franchesca, I know it's a very different character for Spike, but I wanted to show that he'd changed and that it was Drusilla that brought out the bad side of him. Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you check out my new and upcoming WIP's!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 04:22 pm Title: Epilogue

VERY sweet, but I'm not sure I can picture the dark Spike from the beigining of this fic as Mr. Mom. But all in all, good story.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 04:12 pm Title: Too Little, Too Late

Woo-hoo! Buffy finally comes to her senses... I really liked this chapter, especially the way you had Buffy leave. It was heartbreaking, but she did it out of pride and out of love for Spike. Very nicely done :)

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 04:07 pm Title: Decisions

I'm thinking that Buffy's really letting Spike get off easy for all the heartbreak he's caused her. He's been nothing short of selfish, manipulative and a complete jerk. And if Willow was a true friend, she'd be trying to get Buffy to leave this horrible rut.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 03:55 pm Title: Crime & Punishment

Oh dear--that was pretty much rape, wasn't it? I'm not sure what I think of that--and the fact that Buffy didn't knock his lights out. It's extremely hard to know that Spike will be changing his personality (in a good way) because he's been written in such a way that he doesn't seem to deserve a good ending. But I'm off to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 03:47 pm Title: Love/Hate

I know we're supposed to hate Spike, but I can't help myself from shaking my head at Buffy... It's mean to say, but she's getting exactly what she deserves (ducks rotten tomatoes). Sorry bout the outburst--I'm off to read the next chappy...

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 03:30 pm Title: Epilogue

Graet story. Loved it. Loved the ending. A definat must read .

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 06:35 am Title: And the Winner is...

well at least it wasn't the bomb in the boat like in the video! lol

Reviewer: samica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2004 - 01:12 am Title: And the Winner is...

A lot of action in this chappie.

Reviewer: Cassiopea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 10:09 am Title: And the Winner is...

I think the story is flowing nicely , and I'm satisfied to see Drusilla have what she deserves.. It was angsty , but completely bearable! ;) And now if they could become husband and wife..*happy sigh*

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 07:43 am Title: And the Winner is...

LOL! Too bad Dru didn't learn not to mess with Buffy before! Excuse me while I break into a chorus of "The Wicked Witch Is"...umm...gone. LOL!

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 06:08 am Title: Closure

fantastic chapter all thats left is the epilogue

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 04:38 am Title: Closure

WOOHOO! Love this chapter! Dru & Lindsey both get what's coming to them. YES!

Reviewer: Brat Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 01:57 am Title: Closure

Yay!!! Whew, I was worried there for a while. Great job!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 01:33 am Title: Closure

GREAT CHATPTER!!! DRU FINALLY GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2004 - 12:35 am Title: Closure

Oh, Ashlee, this is brilliant so far! Please write quickly! I really want to know how it ends. :)

Reviewer: samica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 09:46 pm Title: Closure

A lot was resolved, hopefully. I smell more Spuffy coming, yay!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 05:32 pm Title: Closure

Only one punch to Dru? Come on.... O.K., but it's still good.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2004 - 12:38 am Title: Emotions

God, I love intense, take control Spike!! That was so good...I LOVE this story. I feel for Buffy, not in the I've been the other woman way, but in the way it's killing and she's trying so hard to be strong...great story.

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 07:37 pm Title: Emotions

great chapter you capture her feelings so perfectly...

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 11:16 am Title: Emotions

ARGH! Talk better be all that happens. I was about to give up entirely on this story if he was going back to Dru, even briefly. Buffy & Spike have been through enough, with the separation. Update soon please.

Reviewer: Mockerfab4 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2004 - 06:55 am Title: Emotions

Good for Buffy! She just wants her man and could care less about her career. I did like that Spike was trying to find a solution, but Buffy is absolutely right. Great chapter and looking forward to reading more. =)

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