Well done. I was rather surprised that Buffy wasn't more hostile and angry towards Parker. Her last sentences to him were especially tame for what I would think she would be feeling. Looking forward to more

I’ll send you a review; but I won’t be able to read the other chapter till tomorrow. I almost thought Buffy was better (the angst, nightmare) – looking forward for more.

Go William! I love how you had him confront Parker! That was great!!!!

Why do I get the feeling that this isn't going to go well?

If it makes you feel better, it was the same day for me :) Somehow I feel same way with Willow, but since I know that there's gonna be happy ending, I don't worry as much. Great chapter, I'm really waiting for more to come.

I don't like problems in in relationship in Real life, but in fiction it's one of my favorites. It's always nicer to read about misery than to actually feel it :) You did great with the chapter (and I have no idea can you really say that)

okay – so when the angst is to come back – I’m enjoying the fun in reading about the fun they have in dating!

I totally agree with you ..especially about angst needing to exist in relationships...it also means there is passion which is definately of the good...lol on the chapter!

wow.. I just started reading.. and wow. this is definetly a twist! i can't wait to find out more about spike.

Such beautiful and seemingly harmless words, that have such a bad impact on the girl and he doesn't even know. It's like putting your foot in your mouth, but not knowing you did it. Poor guy! Good chapter.

Post chap 12 tonight. :) I want to see how William reacts to Buffy's shutdown and what all is going to happen...

i like your story and as sad as i am to see there be problems with william and buffy, i''m glad that you made it realistic-- how could there not be weirdness considering the dreams she's had for so long! Great job and i hope to read more tonight!