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Reviewer: Jenx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 02:48 pm Title: Named and Ashamed

I'm sorry, but, ugh. I can't read on anymore.

If I have to be nasty, the story just sucks. If I have to be encouraging, you need to work on the storyline, your grammer, your characters' emotional control and to pan out each chapter more carefully. It moved simply too fast and most scenes simply DON'T connect to the next.

Maybe you can do better with a beta.

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2006 - 04:17 am Title: Birth and Epilogue

good story. im only confused on one thing. it says that her name is katelyn willow huffman, but i thought spike said his name was william carter. you might wanna straighen that out. i like the story though and i plan on reading the sequel

Author's Response: No, I didn't mention a last name till about the end, I don't think anyway but I'll check just in case, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Birth and Epilogue

Oops! I missed the last chapter! I'm reading now. I would say I loved the end but there is a sequel now means that this wasn't the end :) On to the next part :) 13 years later is a lot of time. Gonna see what happened to them.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2005 - 05:14 am Title: Birth and Epilogue

absolutely loved this story....you did an incredible job on it

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Birth and Epilogue

Cute story and a very fluffy Spuffy ending. Great job!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 08:57 pm Title: Preparation

Oh - wasn't this too early to the baby? Looking forward to read more.

Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 10:28 am Title: Preparation

So good, I had so many chapters to catch up on....all amazing! :-) Please update soon, I need more of this wonderful story. :-)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 07:11 am Title: Preparation

great update more please :)

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 03:59 am Title: Preparation

It's such a cool story; I can not wait for you to update. I wanna know what happens next! :)

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Preparation

AWWW MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH!!!!

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2005 - 07:38 pm Title: No Pain, No Gain

more please!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2005 - 12:37 pm Title: No Pain, No Gain

Yay, it's gonna to be a girl :-)

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2005 - 01:19 am Title: No Pain, No Gain

i love this

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 09:40 pm Title: No Pain, No Gain

Yay! It's a girl! I can't wait for more! Please update asap!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: No Pain, No Gain

good update

Reviewer: Kathyrn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Child of an Angel

Eugh! Why does every godd fic I read end up being a fucking baby fic! I loved this fic but now I can't read anymore of it!!! Y does that always happen! Baby fics suck!!!

Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: No Pain, No Gain

Ooh so good! Please update soon! Need more! :-) Loved it huni! :-)

Reviewer: loxie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2005 - 11:06 pm Title: Feelings

update soon please lov it so far

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2005 - 12:29 am Title: Feelings

more

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 10:04 pm Title: Feelings

good update sad about her dad

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:45 pm Title: Feelings

What an unexpected turn!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Feelings

wow that was weird. i really like this story and cant wiat to readmore. its really interesting and is very creaive. i cant wait to read more. please update as soon as u can im dying to no more thanx

Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 01:31 pm Title: Feelings

OMG! I LOVE this story! It is So good! I love the scenes you painte between Buffy and Spike and how sweet they are on each other, and I love the scene when the woman called her name and Buffy yelled, "She's not here" cracked me up. lol. hehe! I really love this story! Please update soon! I can't wait for more! The last line of this chapter got me very sad though, very put you do need to put ansgt into it, good job! I can't wait for more, you are a very talented author and I love the way you write, Update soon...I need instant gratification! Pretty please! :-)

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 11:48 am Title: Feelings

I can't believe that Hank's dying! Pretty please update soon!

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2005 - 02:10 pm Title: Scared

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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