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Reviewer: Nemesis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2005 - 03:14 am Title: Painful Reminders

I just came across your story and its great. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 - 05:44 pm Title: Painful Reminders

What a dramatic and exciting confrontation. You're doing a good job moving the plot forward and keeping the romance realistic. Spike is supportive without being a saint and Buffy's mixed emotions are well written.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2005 - 06:35 am Title: Painful Reminders

This is a great story, and I loved this chapter. The whole "all of the men standing around involuntarily winced" part was wonderful. Although personally I would have done more than one kick and one punch... castration comes to mind.

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: Painful Reminders

GOOD for Buffy! About time someone kicked ol' Parker in th enuts! :)

Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Painful Reminders

Oh thank god she finally stood up to him. I might've had an ulcer if she didn't do that soon :P I can't describe why, but I liked the part where Buffy was momentarily scared of vicious Spike. I think it's just a good point, combined with a yum image of grrr Spike beating up bastard man.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 08:34 am Title: Painful Reminders

good update

Reviewer: Re Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 06:11 am Title: Painful Reminders

Woot, go Buffy, finally we see the slayer-y ness, wicked update, take care

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 04:13 am Title: Painful Reminders

That was freakin' awesome! Buffy got him good! Good on her. Her healing is no where near complete, but that sure is an exciting step. This maybe my favorite chapter in the whole story, so far. I hope they get Parker arrested again. Guy really is a dope, two bigger angry men approach you and you still think you can beat up the girl... surely a man possessed... But absolutely superb story telling. Update soon!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Painful Reminders

Yeah Buffy! That's the way to grab a little self esteem back from that prick Parker! So glad Buff was able to put into words and actions that she and Parker were over for good! What a healing step for her. Can't wait for more! Thanks so much for this great update!

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 02:05 am Title: Painful Reminders

Awesome! I'm glad that she got a chance to beat him up.

Reviewer: Baby Spikes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 01:52 am Title: Painful Reminders

woohoo!!! go buffy and groin kicking!!!

Reviewer: phantomwriter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 12:08 am Title: Painful Reminders

Woot. Buffy kicked Parker in the balls. Yay. Keep updating!

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 10:59 pm Title: Painful Reminders

Another great and intense update. Buffys inner strength is showing and thats wonderful. I cant wait for the next chap and more progress!!!xxx

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: Painful Reminders

Oh that's so scary to be grabbed while walking around campus. Yay for Spike and Angel being there and finding her. And I big woohoo to Buffy giving Parker what he deserves (even though he deserves much worse). Thanks for the update! =)

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 09:40 pm Title: Painful Reminders

OH wow ... dang. Loved her doing some Parker butt kicking!! Good chapter. Look forward to what is next.

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 06:41 pm Title: Painful Reminders

Good for Buffy! (Can't someone just dust Parker!?) Great chpater. Luv,spuf

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Painful Reminders

Great chapter! I'm so proud of Buffy for beating on Parker, and giving him what he deserves (not that he doesn't deserve way more than what she did . . .) Can't wait for more, so please update as soon as you can1 Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: ebontier Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 05:15 pm Title: Painful Reminders

I just got caught up on this story. It's a great one, I really hope Parker gets exactly what's coming to him in a major way. :) I have faith in the Ashlee!

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 03:58 pm Title: Painful Reminders

*dances around doing the happy dance* Buffy finally found the strength to go against him. Parker doesn't deserve someone like Buffy. Now let's get to some Spuffy loving. lol

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 03:36 pm Title: Painful Reminders

YES! Go Buffy! She SO needed that closure! Awesome chapter!! More please!

Reviewer: vamptastica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2005 - 05:05 pm Title: Feeling Broken

I'm sooooooo late catching up on stories lately but this is wonderful as usual sweetie. I just read the last uh...four chapters? (see told you i was late :)) and the way you're handling it is so tender and caring I'm just loving it. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: phantomwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 12:26 am Title: Feeling Broken

Love it. Update soon.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 - 06:02 pm Title: Feeling Broken

How sweet of Spike to just try to be there for her, but not push her or use her. I hope she can overcome her feelings of worthlessness soon. Love it, More please.

Reviewer: tina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2005 - 06:08 pm Title: Feeling Broken

omg that is so sad and i luv the story so much its really good update soon luvs tina

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2005 - 05:50 pm Title: Feeling Broken

Aww, I love what a good guy Spike is in this story. =)

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