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Episode 2: Twice in a Lifetime by Pari Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Spike sucked into a parallel world, and it will take a lifetime for him to get back...will he remember his love for Buffy?
Categories: Serial Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations
Series: The Uncanny 6th Season
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15827
[Report This] Published: 05/31/2004 Updated: 05/31/2004
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1

another test 1

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Test: I think I got it fixed

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 5: 5

Another test

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 6: 6

Testing again

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Testing 123

Author's Response: Testing 456

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Testing

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 2: 2

Another test

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 3: 3

Testing 456

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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 4: 4

Final test

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 06/08/2004 Title: None

Great start, and yes I hae emailed you about your chapters, they are too big, Chapters should not be more than 10,000 words:) So please hurry and shorten them so I can finish reading, cut off at the bets parts:(

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/03/2004 Title: None

Oh yes very good Chapter indeed, oh and France, there is a such thing as a virginal membrane also called the hymen (hy·men) the membranous fold which partially or wholly occludes the external orifice of the vagina. Which is where the term 'pop her cherry' come from. OT I know but, Dar is correct. You did your research well Dar. Keep this coming, please.

Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/03/2004 Title: None

My Fault I beta'd and added that detail to Dar's sentence, I don't do fantasy Spuffy and totally forgot, my bad, it's been changed back . Sorry and sorry Dar for that mix up.

Author's Response: i thought i fixed that before i posted it. things happen lol

Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/27/2004 Title: None

Love it, like always:)

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/01/2004 Title: None

I think it's a good start but a bit rushed, take your time and try to work in more details. I like it so far and want to read more, as for how you write the characters, its your story and you tell it how you like, if others don't like it, let them write their own. Fic is short for Fiction: 'Literature made up of imaginary events and characters'. Which leaves the door wide open to mold and mesh them how we want within the plot, and in your story Tara's behavior has purpose, I read that much in the summary. So again don't let others write your story, you're doing well, but try to take your time with it and please do continue:) Pari

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 07/10/2004 Title: None

I;ve already told you this, but warrants repeating. You have done a wonderful job with this chapter, it clearly shows your growth as a wonderful writer. Great deatils and its not rushed, lovely flow to it. Cannot wait for more.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/04/2004 Title: None

that was great, but why did you leave it like that:( Just when it was getting soooo good. UPDATE please and soon:)

Any Last Requests by pattyanne Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Spike and Buffy fight it out and she loses. He asks if she has any last requests,and her answer really surprises him!
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8663
[Report This] Published: 07/04/2004 Updated: 07/11/2004
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 03/25/2005 Title: Chapter 6: part 6

Just re-read this story and I still love it:)

I Put A Spell On You by pattyanne Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 25]
Summary: A lust spell is cast, and it catches Buffy and Spike up in it.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8086
[Report This] Published: 07/04/2004 Updated: 07/13/2004
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/05/2004 Title: Chapter 2: part 2

HOT DAMN!! Now that's what I like...YEAH!! Continue, like right now, this instance...WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOW....in case ya can't tell I LOVED this fic!!:D

Bite Your Tongue by pattyanne Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 20]
Summary: A 'Daddy's Girl' story, also with a bit of Mommy/Daddy fun. Set a little in the future of the series, where Katie is 5 years old.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5153
[Report This] Published: 07/10/2004 Updated: 07/10/2004
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/10/2004 Title: Chapter 1: x

YES what Dar just said. You must continue or expect the hounds to be sent out for you;) Great...so very cute and so exactly how Spike would be, Love it.

Mistaken Identity by Pari Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: My take on the return of Willow and Spike in season 7. Thought I had already posted this here, guess not:D Enjoy.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Horror, Angst
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14638
[Report This] Published: 07/10/2004 Updated: 07/10/2004
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 08/04/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Testing

Author's Response: 123

Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 08/04/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

another test

Author's Response: crosses fingers

Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 08/04/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

final test I hope

Author's Response: YES!!!!

Author's Response: It works

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/13/2004 Title: None

It was a good read, too quick:) I only had one complaint, Spike with all the crying and in a public place...wasn't feeling that too much *my poor Baby*, but over all great and I too look forward to a part 2:) Pari

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/17/2004 Title: None

I had to respond to this chapter, it had to be without a doubt the saddest and perfectly done scenes I've ever read, wow...when he's on the ladder and she's gripping his legs, pleading and crying...WoW!! Ok enough praising your excellent skills and back to the fic:)

Reviewer: parisian Signed Liked
Date: 07/17/2004 Title: None

Holy Shit!!! Whoa!! Uhm...wowow, you gonna leave it there:o Come on...hurry with the next part, PLEASE!!