Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm not exactly new in the fanfiction world. I've been around for a little while. However, I just published my very first original erotic scifi novel, The Unnamed, which can be found here: http://www.excessica.com/books/index.php?main_page=product_info&products_id=1379
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47119
Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One
I think I love the story already ;) very hot and wicked.
Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Two
Loved the image of Buffy hopping down the street all tied up with breasts bouncing. This looks like it's going to be beyond amusing.
Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Five
Molesting Spike is always a fun idea.
Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 6: Six
You discribe the chaos very well, and everything is well written and flows. I got a good mental picture of their fight.
Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 8: Eight
I can't help but wonder how long Spike's had that car, and yet as soon as it's within Buffy's reach it falls more and more apart. Poor Spike. He can't hold on to anything long term around her.
Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen
A literal roll in the hay, always fun.
Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen
Wonderful way to introduce Xander into the mix, lol.
Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 17: Seventeen
This story certainly doesn't stop getting amusing. It's rare that you get to see Buffy and Spike in a carefree invironment, especially when some of her friends come along.
Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 18: 18
lol, very funny stripping Xander scene.
Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen
lol, I absolutely loved the scene with the kitten laying on Spike's parts. Very funny.
Date: 11/29/2006 Title: Chapter 22: Twenty-Two
Love the ending with them screwing against the wall. It's how they began their time together in the show, only the ending to this story is how it should have gone. Hot and passionate, but tender and loving at the same time. Good job with this story, it was an original idea, and I hope you write plenty more.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 109 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 335000
Date: 10/26/2006 Title: Chapter 9: The Struggle
I love the way you kept us guessing at who was going to win. You could never really tell for sure either way.
Date: 10/27/2006 Title: Chapter 29: Confessions
I like the way you introduced Dawn in this. Even if Dawn wasn't always the best of characters, I always loved the relationship that she and Spike shared. I love how much more detail you bring to the relationship between Spike and all the Summer's women, too.
Date: 10/29/2006 Title: Chapter 78: Mastery
At least you acknolwedge that everything between Buffy and Spike isn't going to be all sunshine and roses after everything that's happened. Something like that takes a toll, and unfortunately that's something that some authors tend to ignore. You've got your readers feeling the stress, and that's something that makes it a good page turner.
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None
Her reaction was very realistic. It wasn't the extatic that alot of people like to write, and wasn't blindly furious.
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None
Uh oh, poor bitter Spike. He's going to screw something up, I just know it.
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None
The beginning was beautiful, very touching memories put together in a way that almost brought tears to the eyes. Spike's done major wrong, here. Will he ever be able to make up for this?
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None
Poor Buffy, how horrible that she's without her memories. This is a very original story line, I haven't read many like this before. I hope they find her.
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None
Ah, the tension! I really hope they get Buffy back soon!
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None
Yay! He has her! The emotions you portray are very intense, very realistic and true to their relationship.
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None
Ahhh, and more mystery. Love this story. I need more, more more! It's definitely original, and emotional: one to be proud of.
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 11/22/2006 Title: None
It needs a bit of beta work, but it's definitely a great idea. I always thought Spike deserved much better than Buffy had EVER given him, in any part of the show. Rubbing in the fact that someone could actually treat him decently might be the perfect way to go.
Author's Response: Up till this chapter I have not had it completly beta'd. But this chapter was looked over, and hopefully I will get the first few chapters betad. Well in the upcoming chapters we might just see how much better things might be if he stays with Katie. But honestly can Spike stay away from our leading lady?