Penname: Alissa [Contact] Real name: *
Member Since: 09/12/2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Totally in love with Spuffy.
I'm a budding writer, so feedback to fics is greatly appreciated.
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Time After Time by Addie Logan Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Sometimes love is all about timing...
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Freaky/Kinky
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17899
[Report This] Published: 03/20/2008 Updated: 05/21/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 03/26/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

That was a lovely part- to be honest, I didn’t see that exact outcome coming; I thought maybe 'The Wife' was going to turn out to be dead and William wasn’t sure if he could move on or not, but I like your version just as much.
I also liked how Buffy & William seemed to be fated to meet. Very romantic.
I wonder if 'The Wife' will be making a surprise reappearance during this story…?

Speak Now by Vanilla Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 418]
Summary: The day of her wedding, Buffy Summers realizes she’s making the mistake of her life, and flees on the back of the motorcycle of one of the catering waiters. Spike Pratt is hell-bent on leaving town the next day, then the impulsive decision to rescue Buffy from her fate throws his plans into a tailspin. For just one night they come together with no expectations, but with the harsh light of day comes the realization that sometimes life is what happens when you're making other plans.
Nominated at the Spuffy Awards for Best Fantasy Romance and Best Fluff. Nominated at Spark and Burn Awards for Best WIP and Best Fantasy. Nominated at the Cradle of Humanity Awards for Best Story.

Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43715
[Report This] Published: 03/20/2008 Updated: 10/08/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 03/20/2008 Title: Chapter 1: “Want to get out of here?”

I'm intrigued!
This is a really interesting start- looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

Author's Response: Yay, i'm glad you'll be reading, Alissa! Thanks for reviewing, glad to hear you like it so far!

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 03/24/2008 Title: Chapter 2: “Where are we?”

This is very sweet; I'm enjoying it a lot. I loved how believable you made that large chunk of speech- it just sounded so realistic. Sometimes writers fall into the trap of allowing conversations to sound really stilted, but that flowed perfectly. I also LOVED all the little details you added; the pancakes etc. It's a very thoughtful piece of writing and I'm really looking forward to an update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your compliments, Alissa. I'm so glad the dialogue is coming off well, that's the most fun part but also the hardest to write, so it's great to hear it sounds natural and realistic. So happy you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 03/26/2008 Title: Chapter 3: “Are you sure you don’t want me to come get you?”

I really, truely, honestly LOVE this!
Not much else I can say really, except that I was so happy to see an update to this fic that I literally "Yay!"ed.


Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much Alissa! I'm very proud I made you "yay!" with an update! So so happy you're loving it so much!

Maybe More by Dorians Kitten Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 247]
Summary: William Pratt is busy trying to blend in and survive his new life and school when Buffy Summers crashes into his life. He tries to convince himself that he is thrilled to simply be the friend of such a charismatic whirlwind, but could it be that she might, just maybe, be looking to him for more. Nominated at the Spuffy Awards round 16 for Best Fantasy Romance. Runner Up at the COH Awards for Lonely School. Thank YOU!
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42485
[Report This] Published: 03/21/2008 Updated: 05/11/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 04/30/2008 Title: Chapter 12: Tweleve

Horrible misunderstandings. I hope William realises the truth soon. He'll need Buffy if things get bad with his mum.
This fic is definitely one of my favourites at the moment. Can’t wait for more!

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/2008 Title: Chapter 21: Twenty-One

Oh, no, please don't get the wrong idea, William! The previous chapter was too beautiful for everything to get thrown away on a silly misunderstanding!
Love it! More please.

Summary: Once, William Pratt was a quiet poet, madly in love with his wife, Drusilla. Now, Spike is a loner, hunting in the night for the monster who took her away. He is focused on vengeance, making no room for anything else in his life – until his plan to get his revenge takes a turn he never could have predicted.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47681
[Report This] Published: 03/22/2008 Updated: 05/20/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 03/22/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Wow, this is a great start! I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I love a bit of angst myself, so I think this might just be my sort of thing. The characterisation of Spike in this first chapter was what really caught my attention- it was just so 'real', for want of a better word. I hope there's more to come. This is already shaping up to be a wonderful read.

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 03/26/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

This is the first "Buffy is a Vampire" fic that I have actually enjoyed. Normally they’re not my sort of thing at all, but I'm loving this! I think it's because your characterisation of Vampire Buffy and Human Spike are incredibly believable. I'm so intrigued; I can’t wait to find out what's going to happen, and whether or not Spike will realise that Vampires can actually love. I’m sensing that this fic might go all Stockholm syndrome-y... Looking forward to it.

Summary: Photobucket
Buffy Summers and William 'Spike' Bradley have been best friends for the past four years. Spike thinks of Buffy as a little sister but Buffy has been in love with him since the moment she saw him. How will she handle it when she finally decides to tell him how she feels and he has found someone else?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37972
[Report This] Published: 04/09/2008 Updated: 09/08/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 04/26/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

God, this is so completely amazing!
I'm not sure how on earth I missed this fic, but i've just spent the best part of 45 mins catching up on it, and I love it! I got pretty choked up by the last couple of chapters, but a little angst never hurt anyone- especially when it's written well.
Gorgeous stuff- really looking forward to the next part!


Author's Response: thank you so much! that means a lot! i hope u continue to read!!

Summary: “I was once a bad ass vampire, but love…and a pesky curse defanged me. Now I’m just a big, fluffy puppy with bad teeth.” Okay…actually that had nothing to do with the plot, but I love that quote. Anyway…think post-Chosen and a little blonde Slayer ready to get back what’s hers – at any cost. Spells, time travel, and a whole lot of fluffy goodness!
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33315
[Report This] Published: 04/28/2008 Updated: 07/21/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 04/28/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I really enjoyed that first part. Cant wait to see how this story develops.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Please keep reading!

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 04/30/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Proposition

William?! Oh my god, I love that! Wow, I'm so excited to see where this is going!
Fab part. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yea!!!!!! Another William fan. My heart does odd futters every time there is a human-William flashback. He's just too cute for words. I'm glad your excited about it. Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 05/05/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Living London 1880

I really hope she isn't too late... I was looking forward to her wooing William!
I'm really loving this. I have such a soft spot for time travel fics, and this is shaping up to be a really lovely one.
Just a quick point that I thought I'd mention- I'm assuming that Bridget is supposed to be cockney, so if I'm wrong ignore this, but generally speaking she wouldn't miss out her h's, eg. "t’ings". She'd be more likely to pronounce her "th's" as f's, and to miss of t's and g's when they come at the end of words. Sorry for being so annoyingly picky, but being English, I thought it might be helpful for future reference.

Love this story. Hope there's more to come!


Author's Response: No worries at all. I appreciate all comments. I'm not really sure what accent I was going for...but I'll keep your comments in mind if I write more Bridget dialogue. Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 05/13/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Meeting William

Absolutely loved that part.
So glad that they've found each other. And this line- "While this reaction usually led them to a very adult version of whom could pin whom on the ground first" was brilliant and supplied me with the most delicious visuals! Wonderful.

Author's Response: Visuals are always of the good. Hehe. Thanks for the review and I'm glad that I'm keeping your imagination going....*smirk*

Promised by Dorians Kitten Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 499]
Summary: William knew that she considered him a friend or maybe even a big brother, but she'd promised to marry him once and he had every intention of holding her to it. Just as soon as he worked up the nerve to remind her, that is. Who says you can't find your soul-mate in preschool? Nominated at the Sunny D Awards and at Cradle of Humanity! Thank You.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54587
[Report This] Published: 05/11/2008 Updated: 10/20/2009
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 05/11/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One

Oh, wow, I love it already!
Really looking forward to the next part! It's so cute!

Author's Response: Thank You! :D I have a weakness for cute.

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 05/11/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Loved that chapter! Felt truely sorry for William though. Brother?!
I hope there's more to come.

Author's Response: I know :( -But she didn't really say that. She just lacks the words to describe her feelings. Thanks for reviewing!!!

Summary: Goes AU during 'Becoming'. The soul restoration spell has further-reaching consequences than anyone could have predicted, changing Buffy's life forever. And when her life begins to fall apart around her, she finds understanding in the last place she would have looked. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Nominated for Best Alternate Reality, Best Angst and Best WIP at the Fang Fetish Awards Round 9, for Best General Saga and Best Spike Characterization at the Spuffy Awards Round 15 and for Best Angst, Best Drama, Best Plot and Best Unfinished at the SunnyD Awards.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Buffy/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75792
[Report This] Published: 06/03/2008 Updated: 08/01/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 06/08/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Progress

Wow, love it. Can't believe I didn't read it before-hand to be honest. Really looking forward to another part. *favourites*

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 06/10/2008 Title: Chapter 15: Hurt

So, it turns out that I have absolutely no patience whatsoever, and I decided to go over to BSV and read this there. I am so completely hooked. This is without a doubt one of the best fics I've read in a long time. Just fabulous.

Summary: Buffy Summers is living the perfect life. A loving husband, a beautiful four-year-old girl and the home she’s always dreamed of. When an unexpected accident happens…everything changes, and she has a decision to make. Thought of this idea while watching a movie recently called ‘Another Day’, not the same concept though, slightly ‘Normal Again’ too.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Buffy/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8537
[Report This] Published: 07/10/2008 Updated: 10/29/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 07/10/2008 Title: Chapter 2: How Could This Happen?

I'm really enjoying this- It's so well written, and I'm really anxious to find out what's happened to Deanna. Hope there's more to come!

Something Redux by dreamweaver Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 64]
Summary: RoguePoets Photobucket A year after Spike’s death in the Hellmouth, Buffy is flung back in time. Winner of Best Long at the Rogue Poet Awards! Thank you, all the mods and everyone who voted for me! And for Best Long and Best Lighthearted at the Fang Fetish Awards!
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35333
[Report This] Published: 07/10/2008 Updated: 07/13/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 07/10/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! Love this *favourites*
I hope there's more to come? This is awesome!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you like it! Chapter 2 will be up this afternoon.

Summary: In 1943 Spike is captured by the British army and given a chance to save Dru's life - and his own. And in 2001, Buffy is given a chance by Quentin Travers to travel back in time to save the world - again!
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84802
[Report This] Published: 08/07/2008 Updated: 03/06/2010
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 08/11/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Wow, love this already! Hope there's more to come, it's fabulous! Really original take on a time travel fic :P

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Summary: Goes AU during 'Entropy'. When Buffy catches Spike and Anya kissing, the green-eyed monster takes over. But could finally letting her feelings out be a good thing for the troubled Buffy, as jealousy brings about some surprising revelations.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18054
[Report This] Published: 08/12/2008 Updated: 09/24/2008
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 08/15/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Another fab chapter. Really hope there's more to come, I just love the concept! *favourites*

Author's Response: Of course there's more to come! :-) Glad you like.

Summary: Season 4 Initiative based. Buffy is captured by the Initiative before Spike but when they are pitted against each other for 'testing' they continue their shaky truce. The duo have to put past feelings aside in order to find a way out of the Initiative and work together to bring down the operation. Buffy is finally forced to see the world in shades of gray and learns more than a few new things about the so-called 'evil' demon community in Sunnydale
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49178
[Report This] Published: 01/08/2009 Updated: 08/28/2010
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 01/14/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Am really enjoying this! Hope there's more to come :P

Author's Response: Thank you very much. There's more to come soon!

Summary: It's been five years. She thought she was happy, but now...everything will change. *Nominated at the Sunnydale Memorial Awards*
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32072
[Report This] Published: 02/27/2009 Updated: 07/22/2010
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 03/08/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really looking forward to seeing where you take this fic- fab start.
I was half expecting the words of the spell to be "the man YOU love most in the world", however I guess Buffy will just have to figure that out for herself the hard way.
Hope there's more to come!

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 07/14/2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Really enjoying this! Hope there's more soon- can't wait to see how this turns out :p Great work!

Summary: Set in Season Two, what if on Halloween Buffy dresses as a vampire instead of a coiffed debutante? What if she was found by Spike then? How will a mated slayer change their world?








*Nominated for SunnyD awards Round 20: Best Angst, Best AU, Best Characterization (Angelus) and Best Episode Re-Write


*Thank You to whom ever nominated for this story to be voted upon on the website, The Readers Have Chosen, for the month of November! Thank you so much!!!!

Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78167
[Report This] Published: 11/05/2009 Updated: 02/07/2010
Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked
Date: 11/24/2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

This is so awesome. Completely love it- really can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying my story, update real soon!