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The Truce by Eternal_red Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 442]
Summary: Once in a galaxy, far, far...oh, that’s been done. Right then. Humankind has been at war with the Aurelians for decades. When the two sides finally reach the point where negotiation is better than annihilation, a truce is called and a treaty negotiated on the planet currently under dispute. The peace treaty is cemented symbolically by the joining in marriage of the two youngest soldiers present, thereby throwing Buffy and Spike into a relationship that they really, really, don’t want. Although not a traditional Vampire versus Slayer scenario, it is close enough to be familiar.
Categories: Fantasy/AU
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61133
[Report This] Published: 01/13/2008 Updated: 06/14/2010
Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 02/23/2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I would like to compliment not only your writing style but an original plot. I am so looking forward next chapters. Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for that. At long last I have a new chapter ready so I hope you'll like this one too.

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 02/24/2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

More I think about your wonderfull story more questions I have. Like will Buffy be jealouse of Droo? Will we find out how Spike turn to be Droo's second favorite lover? Are Aurelians reproduce like humans? Is the a way to prolong Buffy's life?

Author's Response: All very interesting questions, hopefully I'll get to answer them all before long, although it'll be hard to explain why Spike was Droo's second favourite lover and not her first!

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 04/15/2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

You know then I asked you about how Spike turn to be Droo's second favorite I mean the stroy of they 'relationship'. Not why he is second. How they met why he agreed to be another 'man' and so on :) Stil looking forward to all kind of trips down memory line.

Author's Response: I was teasing you a little there. Still you're right I should put in a little backstory there, perhaps I can go into it when they meet up with Droo again? After all, Buffy won't be so uncaring of Spike's previous relationships now.

Summary: Buffy Pratt goes to great lengths to make sure her husband doesn’t regret marrying her. Nominated for Best Romance and Happy Parents Award at Cradle of Humanity Awards. Photobucket
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26609
[Report This] Published: 08/06/2008 Updated: 05/26/2009
Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 03/18/2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you so much for update! I love that story I love the idea a lot and I cant wait to see how it all turn out.
thank you

Author's Response: Ya, I love this idea too...out of all my WIP i know it won't be hard to go all the way and complete this one.

Summary: Imagine this as a re-telling of Season 6. Beginning at the moment Spike and Buffy see one another for the first time since her resurrection, the Slayer finds a comfort in the vampire that she’d never felt before. When their respective feelings for one another rapidly grow into a secret romance, what will happen when Buffy’s friends learn the truth?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232447
[Report This] Published: 01/10/2009 Updated: 12/15/2010
Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 03/06/2009 Title: Chapter 46: Late Night Chat

Oh no! No-no-no-no-no-no!!! Please its going to be fine, right?


Author's Response: :) Thanks carrot! You'll find out very soon!

Summary: Ob-la-di, Ob-la-da, Life Goes On in the "Unexpected" Universe . . . . . . follows "Danger Across Dimensions". A one chapter short that is a continuation of the AU story "Unexpected".
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Buffy has some unresolved fears stemming from her death and wants Spike to help her work through them.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: Unexpected Universe by Passion4Spike
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4832
[Report This] Published: 05/21/2010 Updated: 05/21/2010
Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 05/21/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lemmings

ah... wont such activity hurt the baby? but overall awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

Author's Response: Hey . . . Willow\'s protection spell on the baby protects it from pretty much ANYTHING . . . Just as Annie was protected before . . . Thanks for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you! -Passion4Spike 2010.05.21

Summary: A several chapter continuation of the Unexpected Universe. Follows "Have You Ever Really Loved a Woman".
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Can Spike and Buffy's marriage survive when they have a serious, irreconcilable difference of opinion about the Gem of Amarra and Angel? Can they survive individually if they don't have each other to run to or will they die of broken hearts?

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If you haven't read the other stories in the Unexpected Universe, then this won't make much sense. Check the Series 'Unexpected' To see all the stories in order, here's a link:
The Unexpected Universe : Series
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: Unexpected Universe by Passion4Spike
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99158
[Report This] Published: 12/01/2010 Updated: 12/18/2010
Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/05/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Crazy Dreamers

I think it's second time ever I feel for Cordy...

Author's Response: Hi Carrot... Yeah, Cordy can be hard to feel sorry for - glad that I could accomplish that. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love to hear from you! -P4S 2010.12.05

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/11/2010 Title: Chapter 8: Alone Again, Naturally

It was so heartwrenching! Perfect! I am really curious how'll going to work your magic so thsoe two can be back together. Right now its seems IMPOSSIBLE :) thanks!

Author's Response: Hi Carrot! Oh, I love heartwrenching ... I really do! I\'m glad I\'m not the only one! The heart wrenching will continue for a while ... I think the voice of reason that will finally get thru to Spike may be surprising, but there will be many of them.... more to come!! Thanks soooo much for reading and stopping in here! It\'s really great to know I\'m not the only one that likes this stuff! :D -P4S 2010.12.11

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/12/2010 Title: Chapter 9: If I Could Turn Back Time

Ok. I don't get it. Spike run away and staied away and slept with Harmony and Buffy found it in herself to forgive him. And am I wrong or was Spike first who trow a panch? I know he had reasons to be heart but I feel he overact/overreact. And Buffy feeling so down... But dont get me wrong! Love angst to pieces!!! More please!!!

PS: Wonder what would be his reaction if the dream staied it would be Dru who'll save his daughter?!

Author's Response: Hi Carrot! There are some inconsistencies in Spike\'s reasoning that will be pointed out to him by the others in the group very soon... also, some of his own past actions will be brought up to him. Not sure if the Harmony thing would be quite on the level of this, since at the time they weren\'t married, although he\'d promised that he wouldn\'t leave Buffy, but you\'re right, she did forgive him. You have a good point about what if it was Dru instead of Angel? He just really hates Angel - as much as he wants to think it\'s about Buffy lying to him, a big part of it is because the lie was about Angel. When Spike\'s hurt, he is definately the first one to lash out, perhaps without thinking everything through.

Glad you\'re liking the angst - got more coming!! :D

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you! -P4S 2010.12.12

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/13/2010 Title: Chapter 10: Love Hurts

...and if it zero tolerance zone: he run, and staied away and f*cked Harmony and then waltz in like nothing had happen! It was Buffy who apologiesed for treating him badly cause she left him behind on cemetary! He dost trust Angel because of Dru but he blames mother of his kids for it. Lovely. I could justify being hurt but things he says to Annie all wrong. They will get back together and she will have years in terapy... Will she respect her mother after it all? She already feels all insecure and can't share her worries with anyone. So sad he is ruining his kids life. But you right he think he had all the reason to do so... Love it! Counting time till next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi Carrot! Oh, you are so right on all counts ... how could their kids not spend lots of time in therapy, even without the stress of Spike and Buffy separating or divorcing? But without Buffy there, heaven knows what the kids will do. And yeah, Spike thinks he\'s right - he thinks he knows best and that he can raise the kids fine without her ... it will take a lot of voices to convince him otherwise - perhaps one voice of reason will come from an unexpected place ... Will post another chappie tomorrow or maybe late tonight ... it won\'t be long for you to count! Thanks soooo much for reading and hanging in here through this very sad time! -P4S 2010.12.13

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/14/2010 Title: Chapter 10: Love Hurts

Ok I can't fall asleep last night thinking about your story :) And more I think about it more I am sure it won't work for Spike and Buffy if at some point they just kiss and make up. I think it all brough up more serious issue. Spike won't trust Buffy as long as Angel is undead and around. Maybe because of Cecily and Dru he cant trust her 100% at all (and sure recent lie just added to taht insecurity)... Buffy can't relay on him 100% because he can be stuborn and if he decide there is no hurm he wont see it till it late. Don't get me wrong I want them back together! I am totaly SPUFFY GIRL! But I think they both should really _work_ for it. Maybe they should be back to living under same roof but build up they relationship back together or maybe start anew... Cause to forgive and t forgetis not teh same. If tehy forgive each other few chapters later will they be able to never bging back the issue. Will Spike be alright every time Buffy says there is sele in shoe shop? How will Buffy feel whenever she need to bring up her slayer-dreams?.. I hope you are not upset with my blabbering

Author's Response: Hi Carrot! You\'re totally right! It will take more than each one apologizing and forvgiving the other. They both have to realize their mistakes and work on correcting their future behavior if they\'re going to make it. You\'ll find that many chapters later they are both still struggling with those issues and struggling to change themselves for the better; this experience won\'t soon be forgotten ... but hopefully, they can both learn from it and build from there.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such an insightful review! And NO WAY do I get upset with \'blabbering\' ... I\'m touched that everyone feels as strongly as I do about our couple. I am sorry that you\'ve lost sleep, though ... keep in mind that my muse is evil, but he\'s also a romantic at heart ... so they\'ll find a way to fix it.

Thanks again!! Love your reviews!! -P4S 2010.12.14

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/15/2010 Title: Chapter 12: I Feel the Earth Move

*happy sign* perfect!...




Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!!! Yay! Thanks so much for stopping in here! More to come ... but the worst is over... for now. -P4S 2010.12.15

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/16/2010 Title: Chapter 13: Happy Birthday

Annie's birthday wish is absolutly HILLARIOUS! And your-verse Faith is really cool!

Author's Response: Hi carrot! LOL! Glad you liked Annie\'s Birthday wish! Poor Spike! My Faith has matured a bit ... still a naughty girl, but more level headed than she might\'ve been a few years ago! She is very cool! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here... I really love hearing from you! -P4S 2010.12.16

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/17/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Masterpiece

First phoro of Spike i this chapter is all time favorite of mine. That smile! He never before or after smiled like that. All warm with love and kindness and playfullness... happy sign. And his hair ... I think it was moment I fall in love with Spike. I believe that ring effectivly answer my question about possibility of another kid. I also with another reader who asked for more of twins.

Author's Response: Hi carrot! That\'s one of my very favorite pictures of Spike, too... so sweet and that head tilt ... ahhhhh - swoony!!

Glad you\'re enjoying the story. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here. I love hearing from you! -P4S 2010.12.18

Summary: Post-Something Blue, Buffy discovers that she's pregnant...
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2541
[Report This] Published: 12/07/2010 Updated: 12/07/2010
Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 12/07/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it was beautiful!

Summary: Concerned that he has spent too long alone, William's cousin and uncle ask Aphrodite to help them locate William's soul mate. They are only following family tradition when they kidnap the girl and bring her to The Underworld to be with him. Hey, it worked out just fine with Persephone. But can a modern girl find love when she's living a life she'd always thought was a myth?
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27340
[Report This] Published: 03/06/2011 Updated: 09/16/2011
Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked
Date: 03/08/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Plot idea is great. But I cant wait for more William-Buffy interaction. Have William love anyone before?