Is this story the greatest thing humans have done since the invention of plumbing and oral sex? Yes, yes it is.

This story is lovely. You're a wonderful writer. I like this bitter version of the character; he's fascinating.

I'm really enjoying the characterizations and pacing of this story. It's disturbing and well-paced. Great work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ve never had a comment about my pacing before, I suppose its not intentional, but just a very unconcious but individual attribute about the way I write a story so a positive comment is very well appreciated :) sorry I took so long to reply to this post, for some reason my spuffy review email alerts keep going in my junk hotmal folder so they don\'t get sent to my blackberry and thats the main way I read emails now :/

This was very sweet. I'm interested to see where it all goes.

Author's Response: Well, thanks so much for taking the time to let me know your thoughts. I\'m hoping to update at least bi-weekly from this point on. *crosses fingers*

This story is so cute! It's like a very dirty romantic comedy with the promise of actual Spike-flavored sex, so it's a billion, times better than any romantic comedy. Looking forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Thanks Minx! I\'m so flattered you are enjoying this. The next chapter will be coming soon, I promise!

That was lovely! I really enjoyed it.

I liked her solitary contemplation about her relationship with Angel. I wish there had been an overt moment like that in the show. This was very well done, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I wish canon Buffy had realised just how little she and Angel had in common. So happy you liked that contemplation! I want Buffy to move on and grow up. ;) More very soon. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

I like the concentration on mundane activities in this chapter, like the detail about clicking the pen. Illustrated really well the intensity of the moment, the way people focus on odd things when they're very upset. The same could be said for Will gathering up a hand full of pens. Funny and sad at the same time.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you picked up on this and found the meaning behind it, instead of seeing it as meaningless filler. Thanks!

I love the image of her knuckles looking like teeth. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks Minx. I appreciate you reading and reviewing!

Don't be scared. This story is intriguing, I'd be interested in learning a little bit about her educational background and her calling to this type of work.
Also, minor typo toward the end of the story. The name Buffy has a space between the Buff and the y.

Author's Response: Thanks for spotting the mistake... I try to spot all of them but I always miss at least one.

Yeah, I meant interesting in a good way, the baby just started to cry and I had to end my thought. Looking forward to his reaction. I think he's going to break her heart a little bit in the next chapter. Also, more stuff hinted at with the Xander/Will argument. Starting to wonder if Xander might be angry for reasons Will misunderstands. So yes, interesting, thrilling, excited for more.

Author's Response: You\'re definitely onto something...More soon! Thanks for the second review!

Christ that was frustrating, but then again, so was all of high school. I like how progressive Joyce is, I like that Buffy is accepting of the fact that the boys are probably gay and she's just upset that she's being kept out of the loop. I wonder what this party will be about and if Riley will continue to be a sweet, if bland presence or if things are going to get ugly between him and Buffy.


Author's Response: She\'s definitely starting to come to terms with the idea, and now she really just wants Xander to be happy. The party is going to bring up some new issues...and as far as Riley goes...:) Thanks for the review!