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Bio:
Just a girl who loves fic.
I also post at Beyond Twilight and Spuffy Online. My LJ name is "impertinence", so if I ever go MIA over here, that's where to check for fic updates/excuses for why there haven't been any fic updates. ;)
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Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24638
Date: 03/16/2005 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
still a great story, one tip though: put the actions of the characters (ie, 'spike shook his head') with the characters' dialogue ('No, if I told her...'). That way there's less confusion about who's talking :)
Date: 03/16/2005 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
WOO-HOOO! Spuffy at last!!! Seriously, you're doing a good job, keep it up!
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 03/14/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Bye, bye Angel.
Oooh, great story. When's Buffy finally going to tell Spike the truth? Good going with all the angst, it was really realistic. Update soon!
Author's Response: Huh? She already told him the truth. Oh, you mean the Parker truth. That will come in the next chapter! Thanks, gotta love angst. I will!! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/16/2005 Title: Chapter 22: Words of love.
AAAAAAH! OK, now you have to update FAST, or I am going to go crazy!!! Great story!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'll see when I get time, glad that you’re enjoying the story, thought! =)
Categories: Ficlets/Song Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1317
Date: 03/11/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Voices
LOL, funny and poignant, great job!
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4657
Date: 03/13/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Summertime Confessions
Awww...very sweet story. Great job, I loved it! Keep posting!
Categories: Ficlets/Song Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129
Date: 05/04/2005 Title: Chapter 1: poem
Very very good, esp. the first two lines. I like how he mentions how much he loves her and Dawn, and then in the last line just *happens* to drop the info about going to get his soul :) Good rhythm, too!
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 03/16/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Diary.
awesome job, both with the sibling squabbling (it's pretty obvious you have a younger sister, lol) and the beginnings of what looks like some serious sexual tension. update soon, plz, i want to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! =D It is? Well I have, and she's a REAL pain in my butt. =P Hehe, you know me to well. I'll do that! =D
Date: 03/17/2005 Title: Chapter 2: Protecting You.
VERY good. It felt a little rushed, but all in all it was a great chapter. Hope the thing with the tests goes well, school sux! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I know. I felt it too; I was just under a whole lot of pressure, because my dad was buggering me, telling me that he needed the computer... Anyway, since I'm free from school tomorrow, I think I'm gonna update today! =D Shoot, I told myself that this time, I would only update once a week... I need to practise on that one........ Well, hope you don't mind..
Date: 06/23/2005 Title: Chapter 15: Sleeping Arrangements and Birthday Planning
Ooh, I love you forever!!!! You updated!!! lol this chapter was great, though I'm still reeeeeally wanting some Spuffy =D I'm actually rather glad, though, that Spike turned her down, just because I don't think she was quite ready yet. The whole party thing should be interesting *g* so update soon!!!!
Date: 07/19/2005 Title: Chapter 16: Discovering New Sides.... and Parts.
Augh! Hateyouhateyouhateyou....you are EVIL!!!! lol just kidding, I don't hate you--would that be Joyce or Giles who interrupted? Can't wait to find out...update as soon as you get back!!!! Oh, and the smoochies? Very cute =D
Categories: Ficlets/Song Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 555
Date: 03/17/2005 Title: Chapter 1: ...
very good, poignant and captured the mood of the whole relationship. excellent!
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66744
Date: 05/03/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Daughter of Destiny
Hm...very interesting...you've got Spike's character down pat, and I liked the bit with him in a Peter Pan outfit =)
Date: 05/03/2005 Title: Chapter 2: Unmixy Relationships
Aw, Buffy's in love =) Can't wait to see who the new Slayer'll be...good banter, and nice bit with the whole boobs thing. Looks like Spike might be feeling a bit of an attraction, too...
Date: 05/03/2005 Title: Chapter 3: Maybe...
Can't wait to see what Aubrey'll be liike. Still an interesting fic.
Date: 05/03/2005 Title: Chapter 4: Changes
yay, growing up Buffy...still can't wait to see what happens :)
Date: 05/08/2005 Title: Chapter 5: What's it Take?
Aw, poor Buffy...I know what it's like, being treated like a kid when you're kinda not...hope Spike realizes what the hell is going on. Good job =)
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 8: Belonging
Awww...poor Buffy. Poor Spike, too, since Buffy's been being all flirty and there's nothing he can do about it. My reviews for this story have been kinda sporadic, but I just figured I'd let you know (again) that I LOVE IT! You're handling the characters and their interactions wonderfully, especially considering the fact that Willow, Tara, etc. are so much older than Buffy =)
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 9: Ridiculous Wishes
*sigh* Love stories between two immensely stubborn people can get so sticky sometimes...I feel really sorry for Spike, having to deal with the fact that he's half (or maybe all?) in love wth a 17-year-old girl...not to mention the fact that she's the daughter of his grandsire. And then Buffy has to deal with that Aubrey girl, plus Spike's stubbornness...and you, as an author, are still handling it wonderfully.
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 10: Beautiful Mistakes
'bout the last part...awww. It's interesting how you keep making Spike think that his feelings are bad, but at the same time good...leather. hehe. =)
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 11: Platonic Love
lol nice touch w/ the ending bit about Xander =)
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 12: Playing With Fire
hm...interesting. Can Spike kick Angel's ass? 'cuz I can't stand overbearing fatherly types, and Angel was sort of that way even on the show when they were supposedly in love...still a wonderful story!
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 13: Lessons
oh, dear...can't really write any more, I have to go read the next chap to find out what happens...
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 14: Wanting to be Wanted
oh boy...things are really falling apart, aren't they? Your writing is still superb, too bad it has to be sad writing...but I think I get why they're both so angry. I've said this before, but poor, poor Buffy and poor, poor Spike. I really hope they can all work it out...
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 15: Remembrances
Hm, that should be interesting...the telling Angel, I mean. Wonder where Buffy's gonna go? Arg. I'd leave a longer review, but I HAVE to go read the next chapter =)