Great characterization - love the banter.

Whoooohoooo! That was way hot! *fans self* great mix of emotions and sensuality. Damn sexy and fun to read. Can't wait to see how this all turns out.

Brilliant last line! This is the sweetest bit of Spuffy fun. Just love this story. One of my favorites :)

"So she’d been kidnapped by a drunken slayer-killer who thought enough of her to masturbate as she lay unconscious, chained to his bed. Today was so not her day."

Great line! Excellent follow up to the stellar first chapter. This is very in character & feels like an actual episode to me. You've captured Season 3 Buffy & Spike perfectly. Lovely job, I'm thoroughly enjoying this.

Ooooweee! Hot start! One of the sexiest first chapters ever, plus great descriptives & characterization. Looking forward to more :D

Too cute! I love your Lorne. I could practically hear him spouting off the great dialogue. Very enjoyable so far :)

You are completely undoing me with this story. Your Spike is so sweet & so dear; "He could do without sex, had done all those months that Dru was sick. It was being with the loved one that was important."

And your writing is beautiful. The last paragraph made my heart ache. I am thoroughly enjoying this. Just wonderful.

Author's Response: Spike\'s utter commitment is one of the lovely things about him. Thank you so much for liking the story!

Awwww, a sweet, Spuffy ending. Yay! And call me evil but I just love seeing Xander & Angel all riled like that. And this is the best, snottiest insult to Angel I've ever heard: "Peaches! How’s it hanging? Still pretty uselessly, I’ll wager." LOL.



Author's Response: Spike would never have been able to resist that line. :D I\'m so glad you liked it! Always a Spuffy ending with me.

*Applauds* Oh, BRAVO. That was brilliantly written & so full of the real world & its truth & pain that it stole my breath. This is far more angsty than I normally like my fic but it's just too well done not to enjoy & appreciate. You should very seriously be published. You have a gift for story telling, doll. Truly.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. :)

Your descriptions are *golden*: "He felt savagely real and alive when he got back on the street, slashing and weaving through the slow parade of weekend foot traffic with warm blood on his knuckles. He licked his lips and stroked his hair. Lit the night up with a sinister leer."

And this: "As they closed in on the giant prat, Spike got that odd sensation again — the one he always felt whenever they fought side-by-side. It was as though there were a secret conversation going on between their bodies, carved in particles of air. "

Your Spike characterization was just perfect too. You'd almost swear this was dialogue from the show. I loved the peek inside his head & also his "evil errands."

Very interesting premise, can't wait to see where you go with this. Please keep writing. I could read this series forever.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really loved these characters on the show (and particularly their witty repartee). It has been a lot of fun writing this series so far.

“Not a-bloody-gain. First you and now him. What is it about the B52s and you people?” LOL! So cute. Just loved it. Nice to see the Scoobies having some fun for a change. Lovely, lighthearted story :)

Author's Response: YAY! Haha, yeah, I liked coming up with something that just gave the Scoobs a break from the serious impending doom they\'re constantly facing. I was just thinking I need to get the final part of this trilogy written and posted soon, but I\'ve been working on two other projects and finishing IWY first. I must get writing to finish this series off. Thank you for reviewing :)