just finished reading learning curve and totally luv'ed it .
Am now reading silentlu broken and my boyfriends back ,keep writing Spuffy and i'll keep reading.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I will most definitely keep writing Spuffy...my brain gets too many story ideas for me not to :)

Interesting beginning......the obvious NO connection of love between Buffy and Angel is there....he really doesn't know his wife very well.....and Wiliam just might be what mother and daughter needs, LOL. A breath of English air.

He'll tell her, he'll tell her. *dances* Looove the chapter. They made all those presents and it isn't even her birthday. How funny is that?!

Author's Response: Buffy gets an early birthday ;) And told you to stick with me ;) Thanks for reviewing, sweetie.

I'll start to read now - but you know I don't like the B/A part, not a bit... but I start now. :)

Author's Response: See, there's not that much B/A is there.......Thanks for the review!

I think that this is going to be a very good story. I don't think I've read anything like this before which is refreshing. I look forward to more. Great job and update often.

Author's Response: hope you continue to like it and I'll update as often as i can--right now i'm working on every monday

I;m gonna be downright honest cuz I really dig this story and would love to see where it goes. First off, I highly recommened you get a beta. I saw a lot of spelling errors that made it hard to read and I still don't understand the use of the parenthesis was for. Second I'm gonna say the dialogue was good but I would like to see a balance in dialogue and description. It's hard to do but I think you'll know what to put in and what to leave out. As for the story summary, I think it could be better becuase there's a way of giving the premise without giving away the whole story. Last the storyline. this is actually, the first time I've seen one like this so I'm really anxious to see where this goes. The summary had me interested and the first chapter has me hooked so the storyline is refreshingly original. Also I really like the potrayal of the characters but I wasn't sure if this was dealing with Spike or William. I'm know they're the same person but in all honesty they are two different personalities. All in all, it's a great start and definitely worth continuing. I do look forward to more and keep writing.

Author's Response: As to waht you said: I do know that I need a beta, but I'm always very, very unsure of my work so I posted this before I lost the nerve. And I really don't think the summary gave the story away because there's still a lot more to it than them wanting him to teach her. And thank you, thank you, thank you for pointing out the parentheses, I pasted the wrong version in here and I'm working on fixing that now. And I hope that later chapters will make the whole Spike/William thing clear. And thank you so much for you review.