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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2013 - 10:08 pm Title: From Flawed on

Very, very sweet. A good editing to get rid of the grammar errors would make this an even better read.

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Date: 11/05/2013 - 06:39 am Title: Awake

Great story, but the grammar errors are very distracting!

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Date: 11/05/2013 - 06:15 am Title: 7:37 pm

Good start. There are a few typos; for example, a few times it says "where" and it should be "were."

Reviewer: riz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2012 - 12:25 am Title: From Flawed on

loved it!!!

Reviewer: Shay Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2012 - 05:17 pm Title: From Flawed on

great story

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2007 - 05:56 pm Title: From Flawed on

I realz liked this story itš very good

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 04:19 am Title: From Flawed on

Great story! I can't believe it's two years old and this is the first time I've read it. Don't know if authors still check for reviews on their old fics, but hopefully you'll find this and be pleased that someone just got alot of enjoyment from one of your less recent stories. Off to read more of your fics now.

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 01:32 am Title: 7:37 pm

My gut reaction to the first chap? Bloody brilliant luv.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 03:44 pm Title: From Flawed on

I just read your story from beg to end ... loved it. Great piece of Spuffy. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up.

Reviewer: sweet_smiley_smiley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 12:33 am Title: Flawed

Great poem it fits the story and it sounds like it would also go real well with the third season of "Alias"

Reviewer: virce Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2005 - 05:25 pm Title: From Flawed on

Wow lindsay... you wrote one hell of a good story here. ;) I love it. I just have one teeny tiny complain. You could use a beta. ;) Keep writing sweetheart!

Reviewer: Taty_1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2005 - 10:25 am Title: From Flawed on

Awwww...this story was awesome! Thank you SO much for sharing it with us. I loved the poem, so touching. You did a great work, I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Ruby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 07:23 pm Title: From Flawed on

heyy i really like the plot of the story n the poem was really pretty, did u write it??

Reviewer: Sarah1800 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2005 - 02:40 pm Title: From Flawed on

this was such a cool story i liked the fact it was reallllly happy even though spike had a tortured background. i also loved the spongebath scene! ;)

Reviewer: rockerbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 05:53 pm Title: From Flawed on

Just found this story and read it all the way through. Very beautiful story. The poem in chapter 15 was fabulous. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2005 - 06:39 am Title: 7:37 pm

Wow. This is an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it and the poem was awesome. I read your other poems, which were great also. But this is one of the best fics I've read in a while. I hope you write something else soon!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2005 - 02:52 am Title: From Flawed on

Great chap - I liked it lots, Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 09:21 am Title: From Flawed on

Lovely story....

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 06:09 am Title: From Flawed on

I R&R before - ♥

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 06:08 am Title: Flawed

I R&R before - ♥ it! *sigh* - but the old one is gone...

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 04:33 am Title: From Flawed on

LOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! L-O-V-E-D- I-T!!! THANKS FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!! ;)

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 04:27 am Title: Flawed

OMG I LOVED SO MUCH THAT POEM, do you mind if i post it on my space? Of course I'll say that you wrote it. Here you have the adress: http://spaces.msn.com/members/valepuig2805/ Loved the chappy, btw.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2005 - 11:12 pm Title: From Flawed on

That was a really sweet ending. I so loved this fic and I can't wait to read more of your work. Kuddos on a job well done! Much Spuffy luv, Angela

Reviewer: LN Angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Flawed

I truly like this story, and that from the beginning ! It's sweet, funny, romantic and very fairytale like, what with the sleeping beauty (our gorgeous Spike) being awaken by a kiss from his soulmate (because we all know that's what Spike & his Goldilocks are, right ?)... As for the poem, I just think that, like Spike would put it, " it's bloody brilliant !!! " ... It's very well written, it moves me, it makes me feel, because what you say in it is so true... Honestly, a real piece of art for me. Helen, a real fan from France (Sorry for the eventual mistakes in my english grammar, I read and understand english much better than I write it !!! lol)

Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Your english writing is fine, no worries! Im so glad that you like the story and i hope i can keep you liking it, it means so much to me that it moved you. XXX take care Helen Linz

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2005 - 05:46 am Title: Flawed

that poem was sooooo good. loved it sooo much. o wow!!! great job. loved it. great job oh the chapter was great too. lol. post soon. love it.

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