

Date: 09/27/2012 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter 1
As a fantasy, it's pretty hot, but wholly improbable, especially with the simplistic dialogue. Plenty of errors including missing words.

Date: 10/13/2009 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
This fic was odd for me. The way it was written kept on making me think that at the end I was gonna find out that Spike and Buffy were a happy couple who were roleplaying. Still good though.

Date: 09/22/2007 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG this was so amazing I love this story!

Date: 08/29/2005 - 11:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Great fic - very hot ; )

Date: 08/03/2005 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Thats not fair!!! *pout* I want more! Great chapter so far! Im loving the fic! I cant wait to read the next chapter!! I hope that Spike realizes after all of the Spuffy magic that is going to happen in the future that Buffy is the one! lol! Please update soon! :)

Date: 08/02/2005 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...this is kinda like a porno movie. :) Interested in seeing wear you're gonna take it.

Date: 08/02/2005 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
great so far

Date: 08/02/2005 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why not? More :)

Date: 08/02/2005 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hope to see the rest soon!! Naughty Buffy

Date: 08/02/2005 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I REALLY LIKE IT!

Date: 08/02/2005 - 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1
interesting. cant wait for more. i suppose she's already part of the family and i suppose the child already like her so why not have a go at it. can't wait, please more soon.

Date: 08/02/2005 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting! I so want to know what's next.

Date: 08/02/2005 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, please continue. This is going to be a fun fic. I luv Kimber's comment. I like idea of him intending to seduce her the whole time;)

Date: 08/02/2005 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Well...she got bold there lol. I think you should definitely continue this story!

Date: 08/02/2005 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL, one that was a pretty long bad date to come home at 01:45 after saying no to ass grabbing....LOL and his telling her about it a hoot and with his leg rubbing against hers I'd say he was working a bit a seduction mojo himself.....and I bet his wallet is safe and sound in the car....LOL....Go girl write more give Spike the woman he needs that can accept an already made family that can grow.......

Date: 08/02/2005 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Hehehe....she's a bit forward isn't she *grins* I think this will turn into one hot fic,please carry on

Date: 08/02/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1
OHH I LOVE IT !!!!!!!