[Report This]Date: 09/24/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: Freedom
The Andrew scene was great... lol! Loved the new chapters I just read... nice work! :D
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[Report This]Date: 09/23/2007 - 02:08 pm Title: Freedom
Ah they could see Xander because the portal was closed. I wonder what did it, maybe Dawn noticed something? Or she is just to ill now.
They are not home yet (Buffy, Spike, Giles and Xander). When they try to rescue Amy it will take some time too. Hopefully not too late for saving Dawn too.
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[Report This]Date: 09/23/2007 - 01:50 pm Title: Stuck
Yay two chapters :)
After Giles vanished they know Buffy and Spike are in trouble... maybe Anya will be in a better mood now. ;-)
I didn't expect that Xander was able to get out of his trouble on his own and Amy now in trouble herself.
Too bad that Buffy and Spike are only able to look outside to the 'real place' without being able to walk out. ~
Good to see the update; off to read the next chapter :)
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[Report This]Date: 05/17/2007 - 10:08 am Title: Dimension
The dimension Dawn created certainly is interesting. Can't wait to find out how Spike, Buffy and Anya get out of this fix. Fantastic chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 05/16/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: Dimension
Oh Buffy jinxed it indeed. All too tidy, the whole house? Are they still in Sunnydale or in another dimension... Sounds bad.
Dawn could close it? But she isn't aloud to come. Even if that was even more important when Dawn gets slowly drained
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[Report This]Date: 05/09/2007 - 06:35 am Title: Hotel
Loved the twist at the end of chapter. I also enjoyed reading Molly's musings. Wonderful update!
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[Report This]Date: 05/08/2007 - 10:25 pm Title: Hotel
interesting!
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[Report This]Date: 05/08/2007 - 07:33 pm Title: Hotel
Ah a spell. Yeah, better than letting Graham promise not to talk. Mmmh we didn't met Connor yet. Took the other by surprise. Heh heh reprogramming the radio stations, fun to do; will make Angel a tat angry ;-)
Oh my.. what happened to the house? Good thing they drove to Willy's first. Nobody is coming out? Like there is still a portal to who knows where.
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[Report This]Date: 05/08/2007 - 06:50 pm Title: Hotel
really enjoyed this chapter. wonder what's happened to the house. Looking forward to next bit
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[Report This]Date: 05/08/2007 - 06:49 pm Title: Hotel
really enjoyed this chapter. wonder what's happened to the house. Looking forward to next bit
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[Report This]Date: 05/08/2007 - 06:11 pm Title: Hotel
great chapter
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[Report This]Date: 04/16/2007 - 08:34 am Title: The Interrogation
The info Graham spilled was really interesting... I'm not too sure Buffy should have had made the remark about Dawn's keyness in front of Graham though.
Loved the sweet moment Spike and Buffy shared in bed. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm sure Buffy will regret it.
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 02:15 pm Title: The Interrogation
Spike in 'Daddy' mood, wanting Dawn to keep his little nibblet is fun :) Just not for Dawn *gg*
Graham talked.. what a disappointment for Dawn that Graham would have held his orders higher (then her). Area 51? Mmmh-hmmm I wonder what they are doing with all the captured demons there.
And Graham heard too much; they must see that he won't talk.
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[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 07:05 am Title: The Interrogation
i'm with spike pull the head off and drink from the brain stem. looking forward to next
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[Report This]Date: 03/28/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: Sleepy Key
I'm glad Dawn's plan worked. Loved Cordy and Anya's reactions to Graham in his underwear. Good chapter!
Author's Response: lol, well how could they not? Graham is certainly no Spike, but he's not chopped liver!
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2007 - 07:40 pm Title: Sleepy Key
Wood was indeed perplexed *g*. ~ Dawn is only tired, that's good. I wasn't sure if it was worse. I wondered how they'll get Graham to talk. With the truth spell they know at last he won't lie. (I'm not sure if a spell would make you tell everything too? Works it that way? Even better than.)
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[Report This]Date: 03/27/2007 - 10:38 pm Title: Sleepy Key
Glad to see this one continue
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[Report This]Date: 02/18/2007 - 10:27 am Title: Dawn’s plan
That sounds as if Dawn isn't in a good condition but at last she is alive *is glad about that*.
And I'm sure Buffy will have no problem granting Anya's wish.
Graham will have answers (at last some, not all; he isn't so high in rank). I thought first the plan would be dangerous to Dawn but she doesn't want to go in a military base, she wants to kidnap him. That sounds less dangerous and 'doable'.
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[Report This]Date: 02/18/2007 - 07:34 am Title: Dawn’s plan
Dawn certainly has an interesting plan. Can't wait to find out if it works. Great chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 02/14/2007 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 15: Uninvited
Very funny story, I look foward to the Andrew and Dawn continuation
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[Report This]Date: 01/30/2007 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 15: Uninvited
Uh-huh.. Graham. He really tried to crash the party (even if he didn't knew of the party or did he? Anyway...)
Buffy won't be please. The dinner is ruined. And now her father knows.. ah well now she doesn't need to decide how to hide her secret any longer.
Uh-huh.. and it took a lot out of Dawn. I hope she is only tired.
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[Report This]Date: 01/28/2007 - 02:55 am Title: Chapter 15: Uninvited
Poor Buffy, looks like she can never have a party that doesn't end in badness... i'm glad everyone was able to get away safely though. Loved Buffy's Grandpa in law remark. Great update!
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[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 15: Uninvited
Wow impressive exit, can't wait to see what they do for an encore. Loving it..
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[Report This]Date: 01/14/2007 - 05:50 pm Title: Semi Fresh Wounds
Dawn takes it indeed very hard.. and the others have to suffer to. I only hope she didn't talk to much with Graham at the school, telling she knows what they are looking for. I hope this will go well.
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[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 12:26 pm Title: Semi Fresh Wounds
Really pleased with the update. Well Graham really is an insensitive manipulative little creep, isn't he. He seduces Dawn, dumps her, then thinks he can waylay her at school and exploit her for info. I know Buffy has her reasons for stepping back, but he's definately gone over the line. Despite her key status, Dawn is still a 15 year old kid, her actions in S6 prove that. It's time for big sister to let him know Dawn isn't an easy target.
Author's Response: Yep it is
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