[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 10:01 am Title: Semi Fresh Wounds
Loved the Andrew/Nate scene. I'm kinda worried that Dawn revealed to Graham she knows what he's looking for, I hope nothing bad happens because of her honesty. Great chapter as always!
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[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 11:23 pm Title: What they are really after
So Dawn confronted Graham. Seems indeed he was honest with her, he likes her. No spying like I thought.
Duh.. he dumped her with a phone call? Always doing what his commanding officers wants, huh? But when the power source is Dawn (or Anya etc.) then she is still in danger. ~ Till next chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 10:05 am Title: What they are really after
I enjoyed learning more about why Graham and the rest of the soldiers are in town. Great update!
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[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 10:36 pm Title: What they are really after
Really chuffed with the update. I wonder if the 'power' the military have picked up on is Buffy. It seems to obvious to be Dawn. I hope so, I'd love to see her wipe the floor with them. They haven't a clue, as usual.
Author's Response: LOL, true enough
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 04:39 pm Title: What they are really after
great chapter
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[Report This]Date: 09/02/2006 - 11:49 am Title: Warnings
Well it will sure be better that Nate doesn't live there with them. And I wonder too if Nate is different to the one Buffy knew before, if he'll be a danger to her and Spike. ~ Dawn is happy to have Graham but is she jealous about Andrew getting together with Molly? ~ I wonder if Wood will make them (Molly) problems. ... Till next chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:16 am Title: Warnings
great chapter
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[Report This]Date: 09/02/2006 - 01:27 am Title: Warnings
loved the chapter, can't wait to read some more!
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[Report This]Date: 09/01/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: Warnings
I enjoyed hearing everyone's opinion of Nate. Gotta say Dawn's reaction to Buffy's suggestion that Andrew and Molly might hit it off was very interesting. Can't what to read more. Great chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 08/14/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Tension
figures, more complications. i really hope this whole thing with graham is only temporary. i'll never trust that guy and don't know why he would bother with dawn, especially after buffy's speech. i just know he's up to something. how old is he anyway? either way, nothing good can come out of that. i think i would rather see her with andrew. i don't know how she could date someone that basically hates one of her best friends, meaning spike. she has to know that would never work out. i'm still hoping she'll come to her senses soon. he needs to go away.
Author's Response: I am going with the idea that Graham is 27 or so. we'll have to see how this idea integrates itself into the plot.
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Tension
I liked Buffy's talk with Graham, there definitely is a line of people waiting to hurt Graham if anything happens to Dawn. Loved Anya's bluntness as usual. I really enjoyed Molly's intoduction to the group. And I can't wait to find what happens with Nate in the mix. Wonderful chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 08/13/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Tension
Even if Angel was older when Buffy was in Dawn's age: Nobody would have send Angel to jail for it; he isn't human. No human laws... ~ I wonder what Graham wants. ~ And Molly is there? The introduction was fun (because of jealous Buffy). But Nate is the watcher? Two husbands, one Ex.. things could get complicated when he lives there too. ~ Till the next part :) That was unexpected indeed. Nate should have cared where he went beforehand. But I don't think he knew, or?
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[Report This]Date: 08/13/2006 - 05:46 pm Title: Tension
I love this!!!
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[Report This]Date: 08/13/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: Tension
Well I didn't see that coming. Great update.
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[Report This]Date: 08/02/2006 - 01:29 pm Title: Awkward Moments
i really really really like this story but you have to update more im all edgy waiting for the next part of this
awesome story
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I"ll be updating soonish. I was away for the summer
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2006 - 05:53 am Title: Awkward Moments
Evil. Pure Evil and i love it!!!!!!!
interesting to bring Graham in but i always liked him. (way more than riley as he at least seemed real)
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[Report This]Date: 06/20/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: Awkward Moments
Because of Graham's involvement with the Initiative I'm not sure if I can trust him but he was concerned for Willow. *reads on* I'm still not sure.. he seems to be very fond of Dawn yet she's too young for him at the moment -> 'jailbait'... well and how he'll react to Spike (H.17?)... ~ Looking forward to the answers and the next chapter :)
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[Report This]Date: 06/20/2006 - 10:58 am Title: Awkward Moments
Oh uh, indeed! What an exciting ending to the chapter. Should be interesting to see how Spike and Buffy handle the Dawn/Graham situation. Great chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 06/20/2006 - 10:24 am Title: Awkward Moments
I really think Grahams a perv, he hardly knows the kid and he's tampering with her. I thought he was supposed to be one of the good guys. I so hope Buffy and Spike come down on him like a ton of bricks.
Author's Response: Well we'll see what happens in the next couple of chapters!
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2006 - 03:23 pm Title: Hands in Bad Places
Hooray for happy season 7! Thanks for writing
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[Report This]Date: 06/06/2006 - 07:36 am Title: Hands in Bad Places
LOL... It sure didn't take long for Andrew to start annoying Dawn. Can't wait to find out how Graham fits into the story. Great chapter!
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[Report This]Date: 06/06/2006 - 05:51 am Title: Hands in Bad Places
great update! can't wait to find out what graham is going to do!
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[Report This]Date: 06/06/2006 - 01:22 am Title: Hands in Bad Places
okay, i seriously hope you don't get dawn with graham. he can't be trusted and he's too old for her. not to mention that buffy and spike won't like it. i'm already not liking her much in this story. she seems like an even bigger brat than she was on the show and that's saying a lot. i just hope she changes soon enough. i feel like slapping her sometimes.
Author's Response: Well we can't always love all the characters. Graham is staying in the fic for the rest of the story...whether he'll be with Dawn or not...that remains to be seen.
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Hands in Bad Places
Great chapter.
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[Report This]Date: 06/05/2006 - 09:04 pm Title: Hands in Bad Places
Mmm alone time for Buffy and Spike but Dawn home alone.. (with Andrew). Never thought she, Dawn, would run into Graham. Well Dawn talked a lot indeed. Wonder what Graham does there. And Dawn is drawn because of Andrew? Wow, what a mix. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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