Date: 06/29/2023 - 12:38 pm Title: The End
This was lovely! I am so glad you wrote it and shared it, and that I got to read it! Everything progressed well, everyone was in character, and as I sit here at the end, I feel a soft sigh and general contentment! Perfect!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 11:37 pm Title: The Runaway
Ooh! More from the Initiative This is good!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 10:30 pm Title: Rats
Nice! Angels conception of the Initiative and Willow and his situation is so creepy and incredibly well done!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 09:29 pm Title: Women of Business
Wow! Definitely not where I expected this to go, and I love the Riley introduction!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 07:47 pm Title: Dea ex Machina
Very nice twist with Darla! I did not see that coming!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 07:34 pm Title: A Battle of Wills
Ooh! This chapter gave me shivers! This line It was only once the silence of his tiny room surrounded him that he remembered that he was supposed to be trying to seduce her, not win an argument with her That line is just so perfectly Spike! And I love the scenario where Tain mentions that Buffy was a fighter and that Spike didnt catch it until the end!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 07:09 pm Title: Pandora's Box
Great still loving this!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 06:22 pm Title: Double Jeopardy
Ooh! I am wondering about what she meant, too! And I love her deviousness I cant wait to see how it plays out
Date: 06/28/2023 - 05:55 pm Title: First Fight
Ooh! I love this dark, matter of fact Buffy Love it!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 05:43 pm Title: Training
I know I already commented, but I forgot one important thing I have no idea what shes doing and I LOVE that I dont know I cant wait to find out
Date: 06/28/2023 - 05:39 pm Title: Training
Another great chapter!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 05:04 pm Title: Home
Love this line Yeah, well, I never heard of a Slayer who had to buy vampires in order to dust them , and in general still enjoying the story!
Date: 06/28/2023 - 03:53 pm Title: The Slave Market
This beginning is very intriguing! I am looking forward to reading more!
Date: 01/12/2017 - 11:45 am Title: The End
It ends in a good way. They will have a good life together, as long as they can
This has been a different and very good story. I really like when we can see the life demons and vampires are living. That Buffy lives it too is also a good thing.
Date: 01/12/2017 - 11:39 am Title: 24
Good, Spike managed to tell Buffy that he has feelings for her. Well he did tell her by actions.
Date: 01/12/2017 - 11:35 am Title: Sparks
The chip is out and Angelus is his normal self. It's probably for the best if Spike leave and take Buffy with him.
Date: 01/12/2017 - 11:30 am Title: The Initiative
The plan worked so far, good.
Date: 01/11/2017 - 04:44 pm Title: Plan B
I'm very fond of the way we are seeing the vampires here, very good, I like how they act and talk.
Date: 01/11/2017 - 04:32 pm Title: The Runaway
Angelus expected to just take over, it was wonderful to see what Darla did.
It seemed like Spike got through to Buffy but then the Initiative happened.
Date: 01/11/2017 - 04:26 pm Title: Single Combat
I really liked Angel's thoughts and what we could see of how vampires behaves. That he got rid of the soul was good to see. He need to get rid of the chip too.
Buffy is confused about everything and about how Spike feel for her. He will need to find her.
Date: 01/11/2017 - 04:18 pm Title: The Challenge
Spike is actually ignorant about Buffy's feelings for him. Darla has it figured out but she won't tell.
Date: 01/11/2017 - 04:13 pm Title: The Mall
I loved seeing Buffy and Harmony hitting the mall. I have always had a soft spot for Harmony.
Date: 01/11/2017 - 03:53 pm Title: Plans
The whole story is here, good I will continue. Spike bringing Buffy in for the war was a good thing. I also liked what we saw of Darla and her thoughts.