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Reviewer: Beth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2012 - 02:36 am Title: He's not staying here!

Love the story so far I know that's it been awhile since you started this Fic and I would to hear what happens next

Reviewer: spike4buffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2006 - 08:16 am Title: He's not staying here!

Im luvin it update soon

Reviewer: luvver21 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 01:36 am Title: He's not staying here!

I think this is a great story so far and you could definitely do some interesting things with it! Can't wait to read more. Great job!

Reviewer: katina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: He's not staying here!

Love the story , but I think you may have left out some words. Cant wait to read the next part. Dont be too long..

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 02:38 pm Title: He's not staying here!

interesting start :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 05:12 am Title: He's not staying here!

good story so far

Reviewer: ??? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 02:10 am Title: He's not staying here!

too hard to read, not in character, and i'm already bored to tears that i couldn't even read the whole thing, this needs a lot of work.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: He's not staying here!

Great chapter! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 09:08 pm Title: He's not staying here!

You might want to put a space between each paragraph and/or set of dialogue so that it's easier to read. Also, there are a lot of punctuation marks that are either missing and should be there or are used incorrectly, especially in dialogue. You might want to get a beta to make sure there are less errors, too.

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