Date: 03/10/2006 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter 1
loved the update! glad you are continuing! i was beggining to think you forgot about it. how far apart is their age difference?
Date: 02/28/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story. Update soon PLEASE!
Date: 02/24/2006 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1
pretty good. it was really abrupt though. first they're practically abusing each other, the next they're having sex on the bathroom floor. i'm wondering what the age different is too..
Date: 02/21/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cold. Hot. Good mix :)! Want more!
Date: 02/20/2006 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved the first chapter... will surely try to read on and found out what will happen next.
Date: 02/20/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter!
Date: 02/20/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was good.
i liked it a lot.
so what is the age difference anyway?
Date: 02/20/2006 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww!! That was cute in a strange way!! But still a good story!! You rock!!!
Date: 02/20/2006 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Eh? It was so abrupt... *LOL* DaniD's right...
I like it so far though. Cheers, and update soon.
Date: 02/20/2006 - 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1
good so far
Date: 02/20/2006 - 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, that was, wow. I liked it. Keep up the writing.
Date: 02/20/2006 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow...That went from one extreme to another very quickly..One second they were fighting tooth and nail, the next they were having sex on the bathroom floor. :)
I'm thinking that these two are NOT thinking very clearly. * Understatment* No protection...?? Tsk..tsk..
Looking forward to seeing where this story is heading..! Good job..
Date: 02/20/2006 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter 1
That was fun, and very hot, and I just have this feeling that it's not gonna end well for our favorite couple. Looking forward to more.
Date: 02/20/2006 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1
that was a mix between comedy and drama, sometimes i wanted to laugh, sometimes to cry, it was an awkward situation...but at the same time it was light...don't know!! but i liked it!! very much!! can't wait for more!! you're an excellent writer! thanx