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Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Oh crap! He is a tortured soul, isn't he! Something about that just breaks my heart. Don't quite understand why but my immediate response was cry for him. Don't know what you were going for but tears is the only response I have to give.Great read, Cas.

Author's Response: Yeah, don't know why, but he just grew that way in the telling. I mean yes, he was always intended to be broken hearted, but I'm afraid that he came off a little too weird and less tortured than I intended. As usual though, you got what I meant.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:38 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Yeah, I hate that she has to keep lying to him too. Disappointed that he had sex with Harmony though. So will Buffy when she finds out.. Guess I'm not going to bed, got to read more. Glad she misses him.

Author's Response: Well, he's male, and been practicing the absintinance for a while...No one ever said that Spike doesn't make mistakes. In fact, he makes a lot of them, but his heart is usually in the right place.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter 21: Time off for bad behavior

Go Spike! kick those skanks to the curb! I'm hoping the locked room was either Dru's or it's his studio, you called it his inner sanctum. Sounds like his painting studio. Still on pins and needles here. Great work, thanks again.

Author's Response: Yes, exactly.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

Angelus has to be behind this, and his own mother's death? What does he think Spike's going to do just stop seeing Buffy and shack up with Faith. This can't be good. Poor Spike, now Interpol's on his case. Geez, he can't get a break, can he, now what's Buffy going to do? Just stop seeing him? just like that? Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: No, Spike's "luck" is horrible, of course, some one is making sure that bad things seem to just happen.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 19: Girl Talk

Very curious about that, I hope it comes out at some point. Didn't they know what he was working on. Ethan Rayen's? This mystery justs keeps getting bigger and bigger. Somehow I've got the feeling that Angelus is up to something since he's still keeping some kind of tabs on him. Another great chapter, thanks.

Author's Response: Don't you like to know how your family is doing? Nothing sinister about that at all. And yeah, I think a little too much is what is going on which is why pulling it all together is getting harder and harder - too many balls in the air that need to drop at the right time.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter 18: Another Assignment

God, I hate that she's got to do that to him. Well I'm going to read a chapter or two more. thanks Cas, this fic is keeping on my toes.

Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy is really in a bind here - caught not knowing what is the right thing to do all the time. I am glad that you see her as sympathetic and not just bitchy Buffy. This is probably the fic of mine where she comes off the best (she's not all sweetness and light IMHO).

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 10:38 am Title: Chapter 17: Waterscapes

What little pervs they are. Spike catches them trying to sell his private tapes and they'd be in a whirl of shit. I had forgotten that he painted. this should be interesting. Glad they had a nice day. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Well, when you're not getting any, and have no realistic hope of that changing any time soon... Yeah, they're pervs.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter 16: Some Explaining to Do

This has been fantastic, so raw and real between them. Xander's just going to have to get over it or get out. Yeah it can't be easy for him but Anya's been honest with him so he'll just need to deal the best he can. Wonderful chapter, thanks.

Author's Response: Xander never did seem to see the value of honesty.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 15: Bronzing It

I was hoping for both Buffy and Xander that it wsn't the case. Anya's been screwing Spike and Buffy's not gotten more then a kiss from him. Talk about awkward. Yipes! Good for you, that was great. Great read, thanks.

Author's Response: Well, that's not exactly how she looks at it. I mean, Buffy never wanted more than a kiss or two - or Spike would have been more than willing to oblige. And the whole Spanya thing is in the past - a few years have gone by at least.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter 14: Consultation

Another little twist you threw in there. So they all know each other, well as Spike's friend she can help make Spike's case for him with Buffy. Even if she won't admit to Tara that Angelus really did a number on her at the moment, maybe she will later. Terrific chappie Cas, thanks.

Author's Response: Yeah, tara cast really well as a counselor, and was really the only cast member who acted like a friend to both Buffy and Spike.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter 13: Debriefing, part 2

Wow, I didn't see that one coming,Tara huh? I'm guessing with Oz gone she and Willow will be getting together at some point. Time will tell. I do hope that Buffy will see Tara though. Angelus really did a number on her. It's late and I think I'll read one or two more. Great chappie, thanks. *hugs*

Author's Response: Yeah, Angelus sews distruction wherever he goes. And I'll try to work the Willow/Tara connection in, altho I'm trying not to spend too much time on secondary plot lines to get this thing going.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:56 am Title: Chapter 12: Debriefing

Poor Willow, her weekend was as bad as Buffy's maybe a little worse. They've got each other so it isn't quite as bad. Thanks for this chapter, they needed the girl time.

Author's Response: I like to see Willow and Buffy really acting as friends. They didn't get too much time to do that on the show, and things went badly between them.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:44 am Title: Chapter 11: Was that the L word?

He didn't know about them but I'm sure that Angel had set her up as a target because of Spike's relationship with Joyce. It's so him. Wonderful chapter, now she knows how he feel's. Thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Well, from Angel's point of view, why not? I mean, if you're gonna pick on an innocent little HS girl to torment her, why not put your effort to where it is likely to do the most damage? I mean. it's not like young Buffy was hard on the eyes - altho Cordelia also would have done nicely.

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter 10: Wicked

Buffy dated Angel while inSunnyD? interesting. That's going to make the conversation a little strained. Did Spike know that she was dating him then and if he had known him then maybe he's not playing on the same side as Buffy. Intriguing piece of information. Guess this little trip was really a bust. What a twist Cas, thanks, it was great.

Author's Response: Spike didn't know Buffy when they were in Sunnydale - and all he knew about ANgelus is that he wanted to keep Dru as far away from him as possible (and preferably himself too).

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Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:09 am Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

Hope that Buffy sees things his way. Your right about what the gang may do if they knew their identity. Maybe this will continue to push down her defences. Thank you for letting me know this was here. Can't wait to see which side of the fence he really is on. I'm betting it's the same as hers. Great chapter, Cas, thanks.

Author's Response: That is the main crux of the story - is Spike a good man, or not? Of couse either way, he still has a lot of enemies... but will Buffy be one of them?

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Date: 10/16/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: Coffee, tea or...?

just one point. We have P.E. in UK.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. I am trying to get it together to update soon, and continue on until the end. And I didn't really mean to imply anything re P.E. in UK, and this Spike attended UC Sunnydale, he's just surprized. I mean, here she is running an art gallery, and her real love is PE?

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Date: 10/10/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 36: Remember me?

It's been a while please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review after all this time. I have not abandoned this fic, I just find it hard to work on more than one at a time (who knew?) Anyway it is on my mind, and it is nice to know people are interested. I hope when I start posting again (as soon as I finish posting Ring) that I will go back to this and update it regularly - which I agree, its frustrating when writers don't, so I'm gonna try not to do it to you again.

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Date: 07/13/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

I'm having a bit of difficulty beleving Buffy to be so clueless about all of this and it doesn't seem to be just something she's playng off of Spike. Even if she's never been undercover, she'd be more savvy about all this than she is here, even getting Spike's intentions. Her intelligence is sincerely being played down.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's a fine line to walk, and maybe I haven't found the best balance. But I apprecaite your comment, and promise that more is coming soon.

Reviewer: Albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

I'm having a bit of difficulty beleving Buffy to be so clueless about all of this and it doesn't seem to be just something she's playng off of Spike. Even if she's never been undercover, she'd be more savvy about all this than she is here, even getting Spike's intentions. Her intelligence is sincerely being played down.

Author's Response: Hey Albie. Glad to know that someone is still reading/responding although I haven't updated this story in a while. I hate to admit but it's been a while since I've worked on this one, so I am not sure how to respond. I mean to portray Buffy as naive and undertrained (which is Giles's fault - but turns out he's naive too all things considered). Anyway, anyway, you've single handedly insipired me to go back and take another look and get some work done on this story. So Thanks.

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Date: 06/18/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 36: Remember me?

great chapter

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Date: 06/18/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 35: Truth and Lies

great chapter

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Date: 05/25/2006 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 36: Remember me?

Oh.. Riley used his old key? So maybe he had a key, but it wasn't polite to let himself in. He isn't Buffy's boyfriend anymore. And he know a LOT of what happened just shortly with the lie detector. He shouldn't be able to know that.. or he knows more about who that Spike up (the case). And Riley is out for blood, getting Spike's head so to speak (getting him behind bars). Good question, Dawn! Looking forward for Buffy's answer.

Author's Response: Yeah, seems like typical Riley logic to me - he has a key so he doesn't think he's doing anything wrong by breaking in.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter 36: Remember me?

liked the chapter . interesting twist.

Author's Response: Thanks, appreciate the review teasha. Pretty name btw, don't think I've seen it before.

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Date: 05/25/2006 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter 36: Remember me?

Riley behaves as if he has always been keeping tags on Buffy and only decided to shake things up when Spike walked into her life asking to be a part of it.

I think Riley is way more disturbed than he accuses Spike of ever being. CREEPY!

Good chapter. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I'm not sure that Riley kept tabs on her while he was away, but he certainly seems to think he can waltz back into her life at any point and claim her back. As far as he is concerned, he molded her into what she is today, so she would be his perfect mate. It's not right that another man might benefit from all his hard work 'improving' Buffy! Especially Spike.

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Date: 05/25/2006 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter 36: Remember me?

Oh, the plot thickens. Sure never expected to see Riley make an appearance. Blech. What will Buffy do now? Hmmmmm. Very good update.

Author's Response: Rest assured, I am not a Riley fan either. But he will cause more trouble, since Buffy/Spike is not on his agenda.

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