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Reviewer: SpuffyGirl729 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 02:37 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Just read the entire story! loved it from start to finish!! awesome job! now i'm working on another one of you're stories!

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 04:04 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

um...Not sure what to write but it was a good start...

Reviewer: Adrianna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 02:23 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

OHH what a great story i really enjoyed reading this good job!

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 05:58 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

:)
I like!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

This is excellent! very hot and very well done...can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 06:27 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

I really like where this is going :D Great story idea!

Reviewer: Sara M Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 12:14 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

One reviewer said they didn't think Buffy would tell Joyce all of this stuff like that, and in a way I agree that that is a logical thing to think. But I recall my brother a few years ago stayed out late (he was seventeen) and my mom waited up for him to come home which happened at almost three am. He was really drunk and he'd been driving and would have been yelled at except he was really drunk and my mom decided to save the yelling and punishment til next day when he'd understand it better. But my brother was really really loopy with the drink and decided that it would be a good idea to tell my mom everything he did, everything he thought, the whole thing, And when she'd try to get him to go to bed so they could sleep and discuss it fully in the morning he wouldn't do it, he said he needed to get it all out now, while he wanted to say it and just told her EVERYthing. It was funny really and he regretted it the next day. But he'd been loopy and just decided to do a full confessional while loopy. Which is a lot of words to say that the stuff in her system still and the stress of the situation could cause Buffy to suddenly decide to confess things that she wouldn't otherwise even though she might not be so brave under other circumstances. I was sorry Joyce reacted a little more negatively than I would have liked at some points, but I guess she was pretty shocked. If I had a kid who had just tried suicide (and sadly I have one who started at age eleven, long story) I wouldn't have reacted negatively in any way to absolutely anything they told me right afterward, when they were trying so hard to get it out in the open and were looking for understanding and support. So I thought Joyce was a little harsh in places. That's not a criticism, because that's what you wanted Joyce to do so that's just her character and you wrote her the way you wanted her. I was just sorry she did that. As for the hold, I am not aware of any twenty four hour hold in California law, just the 72 hour one. And although I'm dealing with med social work it's mostly with industrial patients and work comp is exempt from HiPPA privacy laws for the most part so that's why I'm not dealing with HIPPA as much as others might so I'll defer to the other posters who are working in general mental health in California for the latest actual practice issues. Like I said, I'm not gonna complain about what you do as long as you don't go on a complete flight of fancy and ignore reality entirely, which you have not at all. I really like your story and I'm following you where you wanna go. It will be interesting to see what happens next -- now that Joyce knows. And will she tell Giles - if I were Buffy I'd prefer to have Joyce tell Giles as at least I wouldn't have to look in the eyes of a man I love like a father and have to tell him all that extremely embarrassing info. Bad enough if he must know, but please let someone else tell it and spare me that is my thinking. Please update soon -- I'm can't wait to see where you go next. Thanks. Mac 1. :-)

Reviewer: MAc 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

That should have read 'be glad you're NOT dealinig with federal wlefare...' I hate these tiny review boxes. :-)

Reviewer: Morrigan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2006 - 08:09 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

whoo!  Hot chapter.  :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 01:39 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Harmony and Riley *shudder*

I'm liking this story so far, and I really can't wait to see where you develop. You have so much room and you've laid down a lot of interesting possible plot points. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Absenteye Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

OMG. GUH!!!!!!! And also awwww!!!! I really really love this, honey! You've done an amazing job and I can't wait to read more! DID I MENTION I LOVE YOU?!!!! I do. Absolutely wonderfully written, and extremely hot! *fangirls*

Reviewer: Marisol Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Hey Suzee, Kitty told me about this story. I read the first chapters (hadn´t have time yet for the newest ones) and now i can understand why kitty loves your story so much :)
Please keep up the great writing, I´m looking forward ro reading more! *hugs*, Marisol

Reviewer: Flibble Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 09:29 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Holy hell girl! You weren't kidding when you said there would be smut in this one. That was an unbelievable start to a story. I loved it!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

My god .this has started out with a bang.Got to read the next chapter. wow!'

Reviewer: Rachael Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2006 - 04:16 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Dam I love this story!

Reviewer: teenuh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2006 - 01:29 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

AHHH CONTINUE PLEASE!!

you cant just leave a person hanging like that~

...love the story :D

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

that was great! more sooon please!!!!!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2006 - 01:16 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

great chapter

Reviewer: braat44 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Wow! That was hot. Can't wait for more. :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Wow.. Dru was very bad. Spike can be glad he wasn't married to her yet. No wonder he's so broken though. ~ But he would never have 'met' Buffy otherwise so it's a good thing... even if it must have cost him a lot of money to do so ;-) Love how they attracted to one another and yet don't dare to try to really met :) Looking forward to more next week. I wonder how long it will take them to recognize themselves when they meet. ;-)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Great chapter! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Bob Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Echo everything that Nikilicious said, you are an amazing writer with fantastic flare to capture the characters. i love every story that yuo have written and each one jsut gets better and better well done !!!!!!!!!!!!!! n keep it up

Reviewer: Nikilicious Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Hey darling. This is amazing. It is remarkable to see how far you have come on since you first started writing.
You are an amazing writer darling, and deserve every second of praise that you get.
You have managed to capulate these characters so perfectly to their original form, yet while still retaining an air of orginallity thats all you.
You have wrote the beginning of what I am sure is going to be an amazing story and honestly I can't wait to read more.
You have done amazingly and you should feel so proud honey!
please post more soon.
Nikki xx

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 08:39 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

hot in here or is it just me? that was hot! i can't wait to read more, especially when buffy finds out who "spike" really is!update soon?

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 05:57 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Got my curiosity piqued! That was very hot-- Can't wait for the update!

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