Date: 04/08/2014 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1
ePub says I can't open in IBooks on my phone, unlike your other stories, this one says the formatting is wrong?
Date: 06/17/2006 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is interesting, but should Spike really leave the children alone with someone who's obviously sick? She could have had a stroke or have a tumor or some mental illness. She already fainted once. What if she faints while holding the baby? He also seemed more annoyed at her for forgetting (as if she did it on purpose) than concerned that she lost her memory overnight for no apparent reason. But, I still like the story - I just think too much.
Date: 05/22/2006 - 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1
aw i love this story, keep the updates comin!!
Date: 05/04/2006 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa- what the hell? This looks to be an interesting fic.
BTW- Is Spike just angry or worried? He seems more angry than anything else. I can't wait to see an update of this, though.
Date: 05/04/2006 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa- what the hell? This looks to be an interesting fic.
BTW- Is Spike just angry or worried? He seems more angry than anything else. I can't wait to see an update of this, though.
Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a wonderful start , very promising.
I like the idea of Spike and Buffy as partners ar work , and the mission with its echoes of the scenes from the show was excellent.
Now the second part of the chapter is absolutely enjoyable , evocative, sweetly hot , and just fantastic with all the possibilities waiting for Buffy.
Date: 05/02/2006 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 1
This is just too good to be true!! it is absolutely hilarious!!! I hope she comes to terms with what has happened though, can't wait to read what happens next, update soon!!!
Date: 05/02/2006 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1
definitely good so far
Date: 05/01/2006 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMGOMGOMG yay! I'm so excited... haven't read anything of yours in a while. And this seems so incredibly interesting. Can't wait...
Date: 05/01/2006 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! PWETY PWEASE!!!!!!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
i was totally expecting buffy to faint! lol
the fourth? i surely would have done the same... even with a father like spike!
nice and funny beginning... can't wait for the rest!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
you.....that was.....WOW!!! you have got to post another chpater like NOW!!! that was a great start. please PLEASE post soon. loved i. this is gonna be so good. continue.
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will leave a HUNDRED comments if you give me more!!!! and im serisous u can keep count if you want.....just give me MORE lol
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG i LOVE it!!! please update soon!!!!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really liking this so far, and I never like the idea of Spuffy kids. Am awaiting your Thursday update...unless you want to pretend I'm sending you a barrage of reviews to update even faster. :-)
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for Thursday!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really really like this..... i usually don't read stories where andybody is a cop because they usually aren't that interesting...HOWEVER i do like this one...hehe UPDATE SOON!!!!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
The incorporation of "Crush" dialogue was inspired, and it fit perfectly in this context. I'm looking forward to Buffy's discovery of her "past" with William and learning what the heck has happened to give her amnesia. Meeting her children for the first time should be entertaining. Great start.
Date: 05/01/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I`ll give you a longer comment than the others. Because just "great story, go on" isn`t enough. It´s an amazing story. The dialogue of Crush fits in perfectly. It`s funny to read it, especially in your fanfic, "workplace" is more than true. I like the morning after very much, and I`m anxious to see how Buffy will realize that she is in the future and how she will learn to love her family. Please update soon, I didn`t read such a promising Spuffy story for month.
Date: 05/01/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! Fabulous start. Looking forward to more. Please update soon!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is amazing!!! can't wait for more!!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
My goodness, this is one hell of a story... I truly enjoyed it, and can't wait for the story to develop. I'm at the mercy of your suspenseful plot already. *LOL*
Date: 05/01/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
So great! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Love the setup, and can't wait to read more!