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Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter 10

*Deep sigh* Can't we have more than just construction fun? I was hoping nap time would be a bit nautier, but I realize that she doesn't really know her role in the family. Maybe I'm just being a little bit impatient-- Perhaps she can wrap herself up to give to William for Christmas? (evil laugh ensues). If only she could feel freed up enough by what she knows of Buffy's relationship with William that she doesn't hold back-- Maybe just try things on for size. At any rate, I like how the affection between the two is growing,a nd how she is trying to fit in and how she's offering to help with daily family life-- cooking, laundry, etc.

Reviewer: queenbeesam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 10

I'm loving the story my dear. I can't wait for the rest. Sorry if I don't comment as much as I should. I really enjoy your writing. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 10

Loved these last few chapters. I'm glad that Buffy realized that she does want to be with William. They fit together so well. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh great chapter. Loved it.

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 10

So sweet!! Loving how this is progressing.

Reviewer: Lyndsy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 10

OMG! I love this sttory too much!! It's really great and you're making a good job in clarifying situations that could be fogged like when William speaks about their past but I'm never lost ! Thank u again

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 10

Awww...these were some great chapters! Hopefully Buffy remembers everything she's lost. Of course...sometimes you just need a swift kick in the rear to realize exactly what it is you have.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 10

Really addicted to this fic! Loved the update!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 10

Finally, an allusion to a doctor's appointment soon. I laughed at Buffy's "So, we were both unstable?"

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 06:41 am Title: Chapter 10

Damn, Buffy suggestible slip ups are always fun. Let's hope he really does get to screw the night away! Great chapter. Loving this progression.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 10

aww how cute. i love this story and am happy that u updated. i really hope that things stay good between them and theyre happy together. i thought it was so cute that she asked him to be her boyfriend and im glad that they are forming the kind of relationship that they use to have before she forgot. i also really hope that she starts to get her memories back and that theyre a happy family. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter 10

Ok, that was a great line. "screwing the night away." Also, The whole, Where do we go from here totally had me flashbacking to the musical and it's actually kind of stuck in my head. Interesting that all of this is happening now.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter 10

Bad hangover... and awe isn't William sweet? And you just have to love William's "unintentional" collision. *gg* Awe, these too are indeed too cute. And it seems the were good to one another (unstable). :)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter 10

They're so cute, with the fumbling and stuff.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 10

loved it. that waa so cute.glad buffy saw the light. congrats on the nominations. i'll be sure to vote for you. i so love this story to bits. post soon.

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