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Reviewer: dina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: Tea Party

why havent there been more? I demand an update

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 01:23 am Title: Tea Party

definitely good so far

Reviewer: **Tanya** Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Tea Party

please get a beta, and then i'll read it.....

Reviewer: dory Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2006 - 03:47 pm Title: Tea Party

I'm sorry, but is english your first language? For your own sake I hopa it's not..

Author's Response: actually yes it is, though I am good at speaking it, I can spell good just I was writing fast! I am more fluent in other languages and sometimes they mix together. Cause I know over 20 different languages!!!!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2006 - 01:36 am Title: Tea Party

i wasn't going to read this, but i decided to give it a chance. it's an okay start, but it needs a lot of work. i agree that you really need a beta. it's very confusing to read right now. it might help if you made a new paragraph everytime a different person speaks. just a suggestion.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Tea Party

Good luck with the story! It sounds interesting so far. And if you didn't find a beta, in this link you'll find some links to where you can find a beta.

Reviewer: Brianna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2006 - 03:04 pm Title: Tea Party

Good story so far! I Like it!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2006 - 01:33 am Title: Tea Party

I like it. Just one question. How old is Buffy in this?

Author's Response: Buffy is 32, and Spike is 36.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Tea Party

Good strong beginning. Understandable how Dru lost her reality, an accident like that happen to often these days. Who is Dru's mother? And her friends? Can't wait for your next posting.

Author's Response: thanks, I havent gotten to all that because all Buffy knew about her really was the stuff she told about herself at the sessions. So now that she is going to her house, Her dad is going to invite her again, and she will get to know the girl more!

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2006 - 10:50 pm Title: Tea Party

The story itself seems pretty good, but have you considered getting a beta? There are some grammatical errors and ... you know,... paragraphs before quatations? Otherwise it seems promising.

Author's Response: thank you, I do need a beta I suck at writing

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