Date: 04/23/2009 - 11:38 pm Title: Epilogue
That was sweet.
Date: 04/09/2009 - 12:38 am Title: Till Death Do Us Part
The story has promise, but you keep sliding back and forth between past tense and present tense.
As the taxi pulled up, Buffy looked back...
Sliding into the back of the taxi, she tells the driver...
It is very distracting.
Date: 04/07/2009 - 01:50 am Title: Epilogue
Great fic! I loved it. I'm sad to see it finish, though. There are still some unanswered questions - what about Dru? Why did she pop up at the end?
I'd love to see more!
Date: 04/06/2009 - 09:05 pm Title: Epilogue
Date: 04/06/2009 - 12:08 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww! Great finish to a great tale ,really enjoyed reading this, i never forgot about it through the long wait for updates. It wasn't easy, but nothing worthwhile ever is, tee hee. Thank you for letting us all read it.
Date: 04/06/2009 - 03:31 am Title: Epilogue
Thank you for finishing this story it didn't take it long to get back into the story I enjoyed very much
Date: 11/14/2007 - 10:15 pm Title: Till Death Do Us Part
I really enjoy reading This story. Please continue the story. I would love to know what happen next.
Date: 11/07/2007 - 12:41 am Title: Suprise
I am so confused I mean the story is awesome! And I really want to read more but you havent had an update since January and it says that this piece is completed but its not....
or is it...
I am so confused! Are you going to finish it or not?
Author's Response: I'm sure that I answered this question somewhere before... Not sure where though. Basically there was one chapter left to go, wrapping up the story and it didn't have a happy ending *ducks* But my muse has told me that there is another story there and that wrapping it all up would be bad! So, yeah it's kinda finished, but there will be more, only it is a whole new story.
Date: 01/24/2007 - 10:49 pm Title: Suprise
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:57 pm Title: Suprise
well this is getting more complicated and dark isn't it. Can't wait for more! Love it!
Date: 01/24/2007 - 04:32 pm Title: Suprise
Oh great, hoe bag alert!!! Great update, can't wait for more!
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: Suprise
No please don't take Spike from Buffy.
Would like to see more of what the Angel and Dru contectionis though. More please.
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:35 am Title: Fire
Date: 01/19/2007 - 01:46 am Title: Fire
Loved it! More please!
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:11 pm Title: Fire
So glad this is on the update wagon again. More please! Love it.
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:06 pm Title: Fire
I was just thinking to myself yesterday about what happened to this story. glad to see it updated! Can't wait for more!
Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: Fire
More please did they get Katie or not.
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:44 pm Title: Fire
Um, either I missed something or Spike is going to make a big mistake cause somehow I don't think the murderer would walk out without his trophies.
Date: 12/16/2006 - 02:47 am Title: Determined
So glad you are laying the ground work for Angel rescuing his daughter, but feeling disattached from her. Sounds like (I hope) that evil kid murdering trudy waste of skin is gonna be put away or taken away once and for all, with all three, Angel, Buffy and Spike after him (not to mention the FBI enforce) he's bound to be caught soon, I just hope Katie doesn't suffer any trauma through all of this. More please, I'm on the edge of my seat! Thanks!
Date: 12/11/2006 - 11:50 pm Title: Determined
Great chapter! Loved it!
Date: 12/11/2006 - 11:38 pm Title: Determined
Love it. more please.
Date: 12/11/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: Determined
Date: 12/06/2006 - 04:24 am Title: Brothers?
Glad that the brothers are getting things out in the open. Spike really showed his trust of Angel by telling him the truth about MI6. No they need to work together to save the baby! more please.