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Date: 04/16/2011 - 09:00 pm Title: School Hard

so i realize that you haven't written anything for this story in about 5 years but i just found it and i love it so far! i felt like i should tell you. i hope you decide to come back and finish writing it or pass it off to someone maybe. anyway, just wanted to say great work with the first 7 chapters!

Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 04:45 am Title: Lonely Stops

:( Poor Spike. I love Dawn in this. And Buffy. And Spike... All the characters are good. I really hope and wildly pray you get round to finishing this someday. It's too good of a story to leave unfinished!!!!

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:32 am Title: School Hard

seems its been a while since this story was updated but i just found it and hold onto the hope that one day it will be finished since it is absolutely amazing.

Reviewer: spikes_wish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: Lonely Stops

wow just stumbled upon this fic and its really good! and dawnie is so perceptive, bless. Anyhu i'm really looking forward to your next update : )

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 09:17 pm Title: Lonely Stops

Okay, I just wanna smack those young bitties for saying that to Spike. But, that's reality, right? Tried & convicted in the newspaper before there's even a point argued, especially in a small town. Oh, and you're E-V-I-L for leaving off right there! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 07:58 am Title: Lonely Stops

I really like this story. Hope you'll update soon!

Reviewer: Gretchen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 02:45 am Title: Lonely Stops

Great story. Can't wait to read more. Hope ya update soon.

Reviewer: Carley-Marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 02:40 am Title: Lonely Stops

Another amazing chapter!

Perfect pace. I'm loving how Dawn is assisting in advancing the plot. Plus a cliffhanger of any drunk character at the end of a chapter is always good in my opinion.

Carley-Marie :)

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Lonely Stops

i like this chapter... usually, grown up dawn is quite on the whiney side, but yours is endearing! :D
i really liked the "worried mothers" bit... It sounded real... if you get what i mean. Of course, we feel bad for spike, cuz he is the victim here and we know he is innocent... but even if i can't stand mrs eve something, i can see her point...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 02:01 am Title: Lonely Stops

Interesting that Spike shows up at Buffy's door after drinking too much. Great chapter!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Lonely Stops

*giggle* Loved Dawn asking if Buffy would be her mom, stopping asking and going back to Buffy in her conversation. That was really cute. She started it because she saw that Buffy is as lonely as her dad is. ~ Oh my.. the bus stop. Is everybody thinking he is guilty? Well Buffy isn't even she gets a guest now :) Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 03:19 pm Title: Lonely Stops

THANKS FOR THE NEW CHAPTER. WORD SURE DOES TRAVEL FAST- HOPE BUFFY CAN HELP SPIKE!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Lonely Stops

Poor William. It's one thing to be accused by one person, another to be found quilty without a trial by so many others that don't know you at all. I'm not surprised he ended up on Buffy's doorstep, afterall, she told him she thought he was innocent and he's been hearing about her non-stop from Dawn so it totally makes sense that's where he'd go. Can't wait for the next update, sure hope Buffy's heart is in the right place and she doesn't send him away all broken! more please.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 12:17 pm Title: Lonely Stops

boy he gets drunk fast.

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Date: 08/23/2006 - 12:14 pm Title: Innocence

I hate Dru already

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 07:59 am Title: Lonely Stops

I loved Spike and Dawn's conversation. I enjoyed getting Dawn's perspective of Buffy. It's a shame Spike got treated the way he did at the bus stop. I'm really worried this awful situation is gonna get leaked to Dawn. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 03:38 am Title: Lonely Stops

this is getting heavy!!! loved it. please PLEASE post soon.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 03:21 am Title: Lonely Stops

Ooh, more? I wanna know what happens! Also, sad for him that the parents would just assume that he did it rather than giving him the benefit of the doubt.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 02:48 am Title: School Hard

I am really enjoying this story, the characters are becoming real with emotions, regrets and hope. I know you have a beta it reads so well, just one word should be changed aloud to allow different meanings.

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 02:46 am Title: Lonely Stops

nooo, what a horrible place to just leave us hanging....!! great story. drucilla = bitch.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 02:30 am Title: Lonely Stops

and how did he know where she lives? i really how he accidentally mentions what he and dawn talked about in a drunken rambling...that would be swell!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 01:40 am Title: Lonely Stops

Poor Spike....that bitch making assumptions that she has no business making. I can't wait for Spike to be declared innocent and that woman having to wat her words! I'm wondering how he knows where Buffy lives though! Dawn is so adorable. I like this version of her! I hope Buffy does become her new mommy! Update soon please!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: Living Conditions

Connor is cute :)
I wonder who was with Dru, did this. Too bad they don't have evidence (but that would make it too easy). So Dawn's mother is Cecily? No contact doesn't mean dead. What doesn't fit is William's profile: has no prior criminal record, and does not have a history of violence. Looking forward to the next part :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chapter :)

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 07:04 am Title: Living Conditions

good update. PS- I love that the puppy is connor. how cute is that?

Author's Response: So glad you like it. And Connor is my own little touch. I had a puppy named Connor too :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:31 am Title: Living Conditions

I liked this glimpse into Buffy's homelife, Conner was so cute. I loved the way Buffy spoke to him about Dawn. The police report was very informative, Dru really did a great job in setting Spike up. I look forward to finding out how the plot unfolds from here. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)

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