Date: 07/27/2006 - 09:39 am Title: Episodes
Keep up the good work!
Not a Spuffy fan, as you know, but this one I liked. Very much!
Date: 07/26/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Episodes
Cool. I can totally see this happening. Maybe not that she would just spread her legs. Although she was depressed so maybe.
I'm not a Spuffy-fan ,as you know, but this I have no problem with. It's seems real, their emotions, reactions and actions. It's angsty but hopeful. Poignant.
I think I noticed just two spelling-errors and you finished the story quickly after you got my challenge so this is impressive. Ever thought of writing a book? I'd read it.
I like the details, for exampel.
"washing away the sweat and saliva. "
"Good she hated that smirk
She gave him a blank stare, turned and walked out.
Seconds later she heard twigs breaking on the ground closely behind her.
Good doggy"
Describes the realtionship really well.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thanks for readin, all though you´re not a Spuffy fan! I´m glad you enjoyed it. I´ll correct those spelling errors.
Date: 07/26/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Episodes
Wow! That was really engrossing. Once I started, reading, I couldn't stop and my mind just seemed to sink into the story. I loved how you repeated the "Could my life get any worse" paragraph in the Doublemeat Palace. That is something I can definately relate to, the repetative day of a mediocre job. Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review - I live for them:-)
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: Episodes
dark and sexy fic. i like it very much!
Author's Response: thanks, luv!
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:03 pm Title: Episodes
Wow! That was great! A little sad at first (you know me and sweet Spuffy fluff) but very well written. You really nailed the characters that are Buffy and Spike i season 6 and I can totally see something like that happen. I really liked it! Could there possibly be a sequel? :)
Author's Response: thanks Pet, I´m glad you liked it. There won´t be a sequel, though. I´m just not very good at writing them.