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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 19

It's good to see a new update. But sad to know it's the last one.
And thank you for posting the notes, what you had of the future chapters.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 19

Just a wee bit puzzled about the appearance of the new update if the story has been abandoned - but so glad to see more of this excellent twist on early season 7. Is it likely there will be any more? I hope so... particularly now Spike's chip is out, Buffy knows about the soul and Giles has yet to make an appearance...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2011 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter 19

I want to say thank you for posting what you had left of this story, including your notes. Most authors who leave permanent WIPs don't do so. I really appreciate getting to read all of this. I loved this story. Just wanted you to know.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2011 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 19

I'm kinda confused, why post anything if you're planning to abandon a fic? I understand how RL gets in the way. Your muse takes a vacation--sometimes a permanent one, but I've never seen anyone write in the comments, they are purposefully not finishing a fic. Maybe it's just me.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Xander's arrival and the subsequent "fight" were beautifully choreographed and brutal. His anger and fury fueled attempt to kill Spike had me on the edge of my seat and knowing Buffy was somewhere between Sunnydale and Los Angeles kept the tension high.

Buffy coming in on the scene and not being able to take a breath in the flurry of accusations upped the tension even higher. Xander's inability to just shut up and listen was frustrating and in character. I was delighted when things finally calmed down enough for Buffy to get her point across. I hadn't realized how tense the argument and recriminations had made me.

Anya showing up with the manacles was a much needed bit of humor in this tense chapter.

It's great to read an update of this well written, extremely entertaining story. I'm really looking forward to more.

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

And now, Xander gets to find out exactly where she reacquired Spike from. I don't know if I think he'll be moved by it, or just moved to be an ass about it.

I just mainlined this entire story last night, having not read it before. Which was good, because the suspense of wondering if they'd figure out they had phantom Buffies and Spikes running around was intense.

Your characters are very true; I loved Buffy's worries about why affection was so much more dangerous than falling in love. And amnesiac Spike's responses were spot on. At first it kept reminding me of Sue's story, but that faded as the mystery of Spike's last three years/months and the First got going.

So, glad I read, and glad you're continuing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Wow... Xander didn't wait to ask questions indeed. I wondered (hoped) Buffy would be in time to save Spike. It sounded very bad....
I hope Xander can get a grip an behave now.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I'm so glad you're back. I'd been hoping you would pick this up again because I love it so but I was beginning to think you'd given up writing this story.
It just proves if you wish hard enough, wishes do come true. Welcome back!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I hate Xander! welcome back ,thought e would never see an update againhope your back to stay. Great update bu the way , looking forward to seeing their relationship develop.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Getting better and better. More please.

Reviewer: Dustyelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

You made me say oh driedel dreidel driedel:-D. I'm so happy to see another chapter of this fic. It is a really good character study. thanks

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Great chapter now everything makes sense

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

The relief in finally knowing the enemy led to loads of fun, funny banter in this chapter. I'm delighted that things are back to normal and Spike and Buffy are working in tandem again. Having the Bringers on the prowl for Spike is worrisome, but at least Spike and Buffy are better prepared.

Thanks for another tight, delightful chapter.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2007 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Awe so it was Dawn hugging Spike that made him speechless.
Loved the conversation between Buffy and Spike, the way Buffy talked to Spike and vice versa.
Would be interesting to know why the FE is after Spike; but maybe that's connected with the whole thing (Spike's story, him getting caught/slaved).

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Thought so... Spike imagined Buffy telling him to go (the First?).
Loved the argument / caring for Spike. Looking forward to what Buffy figured out. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Finally, finally Buffy's put the pieces of the puzzle together. I hope.

This was a tight chapter, and I love how the confusion of these contradictory Buffy's has pushed Spike to the breaking point where he's finally being confrontational.

I laughed at this line: "This speaking-your-mind thing was proving addictive and Spike was beginning to wonder how he'd done without for so long."

Thanks for another entertaining chapter of this wonderful story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Spike hasn't done a thing (at last he believes that).. so who was it? The first? (Can't remember if the other Spike touched Dawn, no time to check it now.)
At last Buffy is only chaining Spike up.
Maybe she should have taken the key with her too. Spike is gone? Mmmm wonder if he will remember going out.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Two chapters for me today :)
Buffy has a different opinion of Spike than Giles has; hearing Dawn say he's gone evil doesn't help her 'good' opinion of Spike though.
Evil cliffhanger wouldn't the new chapter be up already :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

This was another well realized chapter. The choreography of The First slipping in and out of the chapters, muddying the emotional waters is keeping me on edge. I'm delighted that Buffy's figured out there's some other evil afoot, other than Spike, that is! Spike's departure is worrisome, especially if The First has a foot hold. Buffy can't leave Dawn alone after the other Spike's threat, so she has to wait and wonder...I guess I will too.

Thanks for another engrossing, entertaining chapter.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Thanks for the update. I have some suspicions about the other Spike but I have no clue why basement Spike is leaving.

Please update again soon. I think this story is wonderful.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Whoa, the plot seems to have totally taken a turn. Look foward to seeing what is going on.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Oh, thought so. Buffy wants to test Spike's chip. *gg* I like the "some kind of tongue injury".
All the demons leaving.. maybe a big bad in on its way. It is sure not normal for all demons to vanish, hellmouth and all. At last they know that the stone doesn't work either. ~ Huh? Spike is acting weird. Trying to rape Dawn? *wonders* that doesn't fit, that's not like Spike. I wonder what that was.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Another tight, entertaining chapter. The First is really doing a number on the most vulnerable members of the Summers household. Dawn is going to be hard pressed not to stake submissive, confused Amnesia!Spike after this frightening encounter. You did a great job imbuing The First's Spike with a load of evil menace and cruel intention. This was an excellent chapter that flowed beautifully.

Reviewer: Buff_Freak_Becca Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Great update! I can't wait to see what happens next!

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