Reviews For Second Verse
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Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 08:44 am Title: Second Verse

awwwww......
and she didn't even call him 'shirty'......
just read all 3 fics, all were enjoyed.
Am reading Marking Time and would like to see that 4th installment of this series, whether just after NFA or picking up where this one, SV, leaves off...
Thanks!

Author's Response: Darn! Why didn't I think to work "shirty" into the story? Heh. Oh well. Maybe the next one ... Thanks so much!

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 12:24 am Title: Second Verse

Liked the story. Had to read it again to get the full appreciation of the details from the first part of the conversation. It bothered me a bit when she said that "no one" had asked her to marry them before- because he had. I suppose saying "no one else" would be more accurate and wouldn't have ruined your ending. It was cute though


Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks! When I originally wrote it, I hoped those reading the first part of the conversation would think...well, you probably know what I was going for. Heh. As for the "no one" reference, I don't think Buffy counts the Something Blue proposal as a real one, since they pretty much hated each other then and were under the influence of a spell. But you're right. I should've acknowledged it in some way. When I get a chance, I'll go back in and edit it. Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Second Verse

Awe, that was lovely!
Only a one shot? Cause you didn't set it 'completed'. But in that sense if you still want to write more it isn't finished yet :)
Looking forward to your other story.

Author's Response: Thank you! And whups! I thought I had marked it completed, but I guess I got sidetracked. Taken care of now, thanks.

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Second Verse

LOVE THE FIC, AND YOUR WRITING. PLEASE POST THE OTHER STORY SOON

Author's Response: You're so very kind! Thank you! It may be a little while before I start the more in-depth sequel. But in the meantime I'll be posting my WIP here starting this weekend, and I hope you'll like that one, too! Thanks again.

Reviewer: Joan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 12:56 pm Title: Second Verse

That was very, very sweet... a most satisfying ending.

Author's Response: I'm so pleased you found it so. Thank you!

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