Date: 04/08/2009 - 03:51 am Title: The Beginning
"Well that was rude!" lol Good ending.
Date: 12/06/2008 - 10:28 am Title: The Beginning
Please continue!!! This is such a great story! It cannot be finished. Please update soon!
Date: 10/13/2007 - 03:46 am Title: The Beginning
Please add more. I love the start of this one!
Author's Response: It's on my to do list... Promise!
Date: 07/07/2007 - 01:46 am Title: The Beginning
oh i wish u'd write more soon.
Date: 10/01/2006 - 05:17 pm Title: The Beginning
Interesting... I can't wait to find out more. I hope that's soon!!! :) :)
Date: 10/01/2006 - 02:49 pm Title: The Beginning
This was great, creative and very enjoyable. I loved your take on how vampires were created. The designation says completed but I hope you write more. I'd like to know more about Collette's son and Collette.
Date: 10/01/2006 - 01:41 pm Title: The Beginning
I think either there is a sequel or you marked it finished by mistake and there is more coming... right? I mean you cannot leave it like this! It is EVIL!
It is one of the best stories I have ever read and it is brilliant!
Date: 10/01/2006 - 12:52 pm Title: The Beginning
OK. Marking it as complete was an accident, right? Because it's not. It's a great first chapter though. I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 10/01/2006 - 11:32 am Title: The Beginning
This was really great I loved the explaination to the origian of the slayer. I would love to see this story continued. There are so many possibilities to be added to this story Please think about continuing it. Love it. Highly recommend
Date: 10/01/2006 - 04:59 am Title: The Beginning
This cannot be the end. I am so intrigue. Why must Buffy stay with Spike (besides the ovious Spsuffyness we all love to read). There is a story to be told and I would very much like to read it.
Date: 10/01/2006 - 01:32 am Title: The Beginning
good story but this cant be it
Date: 10/01/2006 - 01:30 am Title: The Beginning
Okay, please tell me you plan on writing more, 'cause I gotta say. I LOVE this. Very good. I sorta like this version of how the slayer came about than Joss's. More please!
Date: 10/01/2006 - 12:57 am Title: The Beginning
I like it and would love to read more! Especially about they meeting Jaeen!
Date: 10/01/2006 - 12:44 am Title: The Beginning
That was a very interesting take on the creation myth for Slayers and vampires. I liked it, very original. But I sincerely hope that isn't the end of the story. The archive lists it as complete, and I just can't see that as being the end? Will there be more in the story coming?
Date: 10/01/2006 - 12:19 am Title: The Beginning
freakin' loved it!...but please please please tell me that there will be more!!!
Date: 09/30/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: The Beginning
Ok, this is an amazing "beginning" of a story. You can't just leave it there, please. I noticed the story is marked as "completed".
I like the new twist on the beginning of the slayer. Thank you for sharing this, but I'll beg you again to continue the story.