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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2012 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Very sweet, liked it a lot. Could use editing, several grammar/punctuation/word problems to be cleaned up. Overall, very enjoyable!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I didn't realize I even had an unresponded to review for this story. Yes, I know it has some issues and I have been planning a read through to fix those up. I didn't have a beta when I first started writing. :) Thanks again for the review! I am so happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sam52 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2012 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 1

I just want to say thank you for the day that you gave me today! I feel like today has been the longest day of my life yet and I have to admit that I feel the only thing that helped me through it were the time breaks that I got and I was able to read this story. Truly amazing work!! I am absolutely enthralled with this story now and I have no doubt that this will be added to my bookmarks on my computer under "Fantastic Reads" so that I can read it over and over! Thank you so much and I can't wait to read more of your stories!!

Author's Response: Oh my goodness! What an absolutely wonderful review!!! You've now made MY day! :) This was my very first story and I've been slowly going thru it and fixing mistakes lately, so I am pleased to hear that you loved it so much. I think this glorious review might actually get my muse to do some writing later on tonight, so thanks!

Reviewer: riz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

I loved this story!! Thanks!!

Author's Response: No, thank you! LoL Seriously, thank you for reading the story and for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Zeitsu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2012 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Loved it u haf asked earlyer in the story about ur portrayal of chacters. I think it was great! Besides like u saud its au!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Great story. Loved it sooo much. Liked the way you left the ending so we could guess what the present was.

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks! I haven't gotten any reviews on this in a long time. :) Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for leaving a nice review!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 16

Well wouldn't that be an interesting picture in a magazine, hope there was no cameras. Again you force me to throw ice water on myself :D reading on xx.

Author's Response: Do I need to send vats of ice to your house to cool yourself down? LOL

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 15

That was hot, I'm off to go throw a bucket of ice water on myself :) Wish my house was like that one lol

Author's Response: I felt like taking a cold shower many times while writing this story! :) Glad to see Im not the only one that got all hot and bothered. LoL!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 14

Spike and Buffy are cute. Also Poor Buffy, she cant catch a break can she. Reading on xx

Author's Response: They are pretty cute! :) Buffy will catch a break eventually! Promise. Thanks!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 13

I think i like this version of Angel *I cannot remember if i said that already* Poor Buffy and riley should be killed and tortured and killed again. Thank God Spike is there and I don't like Harmony :D xx taking a break or my eyes will fall out.

Author's Response: Yep, you mentioned it earlier. I tend to be very lenient with Angel in most of my stories, where Riley is pretty much always an ass. Go figure. Could it have something to do with my severe distaste for him? Thanks for the review!!!!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

Stupid, asshole, selfish prick that should die very painfully and should be cut into incredibly slowly until he bleeds out and then should become alive again so it can be done to him again!!!! other then that the chapter was very well written. reading on xx

Author's Response: LoL! Thanks for the....colorful review!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter 11

HIT RILEY OVER THE HEAD WITH A DISH RACK!!!!! Stupid self involbed bastard!!!!! Yay Gunn is in it again!!!! and it's a shame that Spike wasn't called to be a security guard for the band. And now I have an image of Fred and Spike living happily ever after *hmm weird* anyway reading on xx

Author's Response: Riley gets what he deserves, I promise!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter 10

Yay Gunn *I also love Gunn so that was just a randomn comment* Good chapter and yay you introduced Anya. Stupid Riley should go and die in a small hole and then get ripped apart by a pack of wolves. Reading on xx

Author's Response: Gunn pretty much rocks. I didn't like him in the series at first, but how he was around Fred in the begining changed all that. Glad you're still liking the story!! Thanks for all the comments!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter 9

Ok now that is why you hit Riley over the head with table lamps, hell doesn't have to be a table lamp it can be a frying pan too. *Yes i think of too many different objects to hit Riley with* Reading on xx

Author's Response: A big fat iron skillet would cause a great deal of damage, huh?

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 11:21 am Title: Chapter 8

Buffy: No NO You're insane and stupid and i hate you!!!!
Riley: but..

Buffy then hits Riley over the head with a table lamp.

Other then that good chapter :D reading on xx


Author's Response: LMAO! Funny. Yeah, Buffy should hit Riley repeatedly about the face and chest....no, scratch that....she should run over him, reverse and do it again. :)

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter 7

Ok the image of a naked Riley is in my brain and I dont like it! I dont like it!!! in fact that particular image could kill me. Although I'm guessing the sex was highly unsatisfying. Reading on xx hopefully the image of a naked *gags* Riley wont even be in the fic again.

Author's Response: Yes, the imagine of naked Riley is enough to make anyone lose their cookies. Bleh! Of course, I was told about another genre of fanfic earlier that made me throw up in my mouth....SPILEY! Can you imagine?! Gross!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 11:02 am Title: Chapter 6

Yes hateful words were shared and Drusilla is outta there! Hehe i like Oz *nothing to do with the review I just felt like saying that* and i wonder who this rich individual will be. Reading on xx

Author's Response: I had a hard time writing Dru as a bitch, basically because I actually like her. *ducks in cover* I know that goes against most of the laws of Spuffy, but...she's awesome. Oz was always one of my absolute favs on the show, along with Tara and Anya....of course, we all know that Spike was my total fav.

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 10:55 am Title: Chapter 5

Alright that sends me off to a cold shower. that was Hot! hell i dont smoke but if someone offered me one I'd take it. Drusilla interupting was probably a good idea. reading on xx

Author's Response: I quit smoking 6 years ago and often find the craving for one sneaking up on me when reading fanfic; especially anything by dampersandspoons or IBE! Those two would have your loins set on fire just by reading their stories! LoL

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter 4

Well even though this fic is finished I hope that my reviewing will still get your muse going :D and I think it's impossible to not get weak in the knees when you have someone like Spike standing behind you! Oh i don't know if my review went through for this chapter but if it did I reviewed twice if not I still reviewed :) reading on xx

Author's Response: Muse is definitely getting a kick outta reading your wonderful reviews. Let's just hope it kicks her into the writing mode! I often find myself gazing longingly at youtube for inspiration, seeing all the Spike vids usually helps. Im so so so happy that you are reading this and loving it so much! Thanks a billion!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 09:52 am Title: Chapter 3

yay Spike makes an appearance. I hate Riley. I have nothing against you putting him in here but i just hate the man! Well I love Drusilla so I'll be more then happy to read about her :D Alright reading on xx

Author's Response: No worries, I absolutely fraggin hate Riley, too! You will start to notice a pattern with him and my stories if you continue to stick with me. And, Im glad you like Drusilla...cause I adore the crazy nutjob! Glad to know there are a few of us out there!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow Buffy's like me, I'm never on time for anything... Once I wasn't even on time for my own birthday party. I should have known that Faith wouldn't like Buffy. Yay Willow and Tara are in it! Oh and can I say I love you for putting Oz in :D Reading on xx

Author's Response: My sister and mother are both forever late! It's amazing that I manage to get anywhere on time, really. Faith will come around, eventually and I just can't have a story without Tara, she's one of my favs...along with Oz, even though I have a difficult time writing him! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start, I will definately read the whole thing *probably won't take a break from reading until I'm done* lol. It was a hard choice to pick from because all your fics look amazing from just the summary. I'm glad you made Angel nice because I've had enough of reading about him as a bastard :D I'm gonna go and read the rest of your fic now, xx

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see you've made your way over to read my stories! **cringes** Though, you had to go and pick my very first one, huh? It's a little rough around the edges, that's for sure. I hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 45

I think that the negative review you got was ridiculous, as you stated, it is AU and Riley always gave me the creeps. I think it is a great story, even though I don't like Buffy and Spike apart.

Author's Response: Thank you, Sharon. For some reason it really upset me, but after all the wonderful reviews stating otherwise that poured in I've gotten over it. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Amazing! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 10:39 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

that was awesome!!!! and yeah, i kind of got it that Buffy was pregnant with the "taunt stomach" and all. and awwww for Wesley and Fred. for dreams of what was...... and i finished all 46 chapters in one sitting!! w/o reading anything else! you did so great on this story. it's probably one of my favorites. hopefully i can read LC tonight. depends on how much there is and how tired i am. i'm so rockin' SERENITY!!!!! WOOOO!!!!!!


(i'm going to bed. peace gurlie! :o) )

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story, not to mention...being so wonderful with the giving of reviews! I loved hearing every single little thing you thought while reading all the story in one sitting (wow, I thought I was the only crazy one that did that). I will be eagerly awaiting your thoughts on Lose Control, even though they probably won't be as upbeat and cheery as these. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 10:29 am Title: Chapter 47

omg that was so great!!!! GIDDY FEST!!!! i'm so happy and i can't stop smiling *and i'm soooo tired*. that was awesome!!! Spike was 'sarcastic kiss my ass Spike' (was he WEARING jeans when Angel came to visit? cuz when you said he was "no shirt, no shoes, and jeans" i was picturing a totally starkers Spike walking around smoking and drinking, arguing with Angel. and it was a little disturbing......and hot.), Buffy was "cry waah waah Angel" Buffy and Cordy was the best. that was so her!!! i could totally picture her saying all that. i couldn't stop laughing! LAST CHAPTER!!!

Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked my first fic, was so nervous throughout this entire thing! :) I told you Cordy would be important to the story, didn't I?!?!

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