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Reviewer: AnneNeville Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2015 - 03:06 pm Title: chapter 1

I very much enjoyed your story! Thank you!

Reviewer: DeepBlueJoy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2014 - 10:19 pm Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this story... it was great fun and it fixed almost everything that didn't go right in either series. A bit too perfect in some ways, but fun regardless. I did like the Willy touch at the end.

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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2012 - 08:42 pm Title: Epilogue

Love the premise!

Reviewer: jackson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2011 - 07:13 pm Title: Epilogue

Great story. I am hoping you have already completed the sequel... I am really looking forward to it. Thanks for all the hard work.

Reviewer: yubi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2009 - 07:38 pm Title: Epilogue

great story! i really liked penny but seeing as she came from the 'real world' i kinda figured shed have to go back eventually -but i guess not. ive always wanted to see a sane dru and you created her, thx for the insight.

Reviewer: Genn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 04:55 am Title: chapter 2

Brilliant story idea, really well-written... it's about time the Scoobies got a psych eval from an objective viewer... :)
Also, your other stories are great as well, just so you know.

Reviewer: Schantelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 12:01 am Title: Epilogue

This was great! It was so nice to read a fic where the scoobies are nice to Spike. I loved the friendship between Spike and Xander!

Can't wait to read more of your work!

Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter 7

Aw I'm so glad to see Spike and Xander actually bonding. Yippee victory dance with them.

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Date: 01/13/2009 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter 5

I loved the ending of this chapter. The parallels between Nazi Germany and the Initiative, priceless and very true. Even made me realize an odd symbolism that Walsh was Blonde and blue-eyed with very German features...thats just my thinking now.

I liked that you tied in things that actually happened, that no one would take into consideration. For example the fact that Buffy DID rely on instinct with threatening Drusilla because of the love with Spike would get him to back down. Never saw it that way. Great job!

Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter 4

From what I've read so far, damn! I like it. It's finally the chance for us to get the 'Buffy stop being prejudice speech' with some true solid thought to it. This brainstorming and researching must have taken awhile and I applaud at your deliverance. It all makes sense, whether it's truly believed in occult studies or is just a twisted belief with the following of the Buffy culture. Great job.

But it wasn’t redemption that got him interested in helping…it was Liam’s attraction to a fifteen year old child.”
When the episode aired that showed Angel seeing Buffy for the first time right away I found that it was sort of....how to say in a pedophile manner, so thank you for pointing that out. It's about time!

Reviewer: Melvina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2008 - 11:46 pm Title: Epilogue

A Penny for Your - Most excellent story - that's my thought.

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: Epilogue

I realy love this story it's great perfect I love it.
Just one question about penny on who is the character based on or itš completely fiction person?
I realy love this story

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2007 - 04:32 pm Title: Epilogue

Honestly you are e a god I love your fics they are just perfect.I love the Penny person and I absolutely adore the way she sat everyone on their buts.A also like the "Egypt" Land. Absolutley adorable fic Just perfect.

Reviewer: Shelby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 06:27 pm Title: Epilogue

LMAO loved that last line. it was totally amazing. the story should be made into a movie. i love it. the twists and turns lol . and i love the pshycology and the prophicies ( sorry if i spelt anything wrong) again loved the story amazing =) love it ! =]

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 - 01:04 am Title: Epilogue

An interesting tale. I like that Drusilla was brought to work with the white hats. And bringing back Doyle was fabulous, but I think this story was at its best and absolutely brilliant when you wrote the letter toRiley from Harmony. That was spot on. Thanks

Reviewer: Squid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2007 - 07:10 pm Title: Epilogue

This was really good and really creative. I always really like your stories, but this one seemed even better than usual. I've never seen a story line like this, great job. I'm glad to know that their are some authors out there who are willing to go a different direction that normal.
A sequel could be really interesting - if you're up to it.
Again, great job.

Reviewer: Addy692002@aol.com Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 02:31 am Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed this story very much.

I must admit, it started off so painfully slowly that I almost gave up trying to read it... the psychoanalysis of the characters kind of bored me. *cringe* sorry... it felt somewhat fantasy-worldish and not really a very viable method of getting the characters to recognize their own faults. Most of them, I feel, wouldn't sit down and listen long enough to "cave" and see themselves in that kind of light.

All in all, the "Penny" character seemed somewhat superfluous, despite her being the catalyst for most of the story...

BUT - throughout the not-so-positive first impression I got of this story - it did compel me to keep reading. The plot was slightly small given that the story was 51 chapters long - I think most of the story was psychoanalyzing the past and future rather than concentrating on the present setting, but it did compel me nonetheless. I like the way the characters were portrayed for themselves - some of the interaction was off (It took them a VERY long time to accept Spike's character in the series - even through seeing all of his many good deeds and obvious love for Buffy.)

But the dialogue and what plot there was was interesting enough to hold my attention for 51 chapters, and I must applaud that.

Good job. :-)

Addy

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 03:30 am Title: Epilogue

Loved this fic! Will be looking forward to the sequel!

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter 4

Thank you so much for that last comment. Obviously being a fan of Spike, I've always said that Angel was never that "good" because a 200+ year old "man-pire" was crushing on a 15 year old valley girl.
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Spike doesn't count in that whole old man thing..cuz he's only like 150 and way hotter. *gg*

Anyway...thanks for writing about that point and ignoring my double standard!! :)

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 01:39 am Title: Epilogue

just read all 51 chapters. Absolutely loved it. You did a truly great job with the plot and characters. Looking forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: Epilogue

OH that was to good, and Willy at the end.
Can't wait for more.

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Date: 05/24/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 50

OH that was good, Spike was being an Angel. If there was danger in Sunnydale we just rush and not bother calling.

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Date: 05/24/2007 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 49

So Joyce and GIles are together and did she make her desion

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 - 06:28 pm Title: Epilogue

loved this and am really looking forward to the sequal. your work is wonderful, many thanks for sharing

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 - 06:19 pm Title: Epilogue

51
Hot mating scene. So the ‘first slayer’ or ‘immortal slayer’ was part of it. Heh heh and I never would have guessed that Willy was Penny’s date :)
I had fun reading this one :) You said in an A/N (at the BSV) that you would write a sequel once. Well if you do I’m looking forward to read :)

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