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Reviewer: Blushes_Deep Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: Risk It

Ok get Spike out and then blow that place up it is beyond evil! This is a diffent kinda story but your writing is very good and I keep hoping battered Spike will be ok and start to heal.
Excellent chapter I love your work :)

Reviewer: Bel Canto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2007 - 01:51 pm Title: Risk It

Spike has been so tortured but he seems to be responding to Buffy a little now. Very dark and twisty of a story but I'm addicted to it.
Pleasse more soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2007 - 01:48 pm Title: Risk It

Oh! Cliffhanger! I like thgis it's intense and different I hope to see more of it soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2007 - 01:44 pm Title: Risk It

Buffy blackmailed Willow to help her, cast the spell. Ant they have only one shot? Then all must go well, no errors allowed. OH! And it will be more dangerous then Willow thought before. Loved the glimpse of the old Spike (Buffy's hand).
Buffy will wipe the whole dimension? What will happen with the victims there? They would die too *is curious*.
Till next part

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2007 - 09:14 am Title: Risk It

wow, way to go, poor Spike i only hope they can fix him up. good on Willow to chance everything to help. looking forward to more

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2007 - 04:37 am Title: Risk It

I like Willow with the answers, reminds me of how Buffy, Willow and Xander started out plus Giles as a mentor. Seems that stolen slaves and stolen space and time match the greed and debauchery of the creators and inhabitants of this pocket dimension. Love this idea btw. Hope that Spike can overcome his years of abuse and start to retrieve some of his old self back. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2007 - 10:49 pm Title: Risk It

this is one of my favourite stories. I worry about Spike in every chapter, hoping he is going to be OK from now on. Please post again soon

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: Risk It

Wow, this story is good. You should have been a one of the writers for the show. Really. I feel so bad for Spike. And willow is one powerful person.

More as soon as possible please.

Reviewer: Yvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2007 - 01:34 pm Title: Games

Great story!! Please update soon.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 07:08 pm Title: Games

Cute moment where Buffy, Xander and Willow share an embarrassing situation. Hope that Spike will smell Buffy and trust that only she has her own unique smell to start to come out of his quarded catatonia. Thanks for the update - loved it!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 - 05:24 pm Title: Games

I just found this story and I love it! Poor Spike! Good thing Buffy found him. Hoping for an update soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 - 04:56 pm Title: Games

Mmm I wonder what Danaia has in mind now, with the gateway.
Spike has several years of torture behind him. It's not easy for him to trust Buffy that this isn't another lie, that she is real. I'm not sure either if he knows that it is because of what Buffy did that he is there now. Ah, are the other demons colder (body temperature) so that there is indeed a difference between them and Buffy, a human being? That could show Spike that Buffy is real.
The bathing scene when Xander and Willow acame in was fun :)

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 - 03:21 am Title: Games

absolutely hilarious that xander and willow saw buffy naked! humor in a serious story, very good combo! i can't wait to read more! please update soon?

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 - 12:00 am Title: Games

Its nice to see a powerful but sweet Willow for once. At least that's what I hope she is.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 - 09:36 pm Title: Games

Great update! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 - 08:05 pm Title: Games

oh i feel so sorry for Spike, but i really like this fic!! Its really good, I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: Need

Me? I'm glad that Buffy's first thought wasn't Spike's sold, it was about him. So there is hope for the stones? Then the vampires including Spike could go back indeed :) If hey get help.
Looking forward to it.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2007 - 01:24 am Title: Need

Just caught up on the last two chapters and wanted to say that they are great!

Looking forward to seeing Willow at work...

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 11:30 pm Title: Need

GREAT UPDATE BUT I'M WITH SCARYCOUSE , ENUFF GORY DETAILS AND GET HIM OUT OF THERE.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 11:04 pm Title: Need

I love this story but you're giving me nightmares-please no more horror descriptions of Spikes torture and just get him out of there

Reviewer: Maria Simone Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 10:29 pm Title: Need

Hi twilightchild, I've followed the story from the beginning but haven't made any reviews before now. On that note I would like to apologise for not having sent my praise before!
It’s a fantastic story, the continuously new twist that you introduce in almost every new chapter, which places it among my current favourites!
I'm especially looking forward to see who Spike blames for being there! :-) If he perhaps thinks that Buffy had anything to do with it - even if he didn't in the beginning he might have been confused late and thought she did. Or perhaps he doesn’t remember all from his time in Sunnydale. Who will he feel safe with (Buffy, Xander, Danaia, Dawn, Willow, etc.). I'm practically checking for updates on a daily basis and hope that this will not be one of those really good stories that for some strange reason as an UNF, which is just so wrong when authors do that!
Therefore, I hope you will listen to you fans and receive the praise you have earned. Keep up the good work and let's see some more chapters. :-)
Best regards, Maria

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 10:13 pm Title: Need

Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Need

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Inara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 07:39 pm Title: Need

So sad, poor poor Spike... update soon!

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 07:26 pm Title: Need

Poor tortured Spike. Glad they are bringing in big gun WIllow - this should get really sparky!

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