Date: 10/20/2007 - 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
OOoohooo! Wat's going to happen next!!!
Date: 03/07/2007 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter 7
good update
Date: 03/01/2007 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Spike has to be careful with Angel. He isn't to trust even now, when he still things Spike is one of them.
Poor Buffy, no wonder she has nightmares.
Date: 03/01/2007 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 7
Was it Parker that was watching him? I definitely think Spike should be cautious of him. Great update. More please.
Date: 03/01/2007 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 02/28/2007 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
i loved it! i don't care for parker, but then again, who does? can't wait to read more! please update soon?!
Date: 02/28/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
He already likes her. Update soon please!
Date: 02/28/2007 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh I love it can't wait to see what he finds.
Date: 02/28/2007 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
Great update ...I wonder is it Parker watching and if it is what he's going to try doing ....
Date: 02/25/2007 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great update! Loved it! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 02/25/2007 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter 6
Then Spike has indeed to see that Buffy gets food too. That could has gone wrong, he didn't know toll Parker hinted it. Buffy is very brave at the moment- I hope to that she can stay strong.
Date: 02/25/2007 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 6
another fantastic update
Date: 02/25/2007 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 6
another fantastic update
Date: 02/24/2007 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
I hope she makes it! Update soon please!
Date: 02/24/2007 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Like your story a lot, but the teacher in just can't stay quiet. Buffy should say "they want to break me" not "brake." Break is the present tense of broken. Brakes are something you find on a car. Otherwise, loved it.
Date: 02/24/2007 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved this chapter. I'm glad Buffy is so strong. More please.
Date: 02/24/2007 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really like your story, especially the interaction between Spike and Buffy. Looking forward to more!
As for the french sentences, there are a few mistakes
Date: 02/24/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
So Buffy is not going to let them break her, good for her.
Date: 02/23/2007 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
No chance then contacting someone for Spike. Clever to ask for a dictionary. Hehe and Parker isn't pleased now. Spike should have hit harder ;-)
Date: 02/23/2007 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have to admit that this is already a bit darker than I usually like. I passed it over several times for that reason, scared off by your warnings. But something about it caught my eye, and here I am. Even though it is so dark, I find myself liking it. I am glad that Spike is not going to be evil in this fic. If he was, I probably couldn't handle it. The fact that he already generally cares about her helps alot. I am concerned though about how he is going to keep fooling all the evil men and still be able to do enough to help all the girls. I am looking forward to more of this.
Date: 02/22/2007 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Glad Spike is the only one to have access to Buffy. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 02/22/2007 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter 5
good update
Date: 02/22/2007 - 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5
No I would say that Spike cares about her more that Parker.
Date: 02/22/2007 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 5
this story is great, really. fab concept behind it.
I think you should think about getting a beta to make it even better, they'll space it all out and fix the grammar, capital letters etc...
If you just ask for one down the bottom of the next chapter someone will respond, I'm sure.
Good luck : ))
Date: 02/22/2007 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 5
How's he gonna get Buffy out of there? Update soon please!