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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2014 - 09:56 am Title: Epilogue

Very sweet, but the writing needs polish.

Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Two

i really tried to read this, but this is as far as i could get. your writing needs a lot of work. there's too many mistakes and it's a bit too out of character for me. you said you had a beta, but i think you need another one. just a suggestion.

Author's Response: Thanks for noticing I'd posted the wrong chapters. I'm working my way through them fixing up the mistakes it's my fault not Eve's she's a great beta.... Thanks for leaving a review

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:33 am Title: Epilogue

Oh I love it.

Author's Response: Um Just answered this see above....

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:26 am Title: Chapter Three

Oh I love it

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review at each chapter ....I'm glad you liked it I should start reposting it's sequel by the end of the week.... Look out for it, it's called A Sire's Right

Reviewer: that person Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:24 am Title: Epilogue

a little out of character...but good ^_^

Author's Response: Glad you liked reading this, yes they are a little out of character but they have all had some serious things to deal with so a little ley way is called for thanks for leaving a review

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter Two

He asked her right infront for Angel that was brave.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:01 am Title: Chapter One

Oh I love this, I'm not sure if I read it before or not.

Author's Response: you may have I've just reposted it today after I've done a bit of tweaking to it...Thanks for your review....

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